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    Rise of the claw

    In world full of strive,the hope of mans comes great loss when the destruction begin seems it will be no end, the fight between light and Darkness came into reality when an armies of evil rise on begin to begin to torment man kind, the universe need a hero they need champion that they can rely on, and hero that’s going to stop strives in the world.
    Rise Characters
    Jarvis=main protagonist
    Hoxo= main antagonist
    Savat= Hoxo lieutenant
    Fang= Hoxo lieutenant
    Darot= Hoxo lieutenant
    Mr James= Jarvis dad
    Mrs James= Jarvis mom
    King Vara= one of the king in the eastern
    Jason= Jarvis brother
    Uncle Frank= Mr James brother
    Jerry= Team captain
    Maddy= Jerry brother
    Karl= Jerry colleagues


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    Chapter 1

    In the kingdom of Razia a fearful beast like a man set his sight with his minions to take over the city and to erased mankind out of it now making his planned to be succedeed,he become stronger and powerful having controlling eviles powers and supernatural abilities, he come into power making everything worse, killing the of Razia kingdom who is trying to protect his peoples from the enemy.
    The villain called Hoxo become very furious and unstoppable and with his minions why proving to be mighty and supreme in the universe, he will decide and no is dare to stop him, he who ever failed to that he would force them to do hard labour later will kill them or kill them immediately if he wished becoming most fearful villain in the entire kingdom

    ( Hoxo on a mountain )

    Hoxo: I am Hoxo the tormentors of mankind, I killed with just a single swords, I fought many armies, from the strongest to the weakest I overcome them all and no one will stop me out of this,because after me no one.
    ( a servant come to in,bowing down )
    Servant: my lord, commander Fang want to see you
    ( shivering with fear )
    Hoxo: let him come in.
    ( the servant quickly run out calling Commander Fang, bowing down )
    Hoxo: you want to see me
    Fang: yes my precious lord, the great one
    Hoxo: many called me great one with great joy, just as you are, but still many called me bad one,not in my sight they hate me but they can’t say it in my face, they are afraid of Hoxo the great one.
    ( he paused )
    What did you come for
    ( Commander Fang rise up his head )
    Fang: I had a revelation, it reveals to me that their is going to be a new hero, he want to stop you, and wanted to dethrone you, bringing justice to the world.
    ( Hoxo smiled )
    Hoxo : does his mother not tell him who am I, listen to me, I crushed brave warriors both great , both strongest and weakest.
    ( his eyes turn red as he speak )
    In the next seven days I will be destroying this kingdom once and for all,and I will be expecting who so ever brave enough to confront me, after that, I will takes my leave setting my sight to destroy the whole universe, and I will all this world, making this kingdom as my headquarter)
    ( his eyes turn normal )
    Fang: whatever say, your wish is my wish for you all.
    Hoxo: not only that,prepare for war in the east, we have a villain mutant like me, I wanted to destroy him and take on his armies with me, we shall invade them all, and we shall overcome tell commander Darot and Commander Savat to get ready
    Fang: as you have said.


    Jarvis wake up,seeing the sun shine brighter he quickly dress up running out of Mr James hut.
    Jarvis: oh no I am late I supposed to be in the farm right now.
    ( he quickly take his baskets running to the farm he did not notice that no one has step outside, within a few minutes he arrived,looking everywhere searching for his father and his relatives )
    Dad,mom,uncle frank,Jason where are you guys
    ( he was surprised )
    “Is it a joke”
    ( He wondered )
    May be I will be the first person to get into farm today
    ( suddenly his watch fall down, he quickly pick it up immediately,)
    I taught I have lost this watch
    ( on seeing the time, he was astonished,he begin to feel strange )
    What is happening to me,what wrong with me.
    ( unfortunately he could see a ghost,then begin to step back,not knowing he fall into a strange pit, then the ghost vanished )


    Commander Savat and commander Darot come inside
    Commanders: oh great lord
    Hoxo: why did you come at this time, have you forgotten my rules
    Savat: no lord, we had come to let you know what is going on
    Hoxo: I have seen it, through my vision power, the Claw gate sealed for about a century years ago as been open back.
    Darot: yes lord,what will we do, we don’t know where the gate his located.
    Hoxo: Fang will know, he will smell the place.
    ( Fang appeared )
    Fang: oh the great one
    Hoxo: where was the gate of the claw located.
    Fang: wait
    ( Fang perform his magical power, conducting the spirit )
    Hoxo: what have you see
    Fang: this will be hard, I do not know, the spirit doesn’t gives the location of the place it, only a person know the place.
    Hoxo: how can that be
    Fang: the spirit will lead the person to the place
    Hoxo: then how would we know the person
    Fang: he is a teen, he was born to be human not like us.
    ( Commander Fang use his magical power to view the person )
    Hoxo: so this boy,I think he might be the chosen one.
    Savat: I taught that.
    ( Hoxo rise on his feet, levitating and his eyes turn red, which means his powers are possessing him )
    Darot will searched for him
    Darot: your wish is my command
    ( she bow )
    Hoxo: now you warriors will go to the east, I will lead you, we shall take the king crown and I will place it on my table,and all the crown I have token on the kings head would fifty six,and this will be the fifty senventh.
    ( he sit down on his sit, and his eyes turn normal, as it was before )


    After sometimes Jarvis rise up, seeing that he was not dreaming, then look his surroundings,he was surprised
    Jarvis: so this place exist,I heard much about this place my dad told me sometimes ago.
    ( he then see a bright light coming from a place )
    What is this
    ( then heard a voice )
    Voice: come on Jarvis
    Jarvis: please,who are you,show me your self
    Voice: I am not an enemy,you are in the gate of the claw
    Jarvis: then how will I believe you
    Voice: I am the Awesome the great one
    Jarvis:I gotta find a way to go out here
    Voice: you can’t
    ( actually a force drive Jarvis to the center of the light, he could not open his eyes because the light is too strong and powerful )
    Jarvis: let me go
    Voice: I am not an enemy of yours, you might have here about the Awesome.
    Jarvis: yes, yes, are you Awesome?
    Voice: yes I am
    Jarvis: should I open my eyes
    Voice: no you can’t
    Jarvis: why
    Voice: no no, no one has see me, I don’t have through form I am like the God in which I usually called the Sovereign one he was my creator, I respect him more than humans had done.
    Jarvis: oh, nice, what probably do you want and why are you here
    Voice: you learn much I about me I know
    Jarvis: how do you know
    Voice: I know and I read all mind in the universe, expect the mind of God.
    Jarvis: how will that possible
    Voice: reading is the most simplest thing to me, I read trillions of mind in a seconds
    Jarvis: why did you want me
    Voice: because you are the chosen one of my pleasure,to save the mankind and and delivered them
    Jarvis: am I Jesus.
    Voice: The God in three places, mean the Trinity as the Sovereign one.
    Jarvis: I understand you better.
    Voice: as you can see the enemy of the world know as Hoxo as setting his sight in human world to have it all and rule earth why trying to erased all human in it, now as you know him he had destroy more than fifty six kingdom having their Crown with him, I come to engaged you.
    Jarvis: why cant you fight him by yourself
    Voice: just to train you for future
    Jarvis: it as if I am dreaming
    Voice: this is not a dream, it was reality, now it is time.
    ( a blazing big ball appear in Jarvis front )
    Voice: you have to touch it
    Jarvis: OK OK OK
    ( he summon his courage why he touch the light, immediately his body begin to shock, why he begin to feel strange and painful )
    This is stronger than I taught
    ( still closing his eyes )
    Voice: as a human you have to endure, till the blazing ball vaporize )
    Jarvis: OK OK OK
    ( Jarvis become very weaker, but could endure why he could not take off his hand )
    This is too strong, is weakening me, I am dyeing please
    Voice: just to makes you stronger and powerful, you are having supernatural power now I can sence it.
    ( after some mighty pain the blazing ball vaporize into Jarvis body, then he could open his eyes seeing the mighty light but he could not see the being, )
    Jarvis: Awesome, I can feel it
    Voice: yes, I sence it, before you feel it.
    ( he then look at his hands in his nails, his nail had grew into a long golden claw )
    Jarvis: am I a vampire
    Voice: no you are not,you are the Golden claw, the Claw fighter.

    Ultra series
    Welcome to the ultra worlds it’s time to unleash a new story title = Rise of the claw,the new story by Anointed David
    Guys we can’t save the world save the world alone,reals heroes are surely born in the face of real danger, we are one united we stand divided we fall.
    Recommend to you guys=


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    Chapter 2


    The whole family wakes up, unfortunately Commander Darot rises from the floor, the families become frightening on seeing the villain they all step back.
    Darot: I come not to destroy, but I come to take what his special to me do you still remain.
    Mr James: yes yes yes my first child.
    DArot: call them him it her out
    ( Mr James and his families searched for Jarvis in his room, but they could not see nothing )
    Darot: if you can’t, That means you are lying
    Mrs James: no no no
    ( crying in frightening )
    Darot: so you are afraid of me, oh fear
    ( Darot rise his sword up to strike Mr James, Savat then arrived )
    Savat: you can’t find him here,he was in the sanctuary of the claw, he had open the gate.
    Darot: let go
    Savat: ha ha ha
    ( Savat then poison Mr James with his poison nail )
    Mr James: oh noooo
    ( grunting in pain )
    Savat: suffer more,oh yea humans, no one is going to cure you from my deadly pain.
    Mrs: please don’t die this time.
    Uncle frank: don’t die brother
    Jason: please dad
    ( they all cried, why their father is about to die )


    Voice:now the enemies have been searching for you,and it is time for you to fight the good fight,you have to fight to stop Hoxo and his minions,know this your dad has been injured
    Jarvis: my dad
    Voice: yes, before thirty seconds to this time they will be here, now go and save man kind
    ( he use his power to teleport him to his room, then Awesome vanished with the light, the Commanders then arrived to the place they could see nothing )
    Darot: no one is here,he his not here.
    Savat: let get out of here it can be a trick
    Darot: I sences something it was not a trick, it is real, I can feel Awesome presence.
    Savat: impossible.
    ( they all disappear )


    Jarvis then find himself in his room, he quickly rushed outside his room, he find his father still painting

    Jarvis: Dad dad
    ( his families was then surprised to see him coming out of his room )
    Jason: is this a dream, am I dreaming
    Mrs: your father is dying
    Jarvis: he will never.
    ( Jarvis then closed his eyes,his golden nail grew up place it on the wound, immediately he get healed )
    Mr james: Jarvis, where have you been.
    Jarvis: am here now
    Mr James: the toxics are gone
    Uncle frank: am I dreaming.
    Jarvis: no this is reality.
    Jason: what have you just said, you said reality.
    Jarvis: yes Jason
    Uncle frank: you not normal at all
    Jason: how can a golden nail come out of your hand.
    Jarvis: I had a supernatural power now,I have been engaged, the defender of your own world has returned, I am the Golden claw chosen by the Awesome.
    ( they all open their mouth,they could not say any word,and they were amazed )
    Don’t let it surprised you, This is reality,I have come to be golden claw to stop Hoxo.


    Hoxo and his minions had killed many armies of the east nation using his dark powers,then hold their king.
    King Vara: you won’t get away with this
    Hoxo: if you man can cooperate with me you will live, but if not you will die
    King Vara: you don’t have to let me cooperate with you, because I won’t you follow you
    Hoxo: how dare you talk to me in such manner.
    King vara: because Awesome had chosen a warrior to fight you.
    Hoxo: funny, let the Man rise, let him face me I am ready for him, let him come.
    ( Hoxo then cast an evil spell to the king, making the king to give up ghost, taken the king crown )
    I am Hoxo
    ( his voice thundered, he turn back to be going, then Darot appeared to him, she bow )
    Darot: the great one.
    Hoxo: have you stopped him.
    Darot: The Claw lord doesn’t came, but instead the Awesome came, I sences him and also I could not get the boy, he had escaped,I can’t hunt him anymore he must have been granted something like power because I can sences it.
    ( Hoxo raged increased )
    Hoxo: so you can report me bad news about just searching for guy.
    Darot: give me chance.
    Hoxo: I don’t give chance.
    ( he furiously stab her in the spare then die )
    Ha ha ha
    ( Savat and Fang then cried, why Savat makes her sister to vaporize )
    Hoxo: let go home.
    ( as they turn back with some Hoxo armies,Jarvis actually show up due to his flight speed )
    Jarvis: I have come
    Hoxo: so you are real,I have been searching for you for about long time, now you have finally show yourself, welcome to my first hell you Golden claw.
    Jarvis: I too welcome you.
    Hoxo: don’t you know who am I, or did your parents don’t tell you not to look at Hoxo face twice.
    Jarvis: I conquered fear when I got my abilities.
    Hoxo: destroy him
    ( he sends his armies of evil to him of about hundred )
    Jarvis: let it begin
    ( he furiously strikes the ground with his claw,having been strong and having unlimited agility, his golden nail become stronger turning into a sword, he could use it to fight them, using martial arts skill )
    You are strong, but as for me you are weak
    ( saying it to the soldiers, he then stop fighting the extremely use his claw to mark and strikes each other, a mighty bomber comes out, the soldiers then blast to pieces, unfortunately Hoxo throw his mighty spear, but Jarvis dudge it holding it,sending it back through his mysterious power, then Hoxo send it to another direction, going toward Fang, but Fang could send it back too to Jarvis, and Jarvis finally uses his sharp claw to break it levitating.
    Hoxo: no way, how I am great you destroy my built spear, I made it Eight hundred years ago and now have destroy it.
    ( his eyes turn red as usual, but this time he fired a blaster through his eyes, Golden claw could dudge it all, why Hoxo sends a great bomber which hit him, using his back to it a rock )
    Jarvis: oh No oo
    Hoxo: you fool, how am great you could fight me.
    ( Jarvis rise up, healing himself with his abilities )
    Jarvis: you just said, how you are great, OK if so are you greater than the Sovereign one.
    Hoxo: don’t mention that name anymore
    Jarvis: now that you have see your stopper.
    Hoxo: don’t rejoice yet,my next arrival will be different.
    ( Hoxo disappear with the crown in his hand )
    Jarvis: already gone.
    ( he take his leave )

    Ultra series
    Welcome to the ultra worlds it’s time to unleash a new story title = Rise of the claw,the new story by Anointed David
    Guys we can’t save the world save the world alone,reals heroes are surely born in the face of real danger, we are one united we stand divided we fall.
    Recommend to you guys=


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    Chapter 3


    ( Hoxo take the crown to where he had been taken kings that he had been defeated crowns, then sit on his throne )
    Hoxo: so Awesome can grant him power to fight me.
    Fang: how will we fight him now.
    Hoxo: we shall use the ancient ways to defeat him.
    Savat: yes we will
    Hoxo: I will restore your sister back.
    Savat: you mean Darot
    Hoxo: yes, I need her for my battle against this new enemy
    ( Hoxo then use his power, making the vapor comes back turning into Darot again )
    Darot: thanks master, for your love, I won’t disobey you anymore, your wish will surely be my command.
    ( bowing down )
    Hoxo: now you Commanders have to prepare to drive this lair and my ship out of this world, we are going to my real kingdom just to destroy the whole earth at once, after that we shall destroy the next planet.
    Commanders: as you have said, oh master.
    ( the commanders all leave the premises )

    Jarvis return to his home but could not see anyone he then quickly sences that they must be in the farm,he then carry on his basket then run to the farm while feeling his super agility which makes him move faster than he was before while the people around that time seeing him was full of wondrous now hopping to have a competition between him and some of the fastest people in the kingdom,a boy called Jerry stopped him who had been chasing him with a chariot
    Jerry:please please man
    ( Jarvis pause )
    Jarvis: what is that
    Jerry: I see your racing
    ( he jump down from the chariot )
    Jarvis: please I have no time now,I should have be in the farm with my father.
    Jerry: I won’t take much of your time friend,my name is Jerry Carter you can called me Jerry, please what of yours
    Jarvis: I am James
    ( he smiled, he then give him a shake )
    Jerry: can you please join my team in our upcoming competition
    Jarvis: OK OK this evening right
    Jerry: yes yes I think you might be one if our fan in this kingdom
    Jarvis: you got it right friend bye bye
    Jerry: OK I will be expecting you
    ( Jarvis then run )
    I like him,we will be victrouse at the end of the competition
    ( a girl then arrived haven to be call Madison shorting his name to be Maddy,she come to Jerry which reveals that she was Jerry brother )
    Maddy: hey brother.
    Jerry: what is that
    Maddy: where did you know that guy.
    Jerry: probably I knew him before,but I didn’t knew that he can run faster as he was,we are going to use him,he will be one of us.
    Maddy: funny
    ( she go away )


    Jarvis arrived to the farm,as he arrive to where his families are,his family then silence looking at him why very sad.
    Jarvis: why are you so sad,am I too late
    ( they silence )
    Come on, let get to work
    Mr James: what has came over you son.
    Jarvis: why have you said that.
    Mrs James: you have to return the power right from this moment.
    Jarvis: why are you saying this mom.
    Mr James: just to ensure that my family is save.
    Jarvis: what me.
    Mr James: listen son,Hoxo is not a kind of being you can face he is stronger indeed, you can’t take him down.
    Mrs James: you don’t have to look his face twice he is dangerous indeed
    Jarvis: what is going on
    ( he then remember what Hoxo told him )

    Hoxo: don’t you know who am I, or did your parents don’t tell you not to look at Hoxo face twice.

    What is going on
    ( something begin to control him )
    Then what will I do now
    Mr James: just give me the power,I am going to destroy it for good.
    Mrs James: just give us
    Jason: give it to them brother,just to ensure that we are save
    ( crying )
    Jarvis: OK OK
    ( he closed his eyes,as he wanted to bring on the power to give them,he come back to his sences )
    What is going on
    ( he shouted,then come back to his sences then find himself in spirit while it reveals that Hoxo takes the forms of her parents to confused him having shapeshifting in giving them the Golden claw power,he then find himself in life,seeing that he was still in Jerry front closing his eyes while seeing crowds surrounding him having levitating, as he open his eyes he jump down then run away,and Maddy run to meet Jerry )
    Maddy: hey brother.
    Jerry: what is that
    Maddy: where did you know that guy.
    Jerry: probably I knew him before,but I didn’t knew that he can run faster as he was,we are going to use him,he will be one of us,I could that he has a possessing spirit,he might be a superhero
    Maddy: funny, first time I ever seen a superhero
    ( she go away,leaving her brother that was still amazed since the event while the peoples leave the place )


    Jarvis arrived at the farm
    Mr James: why have you late
    Jarvis: forgot about that, dad, I went somewhere
    Jason: you should have told me earlier,and I should have help you in your work.
    Jarvis: then why don’t you,since you know that I am late.
    Mrs James: start yours now.
    Jarvis: OK OK
    ( he said in his mind “I am even faster than any implements )
    Jason: do what you have to do
    ( Jarvis nail grow into shiny long golden claw,he use it then cultivate all the lands within three minutes in which it could takes machine implements to complete for about two week,as he finish, he rise up without feeling any stress,his family members was surprised and they all stand looking at him in wondrous ways )

    Ultra series
    Welcome to the ultra worlds it’s time to unleash a new story title = Rise of the claw,the new story by Anointed David
    Guys we can’t save the world save the world alone,reals heroes are surely born in the face of real danger, we are one united we stand divided we fall.
    Recommend to you guys=


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    kindly wait for the next chapter, think of what will happened in the next chapter

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