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    Kingsheddy
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    This is the story of a Felix McLean seeking vengeance for his family murder, he was sent abroad by his father friend to sharpen his skills and he came back driven by vengeance along the way, he picked up a couple of friends.

    This is a story of deceit and betrayal and remember things are not always what they seem.

    How far his willing to go, find out in this story.

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    Commotion everywhere, people running helter skelter as unknown mask men were shooting sporadically in the air, killing as many as they saw on their way and suddenly the gate of a well known human right activist crashed as the men use a dynamite to blow-up the gate, killing the gate man at his duty post .

    Two men stood watch while five men proceeded to the green painted duplex, they forced the door open, come out, come out wherever you are said the leader.
    Fez and Cruz go up the stairs and find him, yes boss they retorted then proceeded.

    Fez and Cruz searched all the rooms but couldn’t find a single soul then they heard a sneeze from the toilet direction of the close to the stair, Cruz go check there out, fez said almost in whispers, Cruz proceed with caution there and gently opened the door and he found Mr john McLean children.

    Look what we got here, the boss said as he saw fez and Cruz proceeding down with Five of john McLean . Come-out wherever you are hiding Mr John McLean at the count of five or am gonna blow their heads, 1,2,3… am coming Mr john McLean shouted with him and his wife coming from a secret room.

    I thought you weren’t going to come-out the leader said, you we
    Were warned but you chose to turn deaf ears, I am sorry I… It is too late the leader interrupted him,
    ferrions take them outside in a straight line and shoot them, john McLean wives and children could be seen weeping, please don’t I beg of you, even if you have too, spare my wife and children.

    I was ordered to completely annihilate your family from this earth, we have even kill all your relatives the leader added.

    Ferrions match them outside and kill them, Mr john McLean family and he were matched outside in a Straight line and the ferrions shot at them sporadically, leaving all of them dead.

    Mission accomplished, the leader said putting his phone back in his pocket and removed his mask, revealing his thick beard, he then entered a black van with the ferrions, then zoomed off but little did they know that one of Mr john McLean children was hiding inside a cupboard in the kitchen and watched everything play out.

    In the van , boss this mission was a blast, I bet we will be paid a lot, Cruz said, yeah I know but where did fez say he was going again asked the boss, he said he want to see the house in ash since you intrusted us to burn the house down , Cruz responded,

    He better be careful, cos if the police get hold of him, he would kiss the earth good bye, boys we are going to celebrate big this night for finally our enemy is out of the way for good,

    Ye, we are free the ferrions cheered joyfully, ferrions have received the alert and guess worth, the leader asked, he gave us sixty million naira, he added. Woah that huge, we are now millionaires, Cruz said.yes we are but you all shouldn’t forget, we still got a lot work the boss said looking at them sternly.

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    At what cost(Episode 2)

    Breaking news :150 people confirmed dead including popular human right activist Mr john McLean and family in GRA Lagos following the attack by unknown gunmen, the Inspector general of police as this to say……

    The television was switched of by a middle aged man wearing an agbada and a cap in an office with a functioning air conditioner, with a large brown. table with seven chairs, This calls for a celebration, we have finally gotten rid of that pest he said,Yes senator badmus victory is finally ours replied a man clad in an Italian suit, I just pity his innocent wife and children a man clad in a military uniform .

    Well it is their fate general adio, chief badmus said,and why did the ferrions have to kill innocent souls along with that stubborn fly asked Mr bassey. If they had killed only Mr john McLean and family, people will know it a clear state of assassination and besides people will suspect us for we all had issues with him the general answered,

    Hmmm now I understand, but I still feel for those innocent souls who lost their lives, mr bassey said shaking in head in remorse
    As long you on this earth, you are not innocent and besides it was their fate, the general chipped in,
    Let me call the others for the next line of action to be taken, senator bassey said.
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    Meanwhile , Mr john McLean friend rushed with his car to his friend apartment after hearing the sad news, how can Mr john McLean just returned to nigeria yesterday and he was killed today, this attack on GRA was specific, he thought to himself while driving.

    On his way to the McLean house he saw a boy he recognize, then he slowly brought the car to an halt.

    Felix, is that you,he asked

    Yes Sir, it is I, the boy said sobbing

    I saw on TV what happened to your family, can you tell more, he asked signalling the boy should enter his car

    Felix narrated all what he saw and heard to Mr johnson including his narrow escape from the burnt house,

    Those ruthless savages, I will make sure they pay,so will you recognize don’t worry kiddo,you will live with me
    For now and make sure you don’t tell anyhow you meet you are john McLean son if not you are a goner, am I understood , the boy nodded in reply, that a good boy. Mr johnson took the boy in his car and headed to his home.
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    Months later Mr johnson decided to send Felix abroad for schooling and training.

    Felix don’t forget what you are going there for, please be serious and take your training programs seriously, come to nigeria as man,
    Mr johnson told Felix, I won’t disappoint sir, I will come back and take my revenge, Felix replied and headed straight to the airplane

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    Seated

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    Carry on

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    Dis story is going to be very interesting…
    I can’t wait for DAT sweet revenge…
    Anyways,dos who innocently lost their lives shd have eternal rest!!!

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