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    LadyG
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    @c-jay nice story .

    Sorry I didn’t start the story with guys, ride on anyway.

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    A Girl Like Amanda

    Betrayed.

    Season 3

    Episode 7.

    Jidenna felt uneasy ever since the day Amanda left the village.
    He has been having this recurring nightmares where a gun is placed on Amanda’s head and a feminine voice will speak in tears “Amanda I’m going to take away everything you ever loved and cherish as you took away my happiness.” Then she would pull the trigger, the bullet splarreting her brain inside her fathers’ compound and he would be powerless to help her.

    But today, it felt worse as real. Something wasn’t right and he couldn’t understand.

    With that, he decided to go see Victor in his house.

    Reaching Victor’s house, the door was locked and he thought about going to his shop. With that, he walked all the way to Victor’s shop. Getting there, he saw Favour and Victor talking and laughing whilst drinking a bottle of maltina and taking a bite of their gala each. He definitely was happy that both of them were okay, after that Pius incident, the police were invited and Abel and his boys were arrested and after much questioning, Abel and his gang refused to mention anyone’s name even though Inspector Awaji was informed that it wasn’t only his group that was involved in the gun fight. When questioned about Pius death. Abel simply said, “Oh am not the way that killed him, I wish I did but she took him.”
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    Gunner (Alexis) slowly walked up to the pavement. He couldn’t wait for Amanda and Mike to join him. The men he trailed behind had drove into this building, and he couldn’t deny that it was a big mansion, furnished with taste. On a second thought, he decided to wait for them.

    He just went round the gigantic compound, sneaking and hiding from the boys that are guarding the mansion.
    After ten minutes he, got a message from Mike ‘where the hell are you man’ he read and sighs.
    ‘Glad you didn’t call man, am in the building across the street where my car is parked. The place is heavily guarded by Potiphar’s ex boys’ he sent the message, he peeped at the boys that was smoking marijuana and chatting and laughing unaware of Gunner’s presence.

    ‘Good, we’re coming in through the backyard, clear a path’ he reads. “Michael always have me to do the dirty work. Taking out a bowie knife, he picks a stone and threw at the far side of the building distracting the boys for a few seconds, he throws his knife to one of the boy’s chest, he immediately drops dead and before the other two could realized what’s happening, he dashed towards one and snapped his neck. The last guy tried to run but gunner retract his knife from the lifeless. body and and throw at the last guy before he could notify anybody. He got rid of the bodies and that’s when Mike and Amanda jumped in.

    “Oh, nice of you to show up to the party.” Gunner said taking a deep breath.

    “Oh, you had guests.” Michael smiled.

    “It’s good to see you.” Gunner walked up to Amanda and surprisingly hugged her.

    “Are you done?” Michael interrupted the both of them.

    “Where do we start from?” Amanda asked as soon as Gunner broke the hug.

    “I think they’d be inside.” He said, not waiting for a reply, he started moving towards the front yard, carefully hiding in the shadows, not to be spotted out by anyone. Amanda followed behind him while Michael followed suit also.

    “Shall we knock?” Michael asked as soon as they got to the front door.

    “Be my guest.” That was all Gunner could say as he gave way for Michael to pass through.

    Seeing the hesitation, Amanda swiftly and powerfully kicked down the door and walked in immediately, her gun leading the way, she was done waiting. Today she and Evelyn settles their score permanently.

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    Dãñîél wírê
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    This story take longer oo

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    I had forgotten about this story…ride on

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    A Girl Like Amanda

    Betrayed

    Season 3

    Episode 8

    The Story Of Evelyn James.

    After Potiphar met butterfly under the breach, they began a romantic relationship. He never got to see his mom again till her death. And with the guidance of E-trigger they got involved in robbing politicians and rich men.

    At the age of 17 Lanre (Potiphar) killed a police officer that was escorting a man to the bank. Butterfly wasn’t happy about it. She tried to talk to Lanre about it, he apologized and she forgave him. Later that night, they had sëx under the bridge, disflowering Edna (Butterfly). It wasn’t what Edna had planned and she regretted it. Two years later, in a bank heist, the leader of the robbery group, E-trigger was shot and killed in a shootout, Alabama became in charge of the Under bridge boys. Lanre and Edna decided to leave the group and start a business with the money they’d saved during their crime days. They opened a grocery store and on the day of their wedding, Alabama showed up and shot Edna in rage.

    Edna survived and Lanre decided to go back into the streets. He needed to kill Alabama and having his own boys is what he planned to do. Edna recovered and told him to let go of the hate.

    “Lanre forget about Alabama, he isn’t worth it. Let’s just leave Lagos and go somewhere else. Please.” She told him one day.

    “Butterfly, I can’t help it, he had the mind to try to kill you, he shot you.” Potiphar angrily said, not trying to see reasons with Edna.

    “Am still alive, am I not?” She asked him a direct question which he simply nodded his head.

    “You are alive and that’s why I won’t rest till any threat to your life is terminated from the surface of the earth. I swear to you.” He swore in deep breaths.

    “We’ve left this life three years ago because it wasn’t profitable for our unborn children. I don’t think it’s a good idea to carry weapon again when we promised to leave this life behind.” Edna hugged him sobbing.

    He was touched by her love and tears but he couldn’t change his mind. Alabama almost took her away from him and he won’t stand by and let him go away with it. “Am sorry my love, I wish I don’t have to do this but…”

    “If you can’t do it for me, do it for our unborn baby.” She held his hand and directed it to her stomach and he felt a bump.

    “You’re pregnant?” He couldn’t even hear his own voice, she nodded smiling, hoping the pregnancy would change his mind but it didn’t.

    “How long?” He had asked.

    “Three months now.” She said still holding his hand.

    “Good, now I’ll have more reason to do what I’ll have to do to keep you and my baby safe. I’m doing this for you babe, for our future.” He tried to convince her.

    But she tilted her head sideways. “Then we won’t be in your future if you are going to do this.” She let go of his hand and climbed the bed, she slept in pain. Lanre slept beside her, buried in his own thought.

    The next morning, he woke up with no sign of Edna, her clothes, shoes and all her belongings were gone. That day he stayed indoors. “It’s too late now.” He told himself.

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    Prosper Yeboah
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    Carry on!!!

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    this is serious

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    wow this story is getting tougher

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