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    Sorry guyz…. Had a network challenge since yesterday. will update soon. Dont forget to bring the criticisms on, i need them to improve YAAh

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    I just got home late, after those three decided to cheer me up after coffee morning
    As I entered, I greeted my mum, who just sighed “Thank God”,
    Probably because I came home safe, I took a step up the stairs, when I heard his husky voice
    Where do you think you are coming from by this time of the night?
    I just froze at one point, and managed to look back and my mum beckoned me to be quiet
    She knew we were at the verge of exchanging words again, since that has become our routine
    Then he spoke up again, am I not asking you a question, “young girl”
    I hate it when he calls me young girl, for crying aloud I blurted out
    Dad am 27years old, in case you forgot
    Then he flared up again, I could not describe the fury in his eyes at that moment
    I was not sure if his eyes were that red because I told him not to call me young girl or because I said something else
    He always become so angry like a lion, when it comes to my age or birthdays
    Nevertheless, I just regarded it as if the man does not like me that much
    Then he spoke up again,
    I told you if you want to be sleeping with every man in trousers; you had better leave my house
    I will not come home and my house is not complete, I just looked straight ahead and trying so hard to control my anger.
    Though I was fuming inside, I cannot stand mum being in the center of everything again
    I hate to see her cry because my Dad decided to be so cold towards his family
    Sometimes I wonder if he gave birth to me and if he ever loved the woman he married
    After several noises from him, I walked straight to my room, and laid down
    I heard a knock on my door, and mum entered
    To be continued

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    Kate, I told you not to talk back at him when he is fuming at you
    However, you disobeyed me out there again
    Mum, I can’t stand Dad treating me that way, am not a kid anymore
    I just want him to recognize me as his own
    On the other hand, am I not his daughter?
    Had the table been turned to the other side, I would understand.
    However, with him, I do not seem to get it
    Mum just stood up at once and scared the hell out of me
    That is supposed to mean, Mum asked
    Your food is in the microwave in case you get hungry
    Then she walked out
    I slapped my mouth, asking myself in deep thought what I said wrong
    Mum avoided me the whole week, Dad just hiss anytime he bumped into me in the house
    I just wanted to be daddy’s girl, why won’t he give me that chance, was it my fault I am his only child
    I was in deep thought, when she walked into my office
    Stacy buzzed in; informing me Eve was looking for me
    I raised up my face and my gaze fell on the figure walking towards my direction
    I just dropped what I was doing and stared,
    Can I sit down; I nodded my head to her question
    She took her sit, and there was silence for a while
    Then she stood up, look Kate, I don’t know why am even here in the first place
    I guess to kill me finally, I retorted
    Common Kate, we both know I wasn’t at fault, if you were in my shoes would you have said anything
    To be continued

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    Remember the girl’s code; see and do not tell, she hissed with a pathetic face
    I also remember the code, which said no snatching of another’s partner. I answered her
    I guess you could have made an exception for this one, at least I told you I was going to the house that day, and you could have dropped a hint
    I was so surprised I was so calmed, talking to this betrayal of a friend
    How was I going to do that when you really want to move in with him?
    I told you several times to take your time that was a hint enough Kate
    Therefore, you just came to my office to apportion blames on our failed friendship or my failed love.
    Infact get out of my office, she just sat there staring at me
    Then she finally spoke up, to think I just came here to invite a very good friend to my wedding
    It seemed like she is still holding a grudge against the wrong person
    Annette was right; I should not have come here in the first place
    She dropped what seemed like an invitation card on my desk and walked out
    I slumped in my chair, thinking if I did the right thing, throwing her out of my office
    I had lunch with drake, where we discussed Eve’s presence in my office the previous week
    He could not help but just stare at me throughout the lunch
    He did not say much and I was wondering if he was even listening to me at all
    I decided to talk to mum, about Eve’s wedding, I had a soft spot for my friends
    Until the three decided to betray me, but we had plans, we took a whole vacation to plan how our weddings were going to be the talk of town, because it was going to be us three at the same time
    Nevertheless, what do I get now; they are moving on without me, should I cry over this again
    Mum wiped my face with the back of her hand telling me to find a way and forgive them including the b---h herself; Matilda
    I told her that would not be possible, and then my dad walked in
    To be continued

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    Obviously in a good mood
    Mum quickly stood up, as if she was afraid of him
    He just walked pass us to his room, I looked at his shadow then back at my mum
    Mum are you sure you both are okay, has he been beating you
    No my daughter, your father isn’t like that, he has anger issues but has never laid a hand on me
    How do you even cope with him in this house, I can’t cope but am still here because I want to be sure you are fine, that is why I haven’t moved out yet mum,
    Because am so sure you aren’t telling me the truth here, I have eyes you know
    I see what you are going through; I mean dad has never been nice to you ever since I started growing up
    Moreover, how could you love a man like that?
    Come here my daughter, she took me in her arms like am still a kid; there are things you will never understand
    I ended up taking her out for a movie that evening which she kept saying she is too old for
    I was determined however to find out what those two are hiding from me
    We got home with dad furious why mum was not home early,
    I was surprised she just said sorry and went inside
    I feel the hurt burning inside her and I could do little to make everything go away
    I mean I have a job of my own, which my mum made sure I inherited
    I was deep in thought when my phone rang in my bedside drawer; I had no idea when I kept it there
    I picked up and it was drake
    Sweetheart, longtime
    What do you say about boys hang out Saturday 7:00pm, the usual joint
    We talked for a while and I drifted to bed, thinking about having a long chat with my dad soon
    He cannot keep shutting us all out for 22years, since I was five he was never around that much
    Mum keeps running tiredly every day until she got house cleaners
    To be continued


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    I am here

    Thanks JummyBabe, i appreciate.
    I know you didnt like the ending of my last story Love Me Again
    Eyaaah sorry, will try my best this time around.

    Would be nice if you give me a gist on how you want this one to end

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    Correct bae @freshgirl
    banana will fall now

    coz am with banana here

    WF Jay Rae, thanks for coming once again. Dont just read without criticising

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    ride on

    Chilovely, i see you too. I appreciate your ride all the way here

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