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    senator danielsenator daniel
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    bring it on

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    Waiting.

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    ~BLIND REVENGE(battle of the gods)
    ~written by
    ~Destiny Focusboy
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    Episode 1
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    Everywhere was dark and silent, only the
    chirping of the birds and the creaking of the
    insects could be heard in the lonely forest of
    Utah located in a Rome.
    An old house built with woods and bamboo
    sticks could be seen in the middle of the
    forest.
    .
    INSIDE THE HOUSE
    .
    “you have to be careful, remember this is
    your first mission” A man probably in his
    early 60s told a young boy, a youth.
    .
    AS NARRATED BY DARLINGTON
    “yes master, the fact that this is my first
    mission won’t stop me” I replied my master.
    Master Malcolm confronted me on the
    mission ahead and told me some details on
    it.
    “you should know you are not just on an
    ordinary mission, you are on a revenge
    mission. This people killed your parents” He
    reminded me.
    “yes master and i will make sure i bring
    them down” I assured.
    “good!” He said and left after giving me a
    piece of paper..
    I looked at it and it was just a detail on my
    mission, nothing more or less.
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    Date: 14th January 2014,
    Location: Orden, Rome,
    Target: Herbert Elmer.
    .
    I know you would want to know about me.
    Well, i am Darlington(no surname coz i have
    no parent). I growed up in the jungle with a
    man who happened to be my master. Master
    Malcolm taught me so many things(how to
    fight in Kung Fu, use the gun, use the sword
    and many others). But i usually find it very
    easy to do them…. Maybe it’s my talent
    anyway. There is a star, a shining star on my
    wrist which only me can touch.
    I was told by my master, Master Malcolm that
    a group of men killed my parents when i
    was young and he took the risk of saving.
    He had to run to a safe place so that he will
    not be located and that’s why we are in the
    jungle today, that man really tried for me. .
    BACK TO PRESENT
    .
    I touched the star on my wrist and
    disappeared.
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    PALACE OF THE ROMAN EMPEROR. ROME.
    Robin(the emperor) and one of his brother
    were discussing.
    “ever since he gave birth to the choosen
    one, he disappeared” Herbert said.
    .
    “brother, that is something that had past.
    Don’t disturb yourself with that” The
    emperor said.
    “you call it the past, don’t you know the
    choosen one is the one who is to fight
    against our enemies incase any Empire
    invade war against us??” Herbert asked his
    brother.
    “i know but just forget that talk for now” He
    replied him.
    .
    After about 30 minutes, Herbert decided to
    go home.
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    AS NARRATED BY DARLINGTON
    I have appeared in my target’s place about
    30 minutes ago, i scanned the whole house
    from outside with my super eyes and saw
    that the house was empty.
    I waited patiently for him and in few
    minutes time, i saw him advancing towards
    the compound.
    I quickly disappeared and reappeared inside
    his apartment and decided to wait for him
    there.
    I saw the door knob turned and he entered
    inside.
    “My father!!!” He exclaimed in fright seeing a
    strange man in his house.
    “The choosen one?” He shouted when he
    noticed the star on my wrist.
    “but the choosen one is suppose to have
    long hairs. Maybe this is not him” He said.
    “i am Darlington not choosen one” I Said as i
    brought out my sword.
    He also brought out a sword and i smiled.
    .
    T.B.C
    ENCOURAGE ME WITH COMMENTS……………………….

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    Avatarumar Ismail
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    nice start but I really didn’t understand part.

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    Ireoluwa EmmanuelIreoluwa Emmanuel
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    continue

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