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    Ocean of madness

    (Story by Prisca Ezeh)
    Episode 1

    “Haaa!! You did all this to me?..you are very wicked!”

    My name is Luciana.. Born into a wealthy family which showered so much love on me.. I was given everything..a nice school and hoping after a become a graduate.. My visa will take me out of this country called NIGERIA.. I have an elder sis named Juan … She is older than me with 8 years..i am just 21 and she’s 29.. I was more beautiful (took my mum’s figure and most especially her sexy catish eyes and lips) *giggling*
    Though my sister was older than me, she was still the most beautiful, light-skinned and longer hair, she was a little bit hairy though.. But Fate twisted it the day i begged her to help me buy bread because i was on my period

    “Sis Juan help me na” i begged
    “You can disturb oo..haba!”
    “You know i am on my painful flow..please i can’t walk properly”
    “And you know am chatting with the love of my life and i can’t possibly keep him waiting without no response online”
    “Please please?”
    “Okay let me rush there, better don’t read my messages oo”
    “I cross my heart..i won’t”

    She picked the money and went out in a haste ready to be back by 2 minutes later..
    I was waiting at home until someone rushed inside the compound shouting my name…i rushed out
    “Luciana! Luciana!!”
    “Yes yes”
    “Come oo..your sis was among those gas exploded on their face!!”
    “Jesus!.. Sister Juan oo!!..but is she okay?”
    “Yes but her face was badly burnt!”
    “Oya let’s go oo”
    “Yes yes!!”

    And off we went.. We got there see dead bodies..i looked around and saw Sis Juan crying in pain..by passer were so amazed and immediately the ambulance landed
    I was speechless.. I ran to her
    “Sister sister”
    “Get away from me oo!” Juan still crying in pain
    “It’s Lucy..am here..the ambulance is here..you will be fine”
    “Madam move aside..we need to carry the injured”
    I moved aside to let them do their work
    They carried Sister Juan into the van and drove off
    I was crying silently..i didn’t know what to do

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    Ocean of madness

    (Story by Prisca Ezeh)
    Episode 2

    I just rushed home and called our parents who travelled for a couples trip..
    “Hello mummy”
    “Yes dear”
    “Mummy sister Juan oo”
    “Calm down what happened?”
    “Gas exploded on her face..right now she’s at the hospital”
    “Jesus!!.. What hospital”
    “I think Immaculate touch hospital”
    “Okay..I and your father will be there!”

    The call ended and i rushed to get dressed..
    I got to the hospital an hour later..the nurses said she was undergoing operation and was at the theatre..i was scared praying on God to show my sister kindness

    2 hours later my parents landed, we all waited in anticipation and hoping on God’s miracle.. After 6 hours it was midnight..Sister Juan was taken out of the theatre and transferred to the ward
    We followed them but the doctor called in my dad at the office..
    I and Mum waited, we sat by her bed side praying for her
    Mum decided to go back home with dad since he has finished talking to the doctor
    “Mum i will love to stay by Sister Juan”
    “Dear you need rest”
    “No..i caused all this…i should have been the one who needed to lie here on this bed if not i didn’t ask her to help me buy bread”
    “Don’t be too hard on yourself.. Juan will be fine”
    “Dad what about her face..the face is covered with bandages”
    Dad bowed his head and continued
    “The doctor confirmed her face will heal but will never remain as before..she might look deformed..we shouldn’t give her a mirror or allow her see herself..it might kill her..anything mirror must be taken away..understand??”
    “Yes dad” i looked at her and felt pity
    “What about her fiancée..will he still love her?”
    I said to myself
    Mum and dad left and i had no choice to go along with them promising to come back the next day..

    To be continued

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    HenrymaryHenrymary
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    She will wake up but her face wnt be d xame again

    The story looks familiar tho
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    Hmmmm problem from d beginning

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    Ride on

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    Hmmmmmm. Juan am sorry for you

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    @henrymary thanks for notifying

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