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    It was around 6 am when John woke up, he tried to get up and
    say his morning prayers when he noticed that TJ, his childhood
    friend had slept with his leg over his chest, he pushed his leg
    aside and cursed TJ ” when you go dey drink too much “,
    Adebayo John was a 23 year old corper who hailed from Ogun
    state , he and his friend Timmy Johnson 23 whom also hailed
    from Ogun state have been together since childhood, they both
    attended the same primary school, secondary school and
    university, and surprisingly they were both posted to Enugu state
    for their NYSC. They had finished their NYSC and were going
    back home that morning, John was not really excited that
    morning because he was returning home to his busy father who
    never had time for him and his mean step mother who hated him
    because he was the only male child in the family, John’s mother
    had left him with his father because he was a drunkard and beat
    her up every time he drank, he had met John’s step mother at a
    club where he usually drank. John quickly said his prayers and
    went to have his bath, when he came back TJ was still sleeping,
    John kicked him and said mumu you no go go bath, TJ then said
    ‘weray’ and went out to have his bath. John had finished
    dressing up when TJ came in, John was dressed in his Corper
    outfit, while waiting for TJ to finish dressing up he took his time
    to cross check his luggage, he then remembered that he had not
    picked up his novel, at least that would entertain him throughout
    the long journey to Lagos. John and TJ went to have their
    breakfast of moin – moin and pap at mama Nkechi’s buka, they
    then set out to the main road to look for a taxi to take them to the
    motor park, they waited for about 7 minutes before they saw a
    taxi, after a minute of negotiating the taxi driver then agreed to
    take them there for 200 naira, they then set off on the 15 minutes
    journey to the motor park, John looked sideways at TJ, TJ was
    the last born of a rich family of 3 girls and he was the only male
    child, his 3 sisters were based in the U.S with their mother, while
    his father was a busy business man who rarely spent a week
    without traveling, TJ was handsome, he was the ladies guy but
    he was not brilliant in terms of academics, he graduated with a
    second class lower, TJ also had a knack for getting into trouble..
    They got to the park and alighted then settled their taxi driver, it
    was then TJ tried hiding his face when he sighted somebody in
    the garage , John noticed TJ’s action and asked oh boy wetin
    happen? TJ said padi mi na one of those girls I see o, make we
    do quick go enter bus, they hurriedly entered a bus with a Lagos
    sign on it, while in the bus TJ put his head on the seat to hide his
    face.

    John, still a little bit surprised asked, which girl be that? TJ with
    his head still on the chair, it’s one of those girls who claimed I
    impregnated them, Job burst into an uncontrolled laughter which
    attracted some passangers in the bus, so you dey run from your
    responsibility abi? Which kind responsibility? Na only me they
    dey follow sleep? If she see me for here she go hook me down
    come embarass me for this park. Luckily for TJ the last
    passanger entered and they set off, but TJ still had his head on
    the chair, John with a smile on his face tapped TJ on his head
    and said Baba Junior carry your head up, TJ grinned and said
    you don dey craze. John checked his wrist watch, they had set
    off around 8 am, John then took a moment to survey the faces of
    those in the bus, they were six corpers in the bus including them,
    4 guys and 2 girls, one of the girls of which he knew, her name
    was Joy and she was one the few girls he admired. Joy Parker
    was epitome of beauty, she was an half-caste, her father was
    from England and her mother was from Nigeria, John had seen a
    lot of girls in his lifetime but he could swear she was the most
    beautiful girl he had ever seen, after a while John picked up his
    novel and got busy, he was reading the broker by John Grisham,
    he was in the 5th chapter when something happened.

    Suddenly the woman beside him had an asthma attack, as she
    tried to use her inhaler it fell outside the bus through the
    window, John immediately shouted at the driver to stop, when
    the bus finally came to a halt, John got down and sprinted back
    in search of the inhaler, he ran for about 50 metres before
    sighting the inhaler, when he picked it up he ran back to the bus
    like a mad man and handed the inhaler back to the woman, she
    then used it and it stopped the attack in a matter of seconds,
    John looked sideways only for him to see that Joy was staring at
    him, John was immediately taken aback by her captivating
    beauty, she had a light skin and beautiful brown eyes, they had
    eye contact for about 5 seconds before Joy finally looked away
    smiling , after the woman had calmed down she thanked John for
    his help and prayed for him. Joy knew a trustworthy guy when
    she saw one and to her John would be trustworthy, she had only
    seen him a few times around camp but there was something
    about him that interested her, after being cheated on by her ex
    boyfriend, Joy decided that she was done with Nigerian men but
    maybe John was an exception. TJ was glad he was returning
    home, home for him meant he could go out with his father’s cars,
    go clubbing, bring home girls and move at his own free will, he
    remembered his ordeal with different girls with different sizes,
    shapes and skin colour, he was a player unlike his friend John,
    he felt sorry for John who didn’t really know what fun was like,
    his attention was drawn back by the screams of the people in the
    bus, when he looked to see what was happening TJ said “oh
    d--n ” because trouble was ahead of them
    Right in front of them stood six men armed men, the driver
    thought about making a run for it but thought again when he saw
    a plank full of nails right In front of him, he had no option but to
    stop the bus, the armed men ordered them all out of the bus, and
    asked them to drop all their valuables and money, the
    passengers immediately began to comply, the only thing John
    could think of at that moment was the safety of Joy, he hoped the
    men would do nothing more than collect their money and leave
    them alone but he was wrong, the woman who had an asthma
    attack earlier suddenly fainted, no one dared go to her aid, the
    leader of the armed men ordered the corpers and four other
    passengers into the bus where they were blindfolded, the next
    thing John heard was gunshots as the remaining passengers
    were killed in cold blood, the driver of the bus tried to escape but
    got six bullets into his back as a result of his action, the men
    then got into the bus and drove off, John’s heart started to beat
    fast he was half glad that Joy and TJ were in the bus with him,
    though he didn’t know this men but he knew one thing about
    them “don’t mess with them “, TJ had his heart in his mouth, he
    had never had a gun pointed at him before, he didn’t know where
    these men were taking them to but he knew it could not be
    good

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    episode 2

    Joy was so scared that her heart pumped like a pumping
    machine, she had different questions racing through her mind
    like Who were these people? Where are they being taken to?
    What do they want from them? Why were they the chosen ones?
    John noticed that the bus suddenly slowed down and took a turn,
    now there were off the tarred road, he knew because he could tell
    from the buses sound and movement, he heard one of the armed
    men talking about how much they will be paid for bringing ten
    people, one of the men said If na 100,000 naira per person then e
    mean say na one million naira we dey collect, now John knew
    where they were being taken to, they were going to be sold by the
    armed men to ritualists who would pay them 100,000 naira for
    each of them, TJ’s worst fears were confirmed as he also heard
    their conversation, is this how his life is going to end? He
    thought, the bus had continued along the rough road for 30
    minutes where it had taken different turns than they could count,
    they drove for another 20 minutes before the bus finally came to
    a stop. They were there, John thought, they were at the place
    where their lives might end, their blindfolds were removed and
    they were ordered to get down from the bus, as they got down lo
    and behold they were in the middle of nowhere inside a very thick
    forest, right in front of them stood an uncompleted building with
    hefty and heavily armed men, they were about 7 in number, one of
    the guards said they don come o, the leader of the armed men
    then ordered them to line up in a straight line and move into the
    building, John wondered how any human being in their right
    senses would think of building a house in such a thick forest in
    the first place, as they were moving into the building, John
    noticed that a car was parked beside it, it was a Range Rover
    SUV, John quickly crammed the number of the vehicle AA 885
    AKD as they were about to enter into the building John thought,
    was that the last car he was going to see? Well if it was, it was a
    nice one .

    They entered the building which was dark and damp and smelled
    of death, escaping was not an option as they were surrounded by
    hard looking, heartless and hefty armed men, they were lead to a
    dark room they called the dungeon, where they were chained. TJ
    said to John ‘on the bright side we’ll pray to God for forgiveness
    and end up in heaven ‘ prayers! John hadn’t thought of that, he
    began to pray to God for forgiveness, he asked God to find them a
    way out of this smelly, dark dungeon, he had not finished praying
    when one man walked in carrying injections all filled with a
    substance that neither of them knew about, the man began to
    inject each of them with the substance, as he was injected, John
    began to recite psalm 23, he had not reach ‘thou anoint my head
    with oil ‘ when he suddenly felt dizzy, as his eyes were about to
    close the last thing he saw was Joy who was already
    unconscious
    …………………………………………………………… It was almost
    evening when they woke up, they must have slept for about 5
    hours, it was then John noticed that he was Unclad and all his
    hair was shaven, not only him but all the guys who were in the
    dungeon, he looked towards Joy’s direction, she was untouched
    and so were the remaining women in the dungeon, he and Joy’s
    eyes met, he was a little shy, he liked the idea of being Unclad in
    front of her but not under such circumstances, their clothes were
    in the center of the room, John felt uneasy, he was not used to
    being Unclad in front of women, but he knew TJ was, he had to
    find a way to free himself and get out of this mess along with Joy
    and TJ at least, he looked at the far end of the room and noticed
    that some of them were weeping, John studied the room for
    escape points, the window was not an option as it was high, very
    small and had a hard burglary barricade in front of it, he looked
    up at the ceiling, the door was not an option either as two armed
    men were outside guarding it, he looked at Joy then he had an
    idea …

    John looked at Joy’s hair and noticed that she had a hair pin, can
    you throw me your hair pin? John asked politely, okay Joy
    replied as she removed her hair pin and tossed it at John, with
    his shackle bound hands he pick up the pin, as he tried to use
    the pin to pick the lock of his chains, the door opened and 3 men
    came in and took the four other people who were not corpers,
    John heard one of them say something about beheading them
    and using their organs for money rituals, John silently prayed to
    God for a miracle, as the last armed man was about to close the
    door he mistakenly shut the door on the bunch of keys attached
    to his belt hole, the keys fell inside the room as the man shut the
    door, that was the fastest prayer that God had ever answered
    him, now he had to act fast, heaven had helped him now he had
    to help himself, he got back to picking the lock as he was
    sweating as if he was inside an oven, he was relieved when he
    picked the first lock, he had never done such before but he had
    now put the movies he watched into good use, as his left hand
    was free he used it to pick the second lock,it took about 3 minutes for him to pick the lock until it opened, with both his
    hands free he stretched to where the key was but he was just a
    few inches short, he looked around and remembered their clothes
    which was in the middle of the room, he stretched to where the
    clothes were and took his boxers and used often it to try to get
    the key, He threw his boxers over the bunch of keys and pulled it
    nearer, now he had the keys, he had tried 3 keys before the fourth
    one opened the shackles on his feet, now free, he out on his
    boxers and went to release Joy first, he tried the keys that
    released him first and it opened all her shackles, he tried it for TJ
    too and It worked, when TJ was free John have him the keys to
    release the other 3 people while he dressed up, when they were
    all released and dressed up, John had a plan to get them out of
    there .. ………………………

    Bison was in the slaughter room when he
    noticed that his keys were not with him, he quickly retraced his
    steps in search of the keys, he searched everywhere but could
    not find his keys, he then remembered that he had not searched
    the dungeon, with his pistol in his hand he ran to the dungeon, he
    then ordered the two guards to open the door, when the door was
    opened, Bison could not believe his eyes
    The room was empty as all the prisoners had escaped through
    the ceiling, he raised an alarm and informed all the men that the
    prisoners had escaped and he needed to have them back, all the
    men ran out in search of John and his mates because prisoners
    meant money, John and his friends ran through the back of the
    building into the forest as fast as they could because sooner or
    later their captors would find out that they had escaped, before
    they could say Nelson Mandela 6 armed men were after them, it
    was now a race of life and death called stop and you are dead,
    TJ had been in a similar situation before when he was being
    chased by cultists in his university for dating the girlfriend of one
    of them, that time he ran through the school premises to the
    nearest police station or else he would have surely been beaten
    to coma, he had then called his father who had then called the
    commissioner of police to get the cultists arrested, they ran
    through the forest without knowing where exactly they were
    heading to, luckily for John the men had not collected his wrist
    watch, he checked the time as he was running, it was 4:20 pm,
    as they continued running one of the male corpers whose name
    was Chidi fell and twisted his ankle, they had already ran far
    ahead before TJ looked back and noticed what had happened,
    none of them dared go back to rescue him, John felt sorry for
    Chidi as the men pounced on him and dragged him back, one
    man dragged him as the remaining 5 continued the pursuit, as
    John and his friends ran on they jumped over a pit which was full
    of bones and skulls and produced a bad odor, John concluded
    that that was probably where the men dumped the remains of
    their victims, they ran and turned left but the men kept pursuing
    them, they arrived at a cliff which had a river at It’s bottom, John
    and his friends looked back, there was only one thing to do
    John looked down at that river, it was flowing fast, he looked at
    TJ who nodded at him he looked back and saw that the armed
    men were closing in on them, he held Joy’s hand and said we all
    jump at the count of 3 okay, by then the men were 50 feet apart
    from them shouting stop! stop there! With Joy’s hand in his John
    counted 1, 2 , and at the count of three the youth corpers Jumped
    down the cliff, by the time the men got there, John and his friends
    were half way down the cliff, the men turned back disappointed,
    Bison was going to be mad at them……….. Splash! John and his
    friends landed into the river, they tried to swim as the strong
    river current carried them along, he held on tight to Joy’s hand,
    no matter what happens he’s not going to let go, he didn’t bother
    much about TJ, he knows he’ll be fine, he looked back and saw
    that the other male and female corper were doing well, they
    journeyed along the river as the current continued to push them
    down the river, John’s heart raced as he sighted something that
    looked like a crocodile ahead of them, his heart pounded even
    faster as they got near it, it was then he realised that it was just a
    log of wood, he felt relieved as his heart beat reduced, he and Joy
    held on to the log of wood as their Journey continued, TJ looked
    to his side as he saw monkeys on the trees beside the river
    chattering and jumping happily, for one second he wished he
    could take their place, he had had enough worries for that day, he
    looked at John and Joy floating away with the log, he smiled a
    bit, he knew John liked Joy a lot because he had told him about
    her before, he had never seen John go crazy about a girl before,
    at least he was happy for John whose dreams were coming true
    but maybe not the way he had wanted or imagined it, the river
    slowed down as it brought them into a larger river, this was
    probably the end of the river , he thought, he was right, it was the
    end of the river but the beginning of a new journey as they felt
    something like ropes pulling them into the river, they tried to
    scream for help but their words became bubbles as they were
    dragged underwater
    The corpers struggled for air as they were drawn down deeper
    into the river, suddenly a bright light shone and they all became
    unconscious
    ……………………………………………………………

    Joy was the first to wake up in the unusual environment, as she
    opened her eyes a tilapia fish passed in front of her, she was
    shocked as she noticed they were underwater and she could
    breathe, John and the rest too woke up and were shocked but
    amazed that they could breathe underwater, as they tried to
    move they realised that they had been tied down by some
    mysterious sea plant, as they tried struggling to free themselves
    a voice echoed ‘what are you looking for in my kingdom you
    worthless and wicked human beings ‘? They looked around but
    could not find anybody, you fish eaters disgust me and do not
    deserve to be alive, I don’t know why my daughter rescued you
    people from the drowners but you are going to face the panel
    tonight, it was then that the merman showed his self to the
    corpers, he was very handsome and had a the trunk of a human
    being and the rest of his body from his waist was like a fish,
    John had heard of mammy water, he had even seen them in
    movies like H2O but he never imagined it was anything as
    beautiful as that, the merman swam towards them and looked at
    their faces before swimming away, then another figure
    approached them, it was a mermaid, the most beautiful thing TJ
    had ever seen in his life, she came towards them and told them
    how she had rescued them from the drowners, she also told them
    that her father, the king hated human beings and was going to put
    them on trial, if they were found guilty they would be eaten by
    fish, she also told them that they had to pick one of them to be
    their lawyer and that they had an hour before trial, she then
    swam away, they spent the next 45 minutes debating who would
    be their lawyer as John and TJ both studied law, they finally
    agreed that John should be their lawyer as he had taken good
    decisions for them, they had not waited too long when some
    huge mermen came to lead them to trial…

    tbc

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    Hmm this story is interesting….
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    Hmm Corper John i hope you would have enough point to use and defend your fellow Corpers and yourself

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    Next episode

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    Nice start

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    Babatunde DiekolaBabatunde Diekola
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    Nice story, let move on

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    Next pls

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