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    AvatarMartin
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    What did e do

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    Follwing…at least, u av rectified it…but plz continue with episode 22 tomorow

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    Yetunde which boyfriend is Damilola dragging with you because I know AY isn’t your boyfriend

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    EPISODE 22
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    WRITTEN BY SAINT_HAYWHY
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    I had eaten around 8:45pm and was about to sleep when my phone started ringing, it was a call from yetunde.
    Yetunde: Hello Okomi, You can’t even call me since morning.
    Me: No Vex, I wasn’t around.
    yetunde: Well, i will be coming to your house tomorrow evening I really missed your touches.
    Me: You mean?
    Yetunde: shhhh? Good night. (Hanged up)I became Madder at her; I started thinking of how to end all what was on ground soon so that Damilola can come back to campus because examination was fast approaching. I was thinking of these when I slept off.The following morning was a lecture Free day for me, but despite that I still woke up early to take care of the house chores. I also wanted to go to damilola class to meet her H.O.C. So that he could help her on tests and other relating issues like assignments.I left home at around 9:00am in the morning and was going to school when my phone stated rigging I checked it and it was a call from Damilola I picked it.
    Me: Hello dear
    Damilola: Ayomi, good morning
    Me: How was your night?
    Damilola: it was fine, am thinking of coming to school today.
    Me; oh no, don’t do that now everything is under control, infact, I’m on way to your class right now to go and meet your h.o.c to please help you on test relating issues.
    Damilola: Ayoola, I will come let her kill me
    Me: Ah ife mi please don’t risk it.
    Damilola: Ayomi, it not as if I am being rude to you, just that can’t stay at home any longer, my parents’ are becoming Suspicious and they have even started suspecting me wrongly.
    Me: eenh you have to
    Damilola: Don’t worry if she is able to kill me then God wants it to be. be expecting me in the evening. (Hanged up) Immediately after the call, I became unconscious and derailed, is this the way damilola will come and waste her own life?But can’t she wait a little more, and this damilola is strong headed, she will come as she have said.I was thinking all this beside a car parked in front of COSMAS building the same sport where I received dammy’s call.I later left the place and went to damilola’s class. It was my very first time in the class, I was so new to those students. I started looking of how I could speak with one of the students who can take me to the h.o.c. As I was standing, I saw a guy standing alone in front of the class so I decided to approach him.
    Me: Young man, good morning
    Guy: Hello, how may I help you
    Me: please can you take me to the h.o.c of the class
    Guy: (Turned over and pointed a tall dark guy to me) that’s he
    Me: Oh! Thanks so much.I approached the guy
    Me: Hello bro, good morning
    Guy: good morning sir
    Me: please I need you to help me on something.
    Guy: Okay I’m listening.
    Me: There is a lady in this class who has not been around for a while and am having the feelings that she might have been missing either test or assignments or even the both.Please which help can you render to me in that aspect.
    Guy: Well, about test, we have not written any test, but about assignment, the first assignment this semester was given yesterday and we are to submit today. Then we have been writing the attendance though those attendance are not collected they are still with me but the important thing is the assignment.
    Me: Sighs! Please can you allow me to help her write the assignment?
    Guy: Nothing bad, but you shouldn’t worry, I will give the work to someone to write for her.
    me: Waoh! you Are so nice
    guy: blushes
    me: What’s your name?
    Guy: Olumide
    Me: Nice one, I’m Ayoola by name.I dipped my hand inside my trouser and removed my wallet; I opened it and gave him #1000 and paper containing the name and Damilola’s matrix number.
    Olumide: (Collected it) thanks bro
    Me: You are welcome, so let me have your number so that I can be calling you for updates.
    olumide: 080884****
    in the evening around 5pm, I was in my room arranging some stuffs when I heard a knock on my door, “ko ko ko”.
    Me: Yes, who is it?
    Knocker: it’s me Damilola,
    Me: “Shocked”
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    WATCH OUT FOR EPISODE 23

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    Next plz

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    The end is near

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    ****FORGIVENESS MAY COST***,*
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    EPISODE 23&24

    WRITTEN BY SAINT_HAYWHY

    It took me the next 10mins before I opened

    the door for her, as I was still busy arranging

    some stuffs In my room. I opened the door

    after arranging the stuffs then she entered.

    Damilola: what takes you so long to open the

    door for me?

    Me: I’m sorry, I was actually busy .Honestly,

    am not happy with your coming, I don’t like

    the way you have risked your life coming

    here.

    Damilola: I’m sorry I just have to be here, to

    show her am not a coward.

    Damilola was still talking when I heard

    another knock on the door.

    “ko ko ko”

    Me: Who is that?

    Knocker: Honey, please open the door, it’s

    me Yetunde.

    Damilola: (Hissed).

    I looked at Damilola, you see what you have

    caused now?

    Damilola: Open the door for her and let her

    come in and do her worst.

    Yetunde : (Ranted at the door after she might

    have heard female voice in the room) Ayoola,

    open this door or I break it.

    I went for the door and opened it while she

    breaks in. Damilola was shocked as Yetunde

    breaks In, and she stood up to face her while

    Yetunde was backing the door.

    Yetunde: Ayoola, is it because of this thing

    that you have refused to open the door for

    me? After all my warnings. (landed a slap on

    my face)

    (Faced Damilola) You have dared to die; you

    have forgotten that when two ends meet

    there is a big trouble. I am paying you the

    price you have dared for a long time ago, you

    snatched my only love while we were in

    secondary school and you know till now I’m

    still nursing the heartbreak and I couldn’t

    love any man since then till now. I have

    promised myself to avenge these, anytime

    you found love and this is my time to take

    revenge.

    Damilola: But I think this issue have died a

    long time ago when I sincerely shown my

    frigid about it and apologized. And besides

    we were still very small that time.

    Yetunde:” Iyan ogun odun shi n gbona

    felifeli” I have sworn to bring you down

    anytime I see you with Ayoola and I’m doing

    that right now (she dipped her hand inside

    her bag to bring out a gun and pointed it at

    Damilola).

    Damilola, He who lived by the sword shall

    die by the sword.

    As Yetunde was about to pull the trigger of

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    Episode 24

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    As yetunde was about to pull the trigger of

    the gun, I clapped my hands and four

    policemen came in from the bathroom and

    the kitchen, two from the bathroom and two

    from the kitchen

    Police Team leader: Hands up! You better

    respect yourself and drop your gun right now

    or I break your head with my gun.

    Yetunde: (Reluctantly dropped her gun)

    F--k! Ayoola, you set me up. Ah!!!!

    Me: I didn’t set you up alone (I opened up

    my pillow and brought out the tape recorder)

    everything you said has being recorded on

    this tape and it’s going to be used against

    you in the court of law.

    Police team leader: (Pointed at one of his

    boys) you handcuff the brat

    I picked my phone to call DON.

    Me: Hello don,

    DON: Saint Baba

    Me: you won me yesterday and am ready for

    you today, where you dey?

    DON: I dey my home zone with my niggaz.

    Me: Moh block for floxy

    DON: Omo na me and mah niggaz day come o

    Me: no problem, you know say money no be problem
    Two of the policemen took the police van

    containing Yetunde while the other two who

    were not on uniform, took a blue jeep. I

    instructed Damilola to join the jeep. While I

    took bike to floxy.

    The bike took me directly to floxy and as

    usual, I meet DON at the gate with his guys

    waiting for me (apa) to come and flex them.

    We exchanged pleasantries and entered into

    the bar together.

    Me: Barman brought four crates of beer

    DON: lolz, it’s like you are here for real

    business

    Me: Trust me.

    The barman brought the four crates of beer

    and faaji have started when the policemen

    came with the jeep.

    The two policemen came into the bar like a

    customer leaving Damilola in the car.

    They used the round table beside ours and

    also requested for beer.

    Meanwhile DON has dropped his gun on the

    table as his usual culture.

    After 3mins of no move by the policemen,

    one of them signaled to me to take don’s gun

    which I did as if I was playing with it.

    DON: That is death (Referring to the gun in

    my hand) I used it in dealing with anybody

    that f--k up with me.

    Next thing was “hands up everybody”, the

    two policemen pointed gun at the other two

    guys while I pointed gun at DON himself.

    POLICEMAN: if you try to make any move of

    escaping then consider yourself dead.

    DON: Saint Ah! You set me up.

    Me: Cut the crab and shut the f--k up.

    You are killing innocent souls and you are

    proud of it forgetting that every day is for the

    thief and one day is for the owner, you kill

    people to survive. This will serve as a lesson

    to other people in the same act as yours. I

    brought out the tape recorder and showed it

    to him, everything you said yesterday and

    even today has been recorded on this tape, so

    it is advisable for you to shut up because

    anymore things you say shall be used against

    you in the court of law.

    The policemen seized their guns and

    handcuff them.

    POLICE 2: Oya move! (Pushing them).

    When they got to where the police car was

    packed. damilola wined down the mirror for

    DON to see her.

    DON: What!!!

    POLICE 1: Come on shut up

    The police dragged them in the boot and

    drove them to the police station.

    Yetunde, DON and other guys were charged

    to court the following Monday and was

    sentenced to 10years prison terms each..

    THE END

    ****LESSON** **

    NEVER THINK OF REVENGE, WHEN ISSUES COME UP WITH YOU AND PEOPLE AROUND YOU, LEARN HOW TO FORGIVE AND NOT TO FORGIVE ALONE BUT ALSO TO FORGET THOUGH “FORGIVENESS MAY COST” BUT TRY AND AFFORD IT BECAUSE IT SAVES YOU FROM RISKS AHEAD OF YOU AND PAVES WAY FOR NEW THINGS TO COME. ALWAYS REMEMBER THE YORUBA ADAGE THAT SAYS

    “ti a o ba gbagbe oro ana ao ni reni ba sere”.

    TO THOSE IN RELATIONSHIP, LEARN HOW TO FORGIVE YOUR SPOUSE, SHITS ARE BOUNDS TO HAPPEN BUT WHEN IT COMES

    LET LOVE PREVAILS OVER JUDGEMENT____ I

    still remain my humble self SAINT HAYWHY

    A.K.A AJEBUTTER (PEACE)

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    See me soon on your tv

    screen.

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    Not bad …kudos Mr writer

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