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    A man without understanding become foo in the presences of the wise.
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    SOUTHERN CATELAND.

    CateLand is located at the green kingdom in saudi arabia where the most powerful man lives.

    in the center of the community, at the big mansion. in the big living room sat a man in his late fifties. his hairs were no longer that dark as usual.

    ‘i’m james williams, the wise man, i’ve been running my business sinces when i’m 18 years old. i now become the most powerful man because of my zeal, rich and wicked act’ the man said laughing at the boy in his front.

    two guards were holding the boy.

    ‘i’m sorry williams james, it’s a mistake i don’t also like messy things’ the boy begged.

    ‘shit! shut up, no mistake’ williams james barked.

    ‘waste him!’ he said as they dragged the boy out. sooner, a gunshot was heard.

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    yes, NO MISTAKE is here. episode 1 loading.

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    Episode 1

    NO MISTAKE
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    EPISODE 1
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    northbase/america-11:22a.m, army base.

    the location is dam looky, everything were in action. on the field, many trainers were training wearing black t-shirt and army trouser. they were really training hard and seriously no country would ever want to face them except cateland williams james the ‘no mistake.’

    “left……right…….left……right, forward go march!” commander phil said at the forward as others were taking action given.

    inner office.
    a man is seen, he’s old and smart man. his names are angel carls. the general of army in america. many security armies stood at the entrance as a guard to angel carls.

    at the front door a young boy stood, he’s about 6 years old. he’s handsome.
    ‘hey young boy, what are you doing here?’ a lady in army uniform asked.
    ‘i’m here for my dad!’ the boy said in a cool voice that could make any girl fall for him.

    ‘wow! nice. who’s your dad?’ the lady asked.
    ‘carls ange…..l’ the boy said almost losing control.

    ‘general carls angel?’

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    ‘Yes Ma’ The boy said looking like he’s making some force to laugh out.

    ‘follow…..me’ the young girl said as the boy nodded and followed her into the office.

    Carls Angel’s first glances to check who’s entering falls on the young boy.

    ‘sir? this young boy is here to see you!’ the lady said.

    ‘thank you julie!, but mick what are you doing here?’ general Carls Angel barked.

    ‘dad, am tired of staying home. i want something i can see and play with’ Mick said in low tone.

    ‘and so?, here doesn’t look like a park or cinema. when next i caught you here, you gonna make a full pay for it. Tell Matt to drop him home’ he commanded julie.

    Julie knew the general is upset just because they were dating and mr Carls Angel, once said:

    ‘i love you only and nobody. since i gat no child’

    this why he reacted to the young Mick. Mick is the only son and child of the late general’s wife.

    Mrs Hana died during the last raid by williams james.

    Instead of Mrs Julie getting angry, she went to boy and held his two hands.

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    Mrs Julie held Mick hands and the said: ‘dear, don’t mind dad. he’s only making sure you’re fine. isn’t it?’

    ‘you’re right ma… what’s ya name?’ mick asked.

    General Carls Angel grimaced at the two them helplessly.

    ‘why would mick showed up? but is this the right thing, julie now know i have a son. f--k!’ he said in thought.
    ‘they smiled to each other. wow, is julie the best lady to marry’
    ‘she’s beautiful, and also nice’
    ‘she’s single and rich’
    ‘julie’s also in white house just with me. her mind is so nice’

    ‘tell me what else a man want?’ he asked in thought.

    ‘I’m Julie, M.c’ julie replied.

    ‘why M.c?’ Mick asked.

    ‘Mick Carl’ julie said and mick just smiled.

    ‘can i leave now?’ general C.a asked as he moved out of the office.

    ‘let’s go, it’s late’ julie said as the left the office.
    ‘which school do you love?’ julie asked.

    ‘Army School’ He said and julie sighed looking at the young boy.
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    cateland-saudi arabia
    ‘hey, we’re looking like mice! we need the american dead. ours target for now is Gen.’
    TBC

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    Bãd bøy
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    Seated bro

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    @ollydy
    brother man roger on

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    I haven’t understood diz tori ooo

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    @Bad Boy You’ll Understand as we continue

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