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    EPISODE 25
    Dad? I mean I have agreed to marry the man; allow me do things my way. You will do no such thing; you think you are smarter than I am. He burst out and banged my door in my face.

    I quickly rushed to where I damped my phone earlier. Look talk to your gossip partner; I don’t want him planning my wedding. I will have the contract sent to you early; my family lawyer is on it. Quickly I hanged up before he could say anything.

    Later in the evening, I came back from work and met nectar talking with my dad. I see you reported me, this should be your last, and you may have your way now.

    I just shoved an eye at him and nectar, I saw my dad walking pass me. I received the document, and I have already signed, said nectar. Hope you read it through, because I will not be happy if you violate any of it.

    I do not need to read it, whatever makes you happy am fine with it. Good night, I said without even knowing it.

    Drake, can you handle the rest of the wedding. No guests, just my family and you guys, probably his family. In my dad’s house, Kate do you really need to do this? Drake, I asked you to marry me remember and you seemed not interested. It is just for a year; I will be out sooner than you know it.

    You three can always come and visit, I will miss you people though. So when is the wedding. He said with so much sadness showing in his voice. it is in a month drake! I just want it done with already. I responded sadly too.

    I buried myself into work, for the rest of the following weeks. I kept ignoring Matt’s calls; she tried seeing me at the office severally. That girl doesn’t give up.

    That morning I saw myself in the midst of unfamiliar faces, of course he is entitled to bring his family members to his wedding, but not this much. Is this even a wedding? I asked my mind hoping for an answer I already know.

    To be continued

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    Hmmmm Tanx dear 4 d updates and good story to keep up BELLA.and as 4 kate dad its only Time dat will teach him a lesson.

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    Kate will have no choice other than to make d marriage work after d birth of dat child bcause nectar will nt mind going to any lenght when he finds out d child is truely His.

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    Next!

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    Dialogue: How would you describe Kate’s behaviour so far?

    Has the mother failed in bringing her up properly?

    Did she make the right decision in marrying Nectar?

    Do you think she should losen up a little bit.

    Though we are nowhere near the end yet, how would you want kate to treat nectar, and what punishment do you have for Mr. wilson

    Lets dialogue this morning, if i see 10 comments i will release 5 updates at once

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    she will surely loosen up….but wait…..she is supposed to know that nectar is the father of her baby na……

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    Atimes i find it hard to know who is making a statement, i mean who is talking in the story. Can u pls signify who talk i mean who is making a statement. Atimes i will think that its nectar talking when its kate’s dad. So pls do something abt it @bella

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    @priceless she knows but her parent doesnt knw

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