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    STORY BY: Chidinma Jerry. M.
    (Star queen)


    Celine is a very beautiful girl aged 20. Though her family can be regarded as the poorest of the poor she still lives her life to the fullest. She has a very nice height and beautiful body stature with an amazing face.but her trouble surpasses her looks as she is very troublesome and care less.
    Her father is a carpenter and her mom is jobless their family is the poorest in the village . That was more reason why she moved about with her poor sight since there was no money for treatment or medicated glasses.
    After a long time she got used to her poor sight. After all she saw well it’s just that sometimes her sight got more blurry..
    She had a little brother junior.who was still in 4th grade.he was 11 years old.
    Celine has no time for men or even girls .she had only one friend dana who was in college.
    The only boy who appeared to her mind was her dream boyfriend .Danny hoffman, though he wasn’t from her city .she loved everything about him.she was happy whenever people talked about him.her crush she could never meet, he’s handsome looks melted her heart .he’s long hair seduced her every day. Hes killer smiles ,hes killer stature. He was God in his own way.
    Pictures of him filled her room.even torn out magazines.she’s crazy in love with him.she already consoled herself.she knew they can’t meet ever.
    She sat quietly on her bed that morning as her mum already left for her grand mothers house.she looked at his picture quietly smiling to herself.
    “Danny Hoffman ,there is a commoner who wants to meet you so badly “, she always said to herself.
    If wishes were horses Danny Hoffman will Be in her bed every night, even her diary was filled with him….
    A knock on the door jolted Celine out of her fantasy .she ran to to the door.wearing her gown she had only 4 cloths that’s just how poor they were.
    She opened the door to her best friend Dana .Dana sat comfortably on the outdated chair and celine hugged her.
    “miss ,i really missed you , welcome “, Celine said
    ” i kept missing you i couldnt even stay in school”, dana said grining.
    ” how is college ?.
    ” it’s great , i wish you can finally get into college too celine , its been long we left Senior high”,
    Dana said with a teary face
    ” you know there is no money , i can’t kill my parents “,Celine said .
    ” it’s ok Celine , one day you will surely smile , for now I completed your payment for that medicated glasses , your sight is pitiable “, dana said and handed Celine an eyeglass case . Celine smiled .
    Celine got teary she wiped her tears .
    ” thank you , am really glad “, Celine said and hugged her
    Dana tried closing her bag when Celine slipped out a particular magazine.
    It was her Danny Hoffman , Celine smimed widely as she read out the cover.
    ” new York’s sweeth heart , and city’s toppest male model ,” Danny Hoffman , covers high school magazine.
    Celine smiled as she looked through his pictures .
    ” he likes earrings , he’s so cute “,celine said .
    ” I heard only his ear ring is enough to buy this entire village “, dana added.
    ” he is really rich “, Celine said.
    ” and handsome too , he’s eye pure blue, he’s hair is as long as it is thick and black , attractive pink lips , flat tummy , he’s very tall and sexy I see him every night in my dream .he has to many fans and he’s dress sense awesome.
    ” so who is he’s girlfriend ?” Celine asked .
    ” I dunno but I heard its Jennifer Williams , ex miss world , she’s so pretty “, dana said.
    ” am jealous of her “, Celine said and dana smiled .
    ” Celine when will you stop this crazy crush on Danny Hoffman ?.
    ” I dunno bestie but I wish to meet him “, Celine Said.
    ” that’s impossible , dana added.
    ” I know “, celine said.
    I.e) hoffman family mansion .????
    The Hoffman’s family had been recorded as the second richest in the whole country. Sir Carl hoffman being the founder of hoffman groups .which is a group of companies joined together with the main motive of providing the city’s necessity.allmost all wealthy individual are part of hoffman groups.
    They group has like 80 universities a cross the globe.
    100 malls.
    They’re construction company has built like 300 major roads and bridges
    80 high schools only for the rich , one of which is prestigious high where Danny’s little sister gretel attends .
    like 80 streets belonged to the Hoffman’s .
    300 hotels and suites
    The group had done many more but the sole heir of every investment was Danny Hoffman.
    The Hoffman’s lived in a street owned by them ” Hoffman’s street.
    They live in an estate which had 18 empty mansions in it. A pool surrounded the whole estate.and another pool came through the back.
    The 1st building was where the Hoffman’s family stayed. The 5th building was where they maids lived.They had like 50 maids and counting in the 5th building. But only 4 maids stayed inside the main mansion.
    Danny’s room was above gretel room , next door to his room was he’s dressing room where all his cloths sat. Some maids stayed around there to help him dress up.
    Hes room backed the pool , he’s wall was very transparent giving him an amazing sight.
    They house was worth writting about .
    Danny rushed into the compound from the living room he walked he packed his hair up. He wore a white track suite with a diamond stonned slippers and a diamond earing. He held his white phone in his hands where he wore a silver ring..he had a tatoo on his wrist and another tatoo by his neck . More like a signature..
    He was really attractive. A maid rushed out after him with his bag.she looked very clean. Once he got into the compound all the maids outside bowed.
    The guard opened his door and he walked in , he’s catwalk proves he was really a model.
    He sat in the car and the driver took off.
    4 guards entered the next car and rushed out after him.
    All the maids who where bowing lifted their face up and went out.
    Danny hoffman has it all , the looks , money , he’s the perfect boyfriend and he has the perfect girlfriend or so he thought.
    The driver took off.
    Danny placed call to Jennifer
    ” my love “,.
    ” Danny its been a week “,.
    ” I am sorry and I love you “.
    ” I love you too “,.
    ” am going to spend the night at my suite , come before 8.
    ” ok I will be there “.
    ” are you home ?.
    “No I mean yes ,yes “.
    ” ok love , bye .
    ” bye my love “. Jenny ended .
    Danny dropped the call.
    Just minutes after Danny left Gretel rushed into the compound with her car key.She headed for her pink car.
    She wore school.uniform with a gold stonned canvass.her hair fell below her back.She was 18 and in senior high.She had an attractive body stature ..her school skirt was very short.
    The maids bowed to her while one of them took her bag.
    She walked into her car and increased the music volume then she drove off. She looked amazing.
    Jennifer lay naked on her bed with a white bed sheet which covered her body .her thick black hair fell freely .
    A man lay beside her .he rose up and feathered his lips on her neck but her facial expression was not exciting.
    He gently kissed her lips .
    ” what wrong “.
    ” Kelvin you need to go , i need to go see Danny “. She said and stood from the bed .
    ” I thought u were gonna break up with danny ?.
    ” I love him so much , i won’t break up with danny instead we need to stop this “.she said and rushed into the shower.Kelvin fell back to the pillow.
    Kelvin was suppose to be her friend untill their affair started She was cheating on Danny with Kelvin each day she says she would stop but it gets more difficult..
    She walked out of the shower and wrapped the towel jacket round her body.her figure amazing.her hair was indeed very long and her skin colour was just as great.
    She sat down and applied her face cream Kelvin slowly kissed her neck from behind.
    ” I really want to be alone now , pls “,She said .
    ” ok , i will check on you.”, he said and picked his shirt.
    Jennifer dropped the cream , this one night game had spinned into something else, it spinned out of her control it’s now a continuous affair.her biggest fear was Danny finding out.
    Kelvin on his part was quite rich and handsome too.and he realy desired jennifer but jennifer hadn’t defined her feelings yet.

    Next coming soon


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    This is going to be tough and complicated.

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    Present here..diz gonna be a tough one

    keep d update rolling

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    i don show like flash… Abeg who de sitdon for ma sit?

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    Chai imagine d heart cry of dat poor girl, baby God will do it 4 u. My dear @henrymary am here o , thanks 4 d iv. @ele1 @senatorDaniel @kelly-kelvin @maths, come nd read o.

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    Episode 2 and 3

    Story by Chindinma

    Hoffman hotels ?
    Danny arrived , he walked into the room his manager was waiting for him.
    He sat Down and dropped his phone on the table.
    “Tell me “, danny said .
    ” nothing to.tell , star times wants to interview you “, he said .
    ” pass , danny replied.
    ” you have a shoot tomorow for Vera “, he said
    “Pass pass pass “, danny replied
    ” you will be shooting a movie in few days “.
    ” around town?.
    ” no Danny , we are traveling , i sent you the location .
    ” ok cool , till then , anything else?.
    ” Sandra will fill you up “, he said .
    Danny stood up and picked his phone .
    He rushed out and ran into a lady caring a plate of soup which she dropped on his legs.
    Danny moved his hair back.he’s guards rushed out .
    Danny turned to her.
    People took pictures of him.
    “am realy sorry sir”.
    ” arrrgh, must today be this bad? “am realy sorry sir I can clean it right away if you may”, she said .
    she tried to take the shoes
    “so am expected to step on the floor, why are commoners so stupid , what makes you think that its okay if u clean it, dont you get, your hands makes it even dirtier”, he said
    The waiter felt so bad she started tearing up.
    ” am sorry sir .
    Danny picked up his phone and made a call, few seconds later his assistant ( sandra )brought him a new pair of slipper.
    she removed the old one and he wore the later
    Danny turned to the waiter.
    ” do you know how much this slipper cost, no need, you might die just hearing the price.
    He placed it on her chest. The soup stained her cloth.
    “sell it and Maybe buy some value or do a face surgery ur face just ruined my mood.”
    Danny walked out he got to the car he entered and they drove away. He headed for his penthouse .
    Few minutes later it was over the news and making the head lines
    Prestigious high school ??
    Gretel sat quietly discussing with her friend.
    A lot of students waved at her, Gretel is realy popular.
    “hey bestie, your in early”,Gretel said
    “you are late as usual, u missed biology”.
    Gretel : I wanted too
    (she smiles )
    “I love your shoes “.
    “we are totally twinning ”
    “no you didn’t ”
    ” oh my God ,I did !!”.
    Gretel brings out the same exact pair from a bag she carried and gave it to keila
    “shut up”. Keila shouted
    “am not talking “.
    “this is amazing”.
    They hugged each other
    ” hey I heard Danny is being dropped”
    “the manager of great world Is not happy with what the press is saying about danny, but he can’t drop Danny”.
    “so its just rumours”.
    “yea, I have chem in 10”.
    “well let’s go to the cafeteria at least we have 10 minutes to spare “.
    the girls stood up in their twin pair of shoes and walked out of the scene into the cafeteria where they sat down students passed by and commented them
    Student one : hey gret
    Gretel : hey hi
    Student : I love your sneakers it is sooo awesome
    Gretel : thanks Tania
    To rolls after Gretel, sat 3 guys conversing. One of them was Richard staffords only son.the next richest family to Gretel. Hrs name was ex athlete .
    “hey who is that dark haired cutie”, sim asked.
    ” your new so I am sure you don’t know Gretel”, Sam said
    ” omg ,Gretel hoffman “.
    ” the little devil as the press calls her”.Sammy added
    ” Gretel is realy the most beautiful girl in prestigious high”, Stanley added.
    “so who is her boyfriend “, sim asked
    “that’s mysterious “, Oscar added.
    ” I like her”, simeon Said.
    ” well you haven’t met her”, oscsr finished
    Gretel was busy eating her plate of ice cream when she noticed simeon and the way he kept staring
    “hey who is that “, she asked k
    ” u meant who is that cutie”.
    ” I never said he wasn’t cute”.
    “that’s the guy the whole girls in prestigious high school including me dreams of having”.
    ” how come I don’t know him:.
    Keila : he’s new, just a week before and u don’t come to school.
    ” what’s his name”.
    “wait simeon that simeon”. Gretel asked
    “yea 40 gold medals 30 silver medals in athlete ,simeon “.
    ” ohhh my God !!!!.
    ” yea am shouting “,. Keila said.
    ” why did he leave kings high? .
    ” I think he’s dad Is part of Hoffman’s group now”.
    “wow he is cuter than in pictures, omg am late for chem”.
    “am going home”.
    ” your skipping math class:.
    “yea, laters “.
    Gretel grabs her bag and walked out of the scene.
    ******?****** 8pm.
    Jennifer arrived Danny’s suite he was already waiting for her.
    ” Jenny you are late.
    ” Danny am really sorry was just caught up.
    ” fine, Mised you.
    He kissed her lips and they moved it all the way to the bed room.

    Next day
    celines house ?
    Celine sat in the living room with her mother, she already counted and arranged the oranges she was to sell.
    Just then her father came back..he wore a very long and pitiful face.
    His wife stood up to him..
    ” why the long face , what happened. His wife asked.
    ” well he finally succeeded in locking down my shop.
    Celine stood up on hearing this.
    ” ordinary 15,000.. infact lemme catch that man.
    She tried rushing out but her mother dragged her back.
    ” it’s ok my daughter , I don’t blame him I blame poverty.
    Her dad walked inside while her mum sat back on the chair.
    ” Celine please get me water outside.
    ” what about chimezie?.
    ” he went to school .
    ” hmmm I have pass this level oh.
    ” If I catch ….. ” her mum tried standing up but she grabbed the bucket and rushed out , as she was about stepping out she barged into Dana .
    ” you are just in time, come and escort me.
    ” how are you”.
    ” fine” .
    “why are u not wearing your glass? “.
    “after how much you
    spent ,I will wear it on important occasions”.
    “don’t fall inside gutter oh”.
    “I have mastered this area like the back of my hands”.
    They both laugh as they walked down the street
    (They got to the tap)
    “we are here, lemme drop this bucket first”.
    “ok am behind that car “.
    Celine walked to the tap and dropped her bucket then She tapped a boy in the corner.
    ” hey am behind that car when my turn reach call me. ”
    Celine followed her friend and they watched the video of Danny and the waiter on danas phone
    “wow this guy is realy proud oo”.
    “yea am reducing my like for him”.
    ” he has luck, if it was me. heeeeey!! “.
    ” are u telling me, I know you nah”.
    They both laugh as dana came across a particular headline she jumped up
    “what “.
    ‘guess what”.
    “what “.
    ” Danny is coming here”.
    ” which Danny”.
    “Danny hoffman ,He is shooting a movie here “.
    “wow that’s huge”.
    ” but they didn’t write when, omg i can’t wait”.
    “see this girl acting as though the guy knows you”.
    They both laugh
    Just then Celine remembers her water
    She rushed back to the tap and found her bucket on the floor
    ” excuse me where is my water”
    “it was your turn u didn’t come so she removed your bucket and put her own”.
    ” rita, just fetch your water and leave that girl ever since her father was recognized I don’t know what she is feeling like”.
    ” ok no problem”.
    she carried her bucket and turned to dana
    “Dana bye bye Lemme go home”.
    “are u sure”.
    ” watch me nah am going home, I have changed oh am very cool now”.
    Celine walked slowly as dana watched her she walked towards her house instantly as dana looked away she ran into rita compound
    ” this girl will never Change” dana said and chased after her
    Celine got into the well furnished compound she sighted rita as she poured her bucket of water into a half filled drum as Rita turned she saw Celine
    “where is my water”
    ” I don’t know, are you asking me”.
    “ok no problem you won’t know what happened to your own water too”.
    Celine rushed over to the big drum which was almost filled up and tried pushing it down but it was too heavy for her just then dana ran into the scene
    ” dana warn Celine ooo if she pour my water”.
    “celine!! do u need help”.
    Dana rushed towards Celine and both of them pushed the drum down successfully and the whole compound was litered
    ” Celine i Will tell my dad.
    ” your dad has done his worse , what more can he do , didn’t he lock down my father’s store ?.
    ” I will surely tell dad.
    ” well you are free.
    Celine and dana both ran out.

    Hoffman’s house ⛲??
    Gretel was dressing in her room when she recieved an alert that her credit card was blocked.
    She came down stairs from her room after changing she sat down close to her father
    “dad “.
    ” yes dear”.
    “mom “.
    “yes darling”.
    “who amongs you both blocked my credit card”.
    “well “.
    “mum!!!!!! “.
    “we both did, what did you use 18 million for Gretel you are just 17”.
    “am f-----g 18″.
    ” whatever”.
    “i bought shoes”.
    “you bought shoes i thought i warned you gretel to spend reasonably”.
    “am sorry mum, dad pls unblock my card I won’t spend unreasonably anymore i promise”.
    (She fakes a teary face)
    “honey lets unblock her card I think she has taken corrections”. Mrs hoffman said .
    “no never Gretel will retrieve her rights to that card when I say so”.
    ” what!!”.
    “that’s final”.
    “Mr Hoffman you are realy getting on my nerves”, Gretel said
    “Mrs Gretel I won’t release your card untill I see signs that you are mature “.
    “you know what dad am done with this I am going to the US am tired of staying in this hell hole anyways “.
    She barges out of the parlour and almost ran into Danny while he walked in
    “hey gret”.
    “hey honey welcome, am going to my room I disowned mom and dad today”.
    she runs out
    Danny smiles sheepishly as he wakked towards his parents
    “gudevening dad, mom”.
    “welcome honey”.
    “finally “.
    ” am realy sorry dad ave been busy”.
    “no problem I saw your interview I hope you are ready to get involved in the family business like u Said earlier or were you just bluffing “.
    “honey he just came back come on welcome him”.
    ” didn’t I say welcome”.
    “mum, dad I will be going upstairs first”.
    “freshen up son i will call one of the maids to get you a glass of milk”.
    “thAnks mum”.
    Danny walked out.
    “I don’t like the way you are being on Gretel you are too harsh you know Gretel is always alone and bored that’s why she likes shoping please unblock her card”, Mrs hoffman said
    Mr Hoffman : ok fine you won I would unblock her card are you happy now
    Mrs Hoffman : yes I am
    Danny dropped his bag as he said to himself no place like home
    After taking a bath someone knocked
    “Who is it”.
    ” I brought cold milk sir”.
    ” yeah I need that”.
    He opened the door
    The dark skinned unkept looking maid presented the drink which she placed In a glass tray
    Danny moved his hair in frustration .
    “holy shit”.
    ” good evening sir”.
    ” what are you”.
    ” a maid”.
    “what poor luck I have, out of all the maids in this house you brought me milk? “.
    “what’s wrong with me sir”.
    ” everything is wrong with you, why is your hair so unkept “.
    ” am sorry sir forgot to wear my cap”.
    “why didn’t you wear any gloves on your hands ?”.
    ” because I placed it carefully on this tray sir”.
    “then why are you still touching the cup with your bare hands”.
    “am sorry sir”.
    ” get out “.
    “ok sir”.
    ” you are fired “.
    He locked the door and sat on his bed.
    Just then his phone rang Danny picked up it was his manager Mr king.
    ” tell me”.
    ” I hope you are getting ready for your travel Tommorow “.
    ” yes sure “.
    ” ok just wanted to clear that”.
    Danny dropped the phone and slept off
    Next day
    prestigious high school. ?
    Gretel just arrived at school she barged into the class room and almost ran into simeon who was walking out
    ” hey watch it, why are you so clumsy “.
    “seriously, are you that rude”.
    “rude, you ran into me dumb head”.
    “what “.
    ” I’m not having a great day so just stay out of my way”.
    “jeez I can’t believe this is the girl ave been trying to get close to, who do you think you are Gretel just because you have everything you want you think you can step on everyone, if this is your personality then am realy disappointed in you “.
    He walked away and Gretel walked to her best friend keila
    Before Gretel could sit down she
    received a text message saying that her credit card was unblocked
    “what’s up Gret what was that all about”.
    “I was just having a bad day daddy blocked my card but he just unblocked it”.
    “you need to control your mouth Gret you where too rude to simeon you need to apologize”.
    ” I never apologize to people and you know that anyways I called Katie we are going to the mall after class right “.
    “no I can’t I have ballet what about SATURADAY “.
    ” ok cool”.
    Keila looked out the window where Gretels car parked
    “nice ride but I liked the pink one better”.
    ” I use this car only when am in a bad mood “.
    “how about now how is your mood”.
    “wonderful “.
    They both laugh
    Just then Gretels phone rang it was her driver
    ” hello”.
    “what’s up “.
    “my son got into an accident I have to go so just call me when you are done with classes”.
    “seriously how bad is it”.
    ” am trying to confirm”.
    “all right no problem I hope he’s ok”.
    She droped the call and KeilA tapped her
    ” hey look that’s simeon”.
    “why are you telling me that”.
    “because you are going to apologize to him”.
    ” no you are not serious “.
    “come on you can’t start on a bad foot with a guy you like”.
    “whoever said I like him”.
    ” come on gret”.
    ” ok ok fine”.
    Gretel walked over to where simeon sat
    Simeon pretends not to notice her
    ” hey.
    “I have math in 5 so just say what you want to say.
    “well the thing is .
    “the thing is, well”.
    “I came to apologize because of the way I sounded I was just having a bad day and that’s it
    She turned back and rushed over her seat”.
    Simeon chuckled softly.
    Wow she can’t even apologize properly this girl was realy spoilt, he thought.
    ******* ? 4pm.
    Danny just arrived celines village for his shoot .he had left very early with his assistant.he called Jennifer before leaving.
    Him and Sandra lodged in a couple suite.
    the suite was rented for him in a five star hotel.
    the suite was realy big it was more like a couple suite.
    it was comfortable with a nicely situated pool with two rooms.
    “wow its not bad”.
    ” its totally your style sir “.
    ” have you seen the setting of the movie”.
    “yes the building is nice Mr king sent me the picture “.
    “all right”.
    prestigious high.
    school was over and keila had already gone for ballet practice
    Gretel stood in front of the school gate as she kept calling her driver who couldn’t pick up because he left his phone in the car while he rushed into the hospital
    Gretel stood there for a few minutes she didn’t want to call home because she knew Mr John would loose his job.
    she tried dialing the number again it started raining heavily the rain was so heavy Gretel tried running into the school but the school gate was already closed
    As Gretel tried moving away a big white jeep stopped in front of her the Door swung open and simeon sat down comfortably inside
    ” come on in “.
    “must you be stubborn about every thing “.
    “no don’t worry my driver is coming
    “Gretel Hoffman you are going to catch a cold
    ” ok fine
    She sat in the car and simeon took his jacket from the car and covered her
    “apology accepted “.
    “( smiles ) took you this long “.
    They drove away

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