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    Written by: Abike

    INTRODUCTION

    Writer’s POV
    When you have money,everything one
    desire for will surely be granted, when
    there is money you will know what life is,
    when there is money you will understand
    what it means to be rich and when there is
    money your behavior and attitude will
    speak a lot about you,
    Let me take you all into the life of a young
    millionaire who goes by the name ‘JAMAL’
    He is a millionaire, his net worth is eighty
    million dollars, Jamal is as rich as anything,
    he never long for anything before he have
    it, Jamal is a Muslim but he prays just once
    in awhile,He is not too tall not to short but
    really fair in complexion with a curly hair,
    he parted his left eyebrow into two which
    gives him a sexy look,
    a lovely cute natural pink lips, Jamal is a
    guy with great muscles and six packs, He is
    an attractive guy, the only son and only
    child to his Dad and Mom, his Dad is no
    more so he took over his Dad’s businesses
    both in Nigeria and in overseas,
    he is a very busy guy, Jamal’s mom is a
    money spender, all she cares about is for
    Jamal to always put the sum of two million
    naira in her account every three weeks
    with a storage of foods and provisions in
    her two houses plus changing her
    wardrobes every two months,Jamal has
    never for once failed to do his duty to his
    Mum even though she never care about his
    well being,
    Jamal is 28 years old, he finished his
    education at the age of 24, Jamal is very
    smart in everything but he has some little
    problems, like phobia of crowd, scared to
    interact with people most especially ladies,
    the only people he interacts with is his two
    bodyguards, Daniel and David, they are his
    friends, brothers and everything,
    they means a lot to him and he means a lot
    to them,he also interacts with his mum
    and his sex mate Bella, we will talk about
    Bella later, The other people Jamal interacts
    with are his managers both in Nigeria and
    overseas,he interacts with the head of
    maids in his house and his best friend
    Rokanmi,and his personal Doctor When
    Jamal has a meeting or has a speech in any
    event he will have to use a medicine,
    the medicine helps him a lot to cool his
    fear, He is not really a lonely guy but a
    silent one, He will never argue with you,
    and if he finds out that any situation wants
    to leads to an argument he will be the first
    to apologise, either he is guilty or not, and
    to avoid issues or problem,
    he will tell you Ok just to agree with
    whatever you are saying, he chooses to be
    an easy going person with a simple and
    straight life, he is a social person, his
    favorite song is hip hop songs, and about
    Bella, She is his sex mate since two years
    ago, Actually bella was the first girl Jamal
    will ever have sex with and she has always
    be the one, two times in a month she will
    visit Jamal’s house and every morning
    before she leaves,
    Jamal always transfer two hundred
    thousand naira in her account wit a sum
    of fifty thousand naira for her Tfare, Jamal
    has never be a Casanova, he doesn’t deals
    with ladies,
    just Bella and she knows where she stands
    in his life, many times Jamal’s mom has
    brought him a lady, but he declined them
    by paying them off without letting his
    mum know, the only thing his Mom knows
    is that the ladies do tell her that they can’t
    date his son, So guys let me take you to the love story of Jamal in

    MY IRON WOMAN

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    LINK TO AVAILABLE EPISODES

    Episode 1

    Episode 2-6

    Episode 7-9

    Episode 10-13

    Episode 14-17

    Episode 18-22

    Episode 23-24

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    waiting patiently

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    Daniel EdemDaniel Edem
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    bring it on

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    go on

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    EPISODE ONE

    Written by: Abike
    Episode one
    Writer’s POV
    It morning already Jamal was getting dress
    up for work after he took his shower with
    the help of his mind, in Jamal’s house, he
    has twenty maids in his house, Four cooks,
    eight cleaners for the house, four maids in
    care of getting foods from Market, four
    maids in care of his clothes and
    shower,And his guards are fifteen in
    number, four gardeners and two gatemen,
    David and Daniel are his drivers and
    personal guards also his PA, Jamal got
    dressed by the help of his maids David and
    Daniel came in,they met him staring at his
    laptop,he was checking out some things
    on it
    Daniel:Boss, the cars are ready
    David:And the boys are set sir’
    Bunmi the head of maids came in she said
    Bunmi:Sir your food is ready sir
    David: What’s he having for breakfast?
    Bunmi: Omelette and bread with coffee
    Daniel: You can go
    Bunmi:Yes sir ‘Bunmi left immediately
    while David help Jamal to close his laptop,
    he put the laptop in a bag handing it over
    to Daniel
    Daniel:Are you crazy or something, why
    would you give me that to carry?
    David:Screw you Daniel ‘Jamal muttered
    and said’
    Jamal:Oh God! Not again
    Daniel:You s--k David
    David:The last time I checked I think am
    still the older brother here’Jamal staring at
    both of them
    Daniel:You must be a fool so that one
    week is freaking you right?
    David: Oh! So you think it’s easy to be a
    week older than you brat!
    Daniel:You punk!
    Jamal:Guys guys guys, Please that’s ok, I
    will take my laptop by myself
    Both:No you won’t Boss’Both shouted at
    the same time, looking at each other
    David:Don’t worry Boss I will take it
    Daniel:Punk!
    David:Brat! ‘ Jamal Escuze them and walk
    out of the Room, David wanted to raise a
    fist on Daniel’s face but He was stopped by
    Jamal who came in again
    Jamal:Are you guys coming out to eat or
    you want me to eat alone? David and
    Daniel forget it ok please just come out
    and eat,guys come out ‘Jamal had to
    dragged both of them by thier hands
    outside since they kept on giving each
    other dead looks
    AT THE DINNING
    The breakfast was served for Jamal,
    likewise David and Daniel, Jamal don’t eat
    alone if David or Daniel are not at home, he
    will rather go to work with an empty
    stomach, When the two guys arrive it is
    only then Jamal will take them out to eat
    together with them, He believed one thing
    about them,even though they fights alot he
    believed that they are the only ones he
    could talk to freely and share his problems
    with them, he believed that he is safe with
    David and Daniel
    Daniel:Boss,I got an email from your
    managers in Overseas, they said you are
    having two months holiday for now, they
    said they wants you to rest for the journey
    you went through this month
    David:Of course it was so exhausted, every
    two days we fly out of the country for this
    month alone
    Daniel:I think it’s up to fifteen times, from
    USA to England back to USA again to Dubai,
    to Egypt,to Europe back to Nigeria in Abuja
    to Dubai again, infact am lost in counting
    David: Escuze me do you have to count it
    Daniel:Screw you,Lazy bone, actually boss
    they asked you to come and do some
    signings in Dubai and Egypt but it was
    fixed to the same day
    Jamal:It’s ok, since you guys know how we
    do it,and you have access to my signature,
    one of you should go to Dubai the other
    one should go to Egypt to do the signing I
    will handle the businesses in Nigeria I
    don’t feel like traveling also am so
    exhausted
    David: I guess I will go to that Dubai
    Daniel: Actually I will go to Egypt cause
    there is a man there that his work is really
    slacking so I told the managers to study
    him a bit, I will like to know how he is
    doing now
    Jamal:Oh sounds great
    David:Boss you have lunch with your friend
    tomorrow at 2pm
    Jamal:Oh yeah Rokanmi, is he back
    David: Yeah, yesterday night
    Jamal: sounds great fix that up for me,
    guys let’s eat we are late for the meeting,
    After the food, four cars are ready, Jamal
    was escorted out by David and James,
    David drive while a guard sat beside David
    at the front, Jamal sat at the back while
    Daniel sat with him, Two cars drove out
    then Jamal’s car then a car followed while
    one of the gate men close the gate while
    the other gate man continue eating his
    food, Bunmi instructing the girls to clear
    the dinning, she was moving up and down
    supervising the maids on thier work
    Later in the day, Jamal was coming back
    from work suddenly he sighted a lady who
    gave a guy a slap on his cheek
    Jamal:Oh my God, do you see that
    Daniel: What boss?
    Jamal:Stop the car, stop the car David
    Daniel:But why boss? ‘David stop the car
    while Jamal stepped out of the car, the
    guards rushed out to guard him
    Jamal: Guys please you can all go back
    inside the car please, am fine, ‘The guards
    left him with David and Daniel
    Daniel:Boss, why are we stopping here?
    Jamal:I also don’t know, I just feel like
    watching that scene
    David:You mean those that are fighting?
    Jamal:Yeah! ‘David and Daniel was
    surprised, After the fight has ended, the
    guy pleaded to the lady beside the lady
    that slapped the guy while the guy run
    away, Jamal said in a confused way
    Jamal:Can, c… Actually can o… Can one of
    you help me to call that lady,I just wanna
    have a word with her
    Both:What?!
    David: Boss! ‘Daniel had no choice but to
    move closer to the two ladies and said
    Daniel:Hi girls, The lady who slapped the
    guy ignored Daniel while the other one
    reply him with a smile
    Tomiwa:Am tomiwa
    Daniel:And you please?’The other lady
    ignored him, he felt a little bit
    embarrassed, He said, ‘Actually my boss
    over there will like to have a moment with
    you, i mean he wants to talk to you please’
    The lady make a smirk and said
    Lady:Who the hell is your boss, the
    president or the governor?Or the king?
    Anyway tell your Boss, tell him that I Niniola
    will never come to him and if he is blessed
    with his two legs he should come over
    here and if he is on wheelchair, push him
    to come here,So now can you please f--k
    off! Daniel was shock and at the same time
    surprised,he muttered
    Daniel:Wow!
    What Next???

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    Sited @ front row bring it on…….

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    Here comes the iron woman

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