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    Episode 1

    Will you marry me? David asked Esther on his kneels, Esther was so surprise and happy, she wasn’t expecting it, tears of joy runs down from her eyes,
    Yes, I will! She said while crying..
    David inserted the ring into her hand, they were both happy, as they locked hands together and went to their home happily.
    David and Esther have known each other from their undergraduate days, during their registration as newly admitted students in the famous university of Ibadan. David needed someone to give him cash to pay some bills as ATM was not allowed, Esther helped him, and the money was later transferred to her, this small episode has made them an inseparable friends..
    Lectures noticed them, student called them husband and wife, their families were aware of their friendship.. Wherever you see Esther, David must be around.. They helped each other with their assignment, read together, and do a lot of things together.
    Esther was always happy whenever any one called her David’s wife, she smiled at it without rejecting or saying anything, while David on the other hand will always caution them, “Esther is my good friend , nothing else is between us” he would always say with a serious look.. This always hurt Esther as she believed David also love her the same way she loves him, but she was never discourage to stopped loving him. she tried to hide the fact that she loves David, but she couldn’t, it was so obvious she is in love with him
    After their graduation, Esther was expecting him to ask her out or propose to her before going for their mandatory one year service, but she was disappointed as David only wish her the same way he did with his friends, ” take care of yourself friend”, he said to her. she wasn’t expecting him to say that to her, at least am his best friend, she thought within herself, they bid themselves goodbye after their graduation
    The distance still didn’t affect their friendship as they continued where they stopped in school, they call each other everyday, chat on phone, visit one another.

    After few month, their posting letters were out, Esther was posted to Ogun state, while David were posted to kadunna.. David visited her to break the news to her
    She was happy they were in the same batch but the distances baffles her,
    Kaduna is far from Ogun state, the chance of seeing each other is very slim, she told David
    That true, but it just a year and.,………
    It not just? 12 months is different from 1 month, she cut in
    I understand, we will always talk on phone, David assured her
    They talked about the preparation, before David departed to his house

    The day before their departure, they both went out to Esther place of choice, eat together, play, gist and had a lot of fun before going to their various houses

    The next day, they both depart to their various camp, from camp to their place of primary assignment.
    Their friendship continues as they always call each other day and night..
    Days rolled into months, and into year, they came back home from their various state of deployment..
    Esther rushed to David house to see him and greet him.. They were both happy to see each other, they gist and talked about there experience.
    Few month later, David secure a job in a big private firm in their state through his father’s connection, he was giving an official car and house.. Esther was able to get a job as a teacher in a private secondary school.. They were both happy for each other as they start another phase of life

    We are done with school, nysc, got a good job, what will happen between us now? She asked herself one day after receiving a call from David. That month, the next month, nothing happened, David didn’t call her for anything called dating or marriage..

    Esther’s parent were disturbing her to bring a man to them.
    Esther, you are no more a kid, a graduate without a fiancé, it not a good thing, her mother would say to her
    Mum, don’t worry, very soon, I will bring him home
    What about David? Esther, I know you love him, it all written all over you, does he feel the same way for you? Her mother asked
    Mum, am not sure, he always says am his good friend, and nothing else is between us, she said sadly

    Then open your heart to someone else, you can’t wait for him forever

    Mum, I really love him, I know he never asked me out or promise me anything about marriage, but I love him, have tried several times to love someone else, but I failed.. I really love David, she said crying

    It okay my baby, her mother hugged her, but Esther have you prayed about it?

    Mum, I started loving David when God revealed to me that he is my husband, I find it difficult to believed, I told our fellowship pastor back in school then, and our pastor at home, they confirmed it, but as a lady I don’t know how to confront him and tell him what I see, so I kept it to myself, hoping God will reveal something to him one day..

    Hummm, her mother signed, it is well my daughter, if God is in it, then he will makes things fall in places at the right time, just be patience with God, I know what will be, will surely be, let wait on God..
    Thank you mum, she hugged her mother..

    David’s parent on the other hands were disturbing David too
    When are you bringing Esther home? His father asked with a commanding voice
    For what? David asked looking at his father
    As a wife?
    David laughed, Dad, Esther is my friend, nothing else
    And who told you friends don’t marry each other?
    Dad, I will get married, don’t worry..
    David would always tell his father

    One day, David called Esther to meet him in a garden. Esther got there and was surprise with what she saw, the garden was beautifully decorated with flowers, beautiful light, nice scent, she saw David with a nice suit, smiling to her,
    David what going on here?
    David went on his kneels, Esther, will you be my queen? Will you marry me pls?

    Back to present
    On getting home, Esther told her parent what happened and they were happy for her
    Their wedding day was fixed and they prepare towards the day..
    It was a period of unending joy for Esther as her long time dream were fulfilled.. There classmate during there school days congratulate her.
    There wedding day was a great day, friends, family, great people were there.. It begins well and ended well
    The couples retired to David’s house, as Esther insist on having her first night with David in her husband house not in a hotel..

    Three month after there wedding, Esther got pregnant, David was so happy, he stopped his wife from cooking, cleaning the house or doing any chores as he does them by himself..
    He will woke up early, clean the house, make breakfast for his wife, before going to work.. When coming back home, he would buy some fruits and things his wife love to eat, they never stopped loving each other

    One day, they were both playing in the living room, Esther place her head on her husband lap, while her husband carress her stomach
    My king, I want to asked you something? Esther said
    Okay dear.
    Why did it took you so long before you asked me out? Is it that you don’t know I love you or you don’t love me back then in school?
    David smiled, Darling, I started loving you the first day we met, I don’t want to lose you back then that was why I didn’t made my intention known to you, that was why i keep you as a friend, and again I don’t want to marry out of God’s will.. I started praying about it, God gave me answer when we were in 200l, I know you love me too, because I could see it, but I don’t want to tell you because we were young Christian who could easily fall into sin, committing fornication, I told God to keep you for me if truly you are my wife until we are both mature spiritually, so as to avoid destroying the plans of God for our life’s through sin.. Esther, I have seen many Christian in courtship, who innocently fall into the sin of fornication, they end up not marrying each other, some marry each other but their marriage carries a big scars of their sin which cannot be removed.. Some backslide because of it, some even end up becoming a murderer by aborting the product of their sin, the baby, some loses God’s plan for their life, some fall into the trap of mismarriage, only few could make it right..
    I was scared this might happened to us if I tell you back then in 200l, we might fall into fornication and then use one sin to cover the other.. If you could remember, we are always together, either in your room or mine room, anything could have happened if we were in courtship then, the Bible says “he that thinketh he stand should take heed, less he falls” I don’t want us to fall, that was why I hid it from you until our service year
    Humm.. Esther signed, you are right dear, but what if I went for another guy then
    I know you can’t, firstly because I know you love me, secondly I told God to keep you for me..
    When am not a money, Esther said laughing
    Am sorry for hurting you dear, David told her
    I thought you were hurting me, but you weren’t, you were only protecting us, and our future, if you don’t truly love me, you might have had sex with me back then and possible not being together again today. Thank dear
    David kissed his wife, who was so happy after knowing the reason why David delayed her

    David and Esther love become the talked of the town, David colleagues were envious of his marriage.. Esther friends are using her marriage as a reference in their home.. People talked about them, they are love bird” they are made for each other”

    Some even tried to separate them by telling David fake news about Esther and telling Esther fake news about David, but the trust they have for each other made them stronger and inseparable..
    My queen, nothing will make me to stop loving you, because you love me even when I don’t deserve it.. David would always tell his wife.

    After nine month, Esther was in labour, her husband rushed her to the hospital, it was Saturday afternoon, the doctor rushed her to the delivery room and attended to her.
    David called his parent and his wife parent about it, he was restless, pacing up and down, he couldn’t sit down, but silent praying to God..
    Two hours pass, four hours, still no news, David was more worried, he wanted to go into the delivery room but was caution by the nurse.. He couldn’t bear it anymore,
    Saturday night came, Sunday morning, afternoon, night, still no news from the doctor
    He couldn’t go home to eat or bath, his parent and mother in law, told him to go home, but he refused..
    How can I eat when my queen is in pains? I made her like that, I can’t leave her, she is suffering, he cries
    Monday morning, the doctor finally came to see David
    Good afternoon sir
    Are you Mrs Esther’s husband?
    Yes, I am..
    Can I see you in my office sir?
    What is the problem? Where is my wife and my child? Talk to me doctor! He screamed at the doctor
    Calm down sir!
    How do you expect me to calm down when my wife is in there for the past two days?
    Calm down my son, his mother said to him
    What is the problem?
    Okay, if you want me to address you here, no problem sir, the doctor said adjusting his glass, sir as you all knows that we doctors only cares, but Gos heals..
    Meaning? David said as he move closer to the doctor
    We tried our best on your wife, but am sorry to tell you we lost her.
    I don’t get you doctor?
    Your wife and the baby is dead, the doctor said sadly
    Noooooooooo! David screamed

    To be continue

    @ Damilola omo Adeoti

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    haba!!! why this kind of start na??? then what is now God’s will for the Union? na wah o

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    ***Episode 2***

    It a lie! Esther can’t be dead! That not true! David screamed as he rushed to Esther’s bed in the hospital,
    Esther wake up, pls let go home, you promise to stay with me, you promise to grow old with me. You promise to love me forever, you promise me for better, for worst please stand up, David said as tears flows freely from his eyes. Esther plssss! The doctor and nurses dragged him away from Esther corpse, he fought back.. Leave me alone! Leave me! I want to talk to my wife, we came here together and we must leave together! He shouted as they dragged him away.

    Esther’s mum on hearing the news of the death of her daughter fainted and her father cries like a baby, everybody was crying. It was a sad moment for everyone.
    David refused to go home, am staying with my wife, she is not dead, she is just asleep, he told everyone
    His parent had to dragged him to their house, he couldn’t sleep through out the night. All what he was saying was “Esther is not dead”! He couldn’t eat for days, his father and step mother pitied him.
    Friends, colleagues, and relatives came to visit him in his father’s house, he was given two month leave from office to mourn his wife.
    David locked himself in his room, he refused to see anyone, he is either crying, talking to himself or scattering things in his room, his parents were so worried about him.
    I hope he won’t harm himself, his father told his step mother.
    God won’t allow that to happen.. His step mother prayed.

    David was weak and tired as a result of denying himself of food and water for days, he talked to himself silently.
    God why? What have I done wrong! Why did you take Esther away from me? You know how much we love ourselves, why? If I have sinned against you please forgive me, if have wronged you in any way, please have mercy, Lord please, return Esther to me, return her oh Lord, He cried all alone in his room.
    He couldn’t sleep, all he could see was Esther’s image, his parents and friends tried to helped him move on, but he refused their help.

    Few week after David lose his wife, he left his parent house and went home, the whole house speaks about Esther, the pictures on the wall, kitchen, bedroom, her clothes, the memories of Esther kept flashing back in his memory
    David picked one of the picture after another, look at them and hugged them.. He couldn’t sleep in the bedroom that night, he slept in the living room holding Esther pictures

    One faithful afternoon while he was at home, a friend of his name Fred from abroad came to visit him.
    David am sorry, I heard about your wife’s death, ‘I can’t believe Esther is gone just like that, that is life David, you need to move on’, Fred said.
    ‘Humm.. Move on? How can I move on with life without Esther? She was my mother, my sister, my life, she was everything to me, life without her have been so terrible, Esther practically worships me. I really love her Fred.’ David wept
    ‘I know, it okay, but you know Esther won’t be happy seeing you this way either. Do you believed if she was alive she will be happy seeing you like this? You need to move on to make her happy wherever she is, you need to be strong.’ Fred said patting him
    ‘Thank so much Fred, I have heard you. How is your family over there?’
    ‘We are all fine, my wife send her greeting..
    My regards to her too’
    David lived a lonely life after the departure of his wife, he stopped keeping friends, both male and female, he stopped his parent from coming to his place to greet him, he goes to work in the morning, come back late at night, looked at Esther pictures and hugged them till he fell asleep.

    Three years after David lose his wife he refused to remarry or think about any girl, his parent was so worried about him, so they invited him to their house one afternoon
    ‘David, I want you to remarry, I know you love your wife, but it been three years now, you need to move on and have children, you can’t remain like this forever’. his father said
    ‘That is true David, am also worried, the same way your father is worried, we want you to start thinking of how to remarry’. his step mother said to him .
    ‘Thank you dad and mum, I really appreciate your concern, but dad am sorry to tell you that am not ready to marry, I don’t even have the heart to love someone else’.
    ‘Are you telling me am not going to have grand children?’ His father asked angrily
    This is your wife, he said pointing to his step mother, if you want to have a grandchild, make your wife pregnant and let the child get married’.. David said as he stood up ready to leave for his house.
    ‘Are you talking to me like that?’ His father asked.
    ‘Am sorry dad, am not just ready.. I will call you later,’ he walked out
    ‘Please calm down, I know he will listen to us as time goes on, let give me some time to think about it’.. The step mother told her husband who was seriously boiling with anger.

    David was confused and started having a change of mind on his decision not to marry again, people around him were all disturbing him to marry again.. His friends, relatives, colleagues, Parents. After giving it much thought, he decided to put it into consideration, but firstly he said he was going to pray about it.

    David start praying for a second chance to marry again and God gave him a second chance and directed his step in marrying the right person
    He met Juliana the fourth year after Esther’ death, they fell in love with each other, David was alive again after he met Juliana,
    She was just like Esther, David thought within himself
    Juliana’s office is not far from David’s office, this made them to see each every day..

    David parent were happy to see their son alive again… They invited Juliana over and thanked her for coming into their son life.

    Their wedding day was fixed and they had a low key wedding. Juliana move into David’s new house, and they live together happily.

    One morning, Juliana was in the bedroom preparing for the day when she felt dizzy and started throwing up, David was worried about her and took her to the hospital
    Juliana was confirmed pregnant, David was so happy. He cancelled all his appointment for the day as he drove Juliana home to celebrate the good news
    They informed their parent about the good news and they were also happy for them.

    Juliana pregnancy was six month old when she was rushed to hospital by her neighbour as her husband was out of the house.
    David heard the news from work because his neighbor called him and rushed to the Hospital.

    He got to the hospital and was not allowed to see his wife, the doctor invited him to his office
    ‘Are you Mrs Juliana’s husband?’ the doctor asked
    ‘Yes, I am sir’
    ‘Sir, immediately your wife was admitted two hours ago, we have been attending to her, but am sorry to tell you that you need to transferred her to another standards hospital’ the doctor said with a concern look.
    ‘Why doctor? Are you telling me your hospital is not standards enough’. David said angrily
    ‘No sir, it just that your wife needs special attention and we don’t have the facilities here, am so sorry’.
    Juliana was transferred to another hospital immediately
    David couldn’t go to work, he called his boss and told him he won’t be able to make it to work
    First day, second day, David didn’t hear anything from the doctor and he was not allowed to see his wife either.
    He was so scared and worried, on the third day, he was sitting down in the reception when a nurse came to call him.
    ‘Sir, the doctor wants to see you in his office’.
    ‘Okay, thank you’.. He rushed into the office as if he is being pursue.
    ‘Good afternoon sir,’ the doctor greeted him. ‘Good afternoon doctor, please what is happening here, how is my wife, why am I not allowed to see her?’ He said shouting
    ‘Calm down sir, I must tell you the truth, your wife’s health is very critical, am not sure if she can survive it, we are actually trying our best to save her and the baby, but anything can happen’.
    ‘Doctor, you mean there is probability of my wife not surviving?
    Exactly sir, she might not.. Her case is getting worst everyday.
    David was shocked, he buried his head in his hand..
    God, what is happening again?

    To be continue

    omo Adeoti

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    Next please

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    Hmm… What kind of trial is this?

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    Hmmm…..,dis is serious.

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