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    Valentine
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    Hmm

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    Philian
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    Next nah

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    Philian
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    Vibe killer

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    Emmanuel The Loverboy
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    @philanderboy school tins
    i dey exam mood
    next week unfailingly

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    Episode 8
    ANGLE ON THE DOOR

    At the far end of the Hall.
    A cop comes in, Looks
    down the hall where Cat was standing
    he sees only the vending machines.
    he heads right to the machines.

    ANGLE ON THE SIDE OF THE MACHINE.

    Cat is pressed hard against the flat surface, inches from the cop.

    Cat hanged there until
    she hears the door shut on the far end of
    the hall.
    She crosses quickly to
    the door across the way, and enter.

    CLOSE ON UTILITY BOX(IN ELECTRICAL ROOM)

    Cat stands on a narrow shelf, undoes the last screws on a vent in the ceiling with a screw driver from the tools board on the wall.

    she opens the electrical control panel on the wall,
    studies it for a moment,finds the switch she is looking for, then turns to the
    wall of tools,pluck some wires,

    Cat sets to work on a rigged mechanism with the items.
    when she is finished.

    she tugs at the waist
    band on her mini skirt

    and little by little
    she stretches a thin colored lectard suit
    over her whole body.

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    she takes a small plastic vial,fills it with
    some water from the tap and sets it just so
    above the device she has constructed.

    The device is hooked to the switch she selected.
    A small weight hangs from the bottom of the wire.

    She sets the water container over the spoon from her cell the water begins to drip at a times. she closes the panel door.

    She sets her digital watch.

    She hoist herself up to the ceiling.

    And she is gone.

    AIR DUCTS

    She landed inside the grate,Cat takes one of the buttons of her
    blouse and presses the top of it.

    the button becomes a pin light.

    She clasps it between
    her teeth and start to
    crawl on her stomach
    pulling herself along by her elbows and her
    wriggling hips and knees.
    The lights still between her teeth.

    TRACK WITH CAT

    As she moves through
    the maze of ducts.
    on the way,she peers
    through the grates in
    each ceiling,down into
    one cell or the order.

    Catching views of inmates asleep as she
    passes over them.

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    Still moving
    untill she comes to a ventilation fan blocking her way.
    The fan blades go round and round.

    Cat looks at her watch
    looks at the fan.

    ELECTRICAL PANEL

    On the rigged device. the water has almost filled the spoon,one more drop.on more drop.

    CLOSE ON CAT LOOKING HER WATCH

    the digital counter goes from 4 to 3 to 2 to 1……..

    ELECTRICAL PANEL

    The last drop of water
    drips into the spoon.

    the spoon tips,
    tugging on the wire, the wire trips the switch,the whole device comes apart, the seprate pieces fell
    to the floor.

    AiR DUCTS

    The fan stops.the blades slow.

    Cat face brighten with
    smiles.

    POLICE STATION

    The sergent at the desk hears the ventilation system go
    off.

    Sergent:Hey Doyle!

    He calls to one of the
    other cops on duty.

    Sergent:go take a look
    at the breaker on the ventilation system. will ya?

    Doyle moves off.

    AIR DUCTS

    Cat watches the blades of the vent fan
    slow.
    she starts to move herself through the narrow space between
    the now stilled blades.

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    ELECTRICAL ROOM

    Doyle enters the room.
    opens the electrical panel.
    the spoon,the weight,
    the wire all fall to the floor.
    Doyle looks at them curiously for a moment.

    AIR DUCTS

    Cat is halfway through
    the fan blades

    ELECTRICAL ROOM

    Doyle finds the switch
    that correspond to the ventilation system

    AIR DUCTS

    Cat’s neck passes through the fan blades

    ELECTRICAL ROOM

    Doyle hits the switch.

    AIR DUCTS

    Cat is just through when the blades start
    moving.she make it to
    the other side in time.

    Cat:pheew! that was so close. This dickheads switch it on
    again.I still find my way.

    BATHROOM

    Cat drops down into a bathroom.
    looks at her watch.

    Cat:gosh!,time is ticking. gotta delete
    this Rizzo of a guy.

    CELL

    Rizzo is asleep in his cell.
    the marshal on duty finishes his coffe.
    looks at Rizzo.Then walks over to the door
    at the end of the wall.

    The door buzzes open the Cop passes through.

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