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    Anneko (kenna)Anneko (kenna)
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    all that glitters

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    Bring it on

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    Anneko (kenna)Anneko (kenna)
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    Episode 1

    His eyes felt heavy
    He wondered how he got here
    Here?
    Where exactly was here
    It took some time before Muna realised he was still in the
    Club
    **ooh right DRE asked me
    To come with him**
    **but I feel Dizzy**

    “Why”

    He didn’t even know when he said “why” out loud
    The barman looked shocked at him and said

    “Well you don’t have to tell me …why you suddenly getting so defensive”

    It seems the barman had inquired about the necklace Muna was wearing and wanted to know
    Where he could find
    His size cuz of his
    Head or something

    Muna realising his mistake

    “sorry”..”not you”..its ..

    He stammered

    “..erhm ,you know what never mind”

    Muna got down from his seat at the bar and left…
    But while fumbling
    Thru the club his eyes were
    Roaming the entire place
    For the girl who offered to
    Buy him a drink

    **she must have slipped something in my cup while I was distracted**

    “D--n it”

    He cursed out loud

    **I’ve got a bone to pick with her..
    If she was looking to get laid she shud
    Have found a perve
    Not throwing herself
    On me**

    After searching and searching…
    Muna gave up

    *perhaps she already left**

    He thought to himself

    **I better head home
    before people notice my intoxicated state**

    Muna started for the exit ..
    Using the backdoor of the club(CLUBMATE)As it was called
    Its the same door he and dre used to gettiNg in
    **where the heck is DRE**

    **he forced me out with him today and now he just bailed, leaving me by myself**

    **Gosh he always does this**

    **he probably left with on One of this club girls to a hotel**

    One?..if not two

    He managed to reach the back exit.
    ..the back door was the easiest way He and DRE could get in to the biuldin
    Without the security gishing
    Them out as minors who
    Had not even reached
    18yet… Dre,,,was just 17 and
    He muna was barely sixteen
    But from their physical
    Appearance they could easily
    Pass of as twenty five year olds
    He left the club building and
    Headed straight home
    He was still feeling dizzy from
    The effect of the drugs but he
    Managed t To drag himself all the way to his streets area.
    .
    It was a cold night
    He tugged tightly his baseball
    Cap

    **good thing I always wear it**

    He continued his trek down the road ..
    The streets of jos were busier than usual
    And its half past ten now
    When he reached the last corner that leads directly
    To his house..
    Billz was already running
    Down
    To greet him .
    Billz was an injured puppy he
    Rescued from some street thugs
    Who wanted to use him
    For some fun games
    Although he got a good
    Thrashing at that tym
    He managed to get the dog
    Away from their clutches
    That was about two years ago
    Imagine a 14 year old kid going up against hardened
    Hoodsters…
    Sure when he got home the
    Old man tended to his injuries
    But gave him a long lecture
    about meekness and being
    Careful
    He patted bills on the head

    “Hey boy…how was ur day”
    “Hope you r not too hungry sha..there’s no food in the house”
    “And I was to drunk to buy you anything on my way home”

    He stood up from petting bills and aproache

    His doorstep,,
    He took out his keys,, unlocked and got in
    With billz following closely
    Behind

    “Gosh no light”

    He reached for his phone at his pocket

    **huh**

    It was empty

    “What wher…where’s my phone”

    He kept searching for it frantically

    Before he realised

    **of course**

    Back at the club
    That girl was acting drunk
    She pretended to trip and fall
    But he caught her

    “So she was a pick pocket”

    He said aloud

    **I should hav known, and she
    Looked so young**
    **what is a girl her age doing
    In a place like that**

    Muna almost laughed at his words

    **geez what is a guy of my own age doing in a place like
    That**

    He grunted,,and headed straight for his room
    Nothing to eat tonight
    He hardly eats at night
    Anymore
    He’s been like this ever since
    The old man died

    He went straight for his bed and dumped his heavy body
    Flat on the mattress

    He breathed a sigh of relief

    **sleep at last**

    He thought

    After a few seconds of deep breathing in and out
    He formed his hands to a fist
    And started knocking himself
    Saying the words out loud

    “Never Follow Dre…To the club…if you’re sure…He is high on some cheap weed”

    **ouch**
    “I’ll surely have a headache tomorrow”

    He was tired,he yawned out loud

    Bills who’s been watching him the entire tym did the same
    And yawned
    Muna was amused

    “Lol billz wassup nw”
    I bet you’re tired too right don’t
    Worry…tomorrow I’ll find you
    A niced canned meal
    For taking care of the house while I was out”

    As if the dog understood
    It wagged its tail and started
    Breathing heavily
    Muna smiled

    “Good boy”
    “Let’s just get some sleep for now,,tomorrow is Monday”
    “Need to be up and ready for
    School”

    He thought inwards
    **I’m sure Mr Samson will be about looking for something to pin on me and the other guyz**
    **well we will do our best to avoid him**

    Muna closed his eyes for a while then opened them again

    “But seriously what the heck happened to Dre”
    **that freak**
    **he better not get himself into any trouble**

    His hands were dangling from From the bed and he was gently stroking
    Billz who laid quietly on the floor
    He yawned again and closed
    His eyes one more tym
    This time the sleep didn’t
    Need a second invitation
    He drifted off!

    ***************””*********
    Something poked his nose
    **what the heck is that**
    He tried to open his eyes but
    They fell shut
    It poked him again
    This time harder than before
    **blast**
    **seriously wats that**

    He opened his eyes almost fully but the bright morning light made him squint
    He could see a figure in front of him now
    “Oyibo ,,wake up you sleepyhead”

    **wait that sounds like Mike’s voice**
    **but how did mike get into…**

    He jumped up with a start
    “Mike!!”
    He screamed

    “How the heck did you get in here”

    The tall dark figure just stood smiling sheepishly at him
    Mike just turned around went straight to his kitchen to find something to eat

    “U better get ready for school instead of trying to figure out how I broke into your house Again”

    He stressed emphasis on the “Again”

    “As if that amateur door of yours can hold me back”

    Muna was startled but all the same breaking into places was Mike’s specialty
    He sleepily asked
    “What time is it”..

    Mike replied from the kitchen
    , obviously stuffing himself
    “I don’t know ,,my wristwatch is slow, check your phone now”

    “I lost my phone”

    “What”

    Mike peered from the kitchen
    “How come”

    “Guy long story” muna stretched. ,hoping to get
    Some more little sleep
    Mike appeared from the kitchen with bread in hand and a full mouth

    “See this one o,,you r still on bed”
    “Have you forgotten today is
    Monday,,,,,inspection,,,,,Mr Samson is on roll call duty”

    Muna opened his eyes wide!!

    “Whaaaaat”

    He jumped up from bed ran to the bathroom like a madman
    All this tym he didn’t even notice that mike was all
    In his school uniform
    Mike was just giggling

    “Don’t worry bro,,,we’re only like 30 mins late”

    How the hell shouldn’t he be worried
    Muna just kept cursing himself, mike,,and especially
    Mr Samson
    As if they were the cause for His late ness
    He fumbled around in the
    Bathroom
    For a while
    Mike just kept chuckling
    Moved towards the door and called out

    “Meet me outside when u r done !!”
    With one last laugh
    He stepped outside.

    with lightning speed muna dashed out of the bathroom**
    **hmn bathing in less than two mins**

    Who cares he always looks fresh even without a bath
    It was one of the advantages
    Of being biracial
    He sped into his room
    Took out his half ironed
    Uniform
    Forced himself into it
    **comb ,comb**
    Where’s my comb
    His hair was still wet and curled up cuz of the water
    **geez no comb**
    **ill just use my hand**

    He tried his best to straighten the wet locks in his hair
    **D--n .. I should have gone
    To the barber shop by now**

    No time to worry about hair grabbed his tie rolled it on his
    Neck like a Fulani
    Picked up his bag
    And ran towards the door
    He stopped short

    “Aargh*

    **I forgot my blazers**

    He went back inside all this while cursing and grumbling under his breath

    **why can’t we ever change
    This school uniform**

    He grabbed the coat and hurried back outside
    Once outside he made sure
    Bills secret passageway was
    Open then he locked the door
    He could see mike down the road playing with some little kids tiny bicycle

    He hurried off to him

    “Oh muna you’re done “?
    “So quick”

    Trying to steady himself on the bycicle that could barely hold him

    Muna moved toward s
    Him and grabbed
    Him off
    “Come on come down before you spoil their bike”
    Mike was displeased with
    Muna for ruining his fun
    But he just kept dragging him on
    “We’re late and you’re still foolin around with children”

    Mike raised an eyebrow
    “And yet I was the one who
    Snoozed you up”

    Muna didn’t reply

    “Let’s just get to school as soon as possible”

    They walked down the street increasing their pace as they left

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    Anneko (kenna)Anneko (kenna)
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    hope you r tuned…episode two incoming

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    nice one. bring it on

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