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    Prologue:

    i have never believed in fairytales or magic, i’ve
    always thought some were born with good
    fortunes while others aint. Guess am on the list
    of those with bad luck……

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    EPISODE 1

    ******MORNING*******

    sweedieeee!!!! Is time for school, your late
    already. Mum’s voice flew into my ears, i did
    a little
    stretch looking at the wall clock its 8.03am
    already.

    What!!!! I exclaimed, got up as
    quick as possible, bumped into the
    shower and was out in less than a minute, i
    didnt even used the mouth wash, i grabbed ma
    bags and eye lenses kissed my mum goodbye
    and then hit the road.

    Well my name is desire lance, a 15 years old
    kid who lives in greenville. My school
    greenville high was just down the road. My
    mum always thougth i was a dull kid, but
    heeey i just hated my school, i got bullied
    every single day, i never really saw myself as
    lucky but as a kid, have got really big dreams.

    Well atleast i didnt realize what big dreams
    meant but as much as i would love to be a
    popular don juan who knows how to do a
    couple of things, i think i just wanna be that
    person nobody sees(invisible). And thats
    because things always gets weird around
    me……..

    Stay tuned as i take u farther into my lifes
    adventures

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    EPISODE 2

    Finally got to school in such a hurry
    Oh….my God not again i forgot my lens again!
    **** the doctor was clear when he said you
    want to see clearly, you’d be needing those
    lenses***

    I thought to my self, things cant get any be
    worst than it already is can it?….
    Before i forget am a high school finalist. I got
    to my class, shocked to see mrs Queen our
    English tutor already in class. I
    thought of going back home, wouldn’t want to
    start my day with troubles but there’s this part
    of me that refused to back down
    “wheeew” like a wind i almost flew in when
    she turned yelling my name Desire!!!!! What
    the hell
    do you think your doing???

    Omg!! I frozed as i watch my own heart sink.
    This time all attention was on me, i could only
    wish i had shells to crawl into. Mrs Queen in
    her ever harsh tune congratulation boy you
    just doubled your punishment, now go back to
    your sit your gonna get what you
    deserve right after my class. To say i was
    scared would be total understatement.

    Every single kid kept laughing like they just
    witness a real life hilarious scene.

    as usual, i guess am already used to this
    embarrassment, i heard people call names like
    clown,
    nerd, douchbag etc, all the time. But those
    ain’t new to me because i was beginning to
    think it was normal for me.

    Finally the she devil finished
    teaching and was ready to sentence me to
    maybe 100years of shame or a thousand? Just
    couldnt get any worst.

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    EPISODE 3

    *******THE SENTENCE********

    I was tied to pools stake as usual but this time
    every kid in my class threw water balls at me,
    i just stared into an open space feeling angry,
    hurt, hated, different.

    Then it dawned on me, it doesnt matter how
    bad i feel, i still have to keep my emotions in
    check. I was begining to doubt if i had any
    pride at all

    *******FLASHBACK********
    DEAR DIARY MUM ALWAYS SAID AM SOON
    GONNA BE A MAN, JUST LIKE MY DAD. I
    WONDER WHAT
    MY 1ST YEAR IN HIGH WOULD BE, WOOOW!!
    ITS SO GONNA BE FUN….. ATLEAST AM SURE
    OF IT I THOUGHT TO MY SELF.

    My week went smooth and i
    thought my high school years would be
    remarkably awesome, thought i would raise
    my shoulders high and say am now
    a man but as time flew by i got bullied by my
    class mate who claims am not supposed to be
    in their school and then i found myself
    gradually becoming more
    introverted, shy, timid, soft hearted kid with
    inferiority complex well i wont fail to
    mention i was given the name
    Greenville’s clown.

    ***********************
    while the balls was thrown at me i thought
    about my life in greenville then i admitted to
    myself i had no pride left in me.

    Finally my punishment was over, i was really
    soaked with water but somrhow the pains my
    heart felt was expressed on my face and i
    guess it only made me look funnier cos
    everyone got to laugh like they were in the
    movies.

    I got to the bathroom to clean myself up,
    looking into the mirror all i saw was a broken
    kid i just grabbed my bags and ran home.

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    EPISODE 4

    I got home ran passed my dad who just stared
    like hey whats wrong with that kid.

    *********MY FAMILY*********

    My dad a medical proffessioner/counsellor
    who spent most of his time on road trips,
    while mum was an event planner, other than
    that she
    was always invited to talk shows like
    relationships, parents and kids issues in
    general while my big
    sis…. Kourtney studies law in college and then
    ofcourse me.

    *********DAD***********

    Honey whats wrong with that kid he just ran
    passed me into his room without a word.
    Mum: uhmm keith have been trying to tell you
    but you’ve been a little busy lately.

    Ever since he started high school he’s been
    acting all weird plus he’s never gotten good
    grade i think he needs a father and son chat.
    Dad: Annie am gonna try but you know that
    kid has never taken my advice seriously i
    think kourtney could be of help.

    Mum: alright then am calling her right away.
    I remained locked up in my room for that day,
    who cares about food this time have had just
    enough of those bullies, i just couldnt take it
    anymore, those were the last word i thought of
    before sleeping.

    I was awaken by the constant banging on my
    door, hmmm i guess this person doesnt want
    to give up. I stood up groaning like i
    was having the worst hangover of my life, i
    dragged my self to the door with blurry eyes.
    OOO MY GOODNESS!!!!!!

    KOURTNEY!!!! I yelled abit seeing my big sis
    standing at my door with her ever pretty smile,
    just then i fell into her arms and that was the
    last thing i remembered.

    She held him in her arms as she called out for
    her parent, who rushed upstairs, while dad
    bundled me into his car.

    I woke again seeing a really bright fluorescent
    lights, so bright that i kept trying to see for
    sometime but my eyes were hurting and
    blurry, finally i could make out images of my
    sis and images of a few individuals in white
    until it dawned on me i was at the hospital.

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    EPISODE 5

    Finally i could see abit clearly, although still
    blurry cos i wasnt having my lenses on.
    Kourtney!! I thought excitedly as i tried sitting
    up but my head ached so bad i couldnt help
    but scream.
    Ouccch!!!!

    Which caught her attention. Dee your awake!
    Just relax ok am right here. That was when
    i realised i was on drip, i really wanted to hug
    her and cry over her shoulder, but right now
    all i
    could do was let out a painful smile.

    ********kourtney*********

    i just came back from school early this
    morning after dad called last night with a tone
    that seems like theres an emergency. I
    got home walked straight to dee’s
    room, i smiled to myself with the
    thought of how happy he’s gonna be on seeing
    me. I knew he missed me alot like i did to,
    then he passed out in my arms.

    And now here’s my dee looking very fragile,
    whatever happened he must has been hurt so
    bad i really cant stand seeing him hurt she
    finally let out. I know its kinda hard but you
    have to get better.
    I saw a drop of tears from her right eye and all
    i did was nod.

    ******MY PARENTS*******

    DOCTOR: I suppose you are mr and mrs lance,
    well there’s actually nothing physical wrong
    with your son

    MUM: *smiling* i guess my boy is perfectly
    alright?

    DOCTOR: Actually from our diagnoses your
    son is suffering a very high level of emotional
    stress issues if not attended to can result into
    a psychotic
    break down.

    DAD: What!!!

    DOCTOR: Yes he’s body system just couldnt
    take it any longer, it shuts down, which
    resulted to fainting and the coma state he’s in.
    Not to worry he’d be alright but then he has to
    be kept away from being worried about the
    past, and if he could be happy for atleast
    3months, that way whatever form of emotional
    stress he’s going through, would have reduced
    effect.

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