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    In the year 2003.
    in Bogota,columbia.
    A drug lord Don luis sends his enforcer Marco and a gang of armed men to kill his associate called
    Fabio Resterepo and his family.Because Fabio has defiled him by trying to leave his criminal life behind.

    Fabio gives his 9yrs old daughter,Cataleya
    a smart media computer memory card
    that contain Don luis
    evil business deals.He
    also gives her the address of her uncle
    Leo,in Chicago,who will take care of her.

    After Fabio and his wife Alicia are gunned down.
    Cataleya escapes and seeks Asylum at the U.S embassy.She was granted a passage to the U.S.

    Cataleya tracks down her uncle in Chicago and asks him to train her as a Killer.


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    Cataleya*** 19yrs old girl,and the major character.

    Fabio***Cataleya’s Dad.

    Alicia***Cataleya’s mom.

    Leo***Cataleya’s uncle.

    Danny Dellany***
    Cataleya’s Lover

    Marco***Don luis major hit man.

    Don Luis***a drug lord and a gang leader

    Pepe***Cataleya’s Grand pa.


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    The story will be bad, ride on.

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    Episode 1
    Cataleya,Cat for short
    a 9yrs old preety,but with a toughness.
    sitting at the dining room table.In a well kept,but modest home
    with windows that look out over the steep hillside.

    Attending to her notebook.

    On the window they are half a dozen beautiful orchid plants
    The rare Cataleya orchid.
    All around the room are cartons,suitcase.

    Mom:Cat is your home
    work finished yet?.

    Cat:working on it mama

    her mother left her packing of bags and suitcases and come over to Cat to see what she was doing.
    she looked into her book and saw a neat drawing of Spider man

    Mom:you draw beautifully my love.
    but if you want to be something in life,you have to study.

    Cat:i also study mama
    i want to be a superhero

    Mom:Better to be a doctor or a lawyer.

    Cat:mama what are all this bags,are we going to uncle Leo

    Mom:i dont know.just waiting to hear from your father.

    Cat:ok mama,love youu

    Mom:love you too Darling.

    Alicia kiss her forehead before resuming her packing of Suitcases.

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    inside Don luis lounge.
    Cataleya’s dad,Don luis,and Marco were sitting.

    Don luis:i cant believe this.You wanna leave this business after all we have achieve together?. shit!

    Fabio:why not.?

    Don luis:because i love you like a brother

    Fabio:i also love you like my brother

    Don luis turn to Marco who was puffing a ciggarethe.

    Don luis:Marco can you believe this guy.?
    We started this when we were little…..How old were we Fabio


    Don luis:Ten years old bastards stealing apples in the market.
    After all we’ve been through.And now we’re untop he wants to leave.D--n!

    Fabio:Luis,i’m gonna be honest with you.I want to start a new business.I mean legit and real one.I wanna open a big boutique.I want to be indipendent,am leaving this shady deals.

    Don luis:think about all the dough we achieve from this deals

    Fabio:do you know how many times we should have been dead?

    Don luis:i dont even wanna count.

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