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    Wow interesting . He’s rude indeed

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    Rude Mr Popular ( I fell for him) Episode 7

    The birthday party
      I was very excited, I will be at Shayne’s birthday party, I don’t care if I will be there as a server, all I want is to see my Shayne
      I told Tina about it and she said she also wished she had the opportunity ..
      We arrived at the venue of the party, Eagle hotel. I heard it was owned by Shayne
      ” wow!”. I exclaimed immediately we got out of the car, it was so big and beautiful.The inside was more beautiful that the outside..
      We got to the hall and soon started putting everything in order..
      I gasp in awe as celebrities started coming in , i mean lot of celebrities and was more shocked when the president of our country walked in..
      I pinched myself to be sure that I was not dreaming
      ” Sofia , stop staring and start working”. Mrs Todd said.
      “Ok ma”, I said composing myself
      Mrs Todd instructed me and the other girls on what to do and soon left to get more drinks……
      I watched some celebrities perform, they sang and danced their lead songs
      There was so much fun .
      The whole place became noisy when Shayne walked in with his mother looking more handsome that ever..
      He has a smile on his face and he mother whispered something to him . He went to the stage ..
        ” I want to appreciate everyone for honouring my invitation, you are all welcomed.
      A special thanks to the president for being present despite his busy schedule”. He said as he gave a bow
      The guests applauded
      I stood there smiling like a puppy when Mr Todd suddenly walked in with wines.
      ” Sofia”. Take this drinks to Shayne table”. She said
      I nodded
      I was really nervous, “I was going to serve Shayne,he will drink a wine i served him”. I thought.
      I got to his table and he was laughing with some celebrities
      I placed the drink on their table and bowed and was about to take my leave when Abel one of the celebrities said
      ” serve the drink properly”.
      ” I am sorry”. I apologised opening the drink and pouring it out to the cups .
      I glanced at Shayne, he was fiddling with his phone . He looked bored
      ” excuse me”. He suddenly said and walked away
      ” did I do anything wrong?”I kept asking myself….
                Shayne POV
      I was already bored with the party, I just wanted to be alone
      I hated this idea of a big party but my manager forced me too, he even invited the president. How amazing.
       I excused myself and walked away
      I got to my private room upstairs and I had an urge for drugs
      I brought out the substance and injected it…. I felt relieved immediately
      I heard someone knock but I was too high to stand up
      I injected more grunting when the door finally opened and a pretty girl walked in……
                  Sofia POV
      I was really busy serving foods and drinks to the guest when Mrs Todd came to me
      “take some food and drink to Shayne’s room”. She  instructed . It is our duty to make sure all the guests gets food and Shayne is the most important guests here. She said
      ” ok ma” . I said nervously
      I was really nervous
      ” he walked away when I served him drinks”, did he not like me. I thought
      I went up the stairs carrying a tray containing food and drinks . The hall was so big and I looked around  not knowing where to turn to ..
      I saw a lady and walked towards her, she was probably a staff her
      ” Helo”. I need to take this to Shayne room”. I said
      She assessed me
      ” you are a server at the party right “. She asked
      I nodded
      ” he is at room 286″. She said pointing to  a room down the hall
      I thanked her and walked down to the room..
      I knocked when I got there but there was no response
      I knocked again but still no response
      I turned to leave when I heard someone grunt
      ” is he in danger?”. I asked myself and pushed the door opened. I stepped in and gasped at what I saw
      Shayne injecting himself , I was scared when his gaze  met mine
      ” what the f--k”. He yelled
      I was scared, I was confused. I never knew he was a junkie
      ” I em er sorry”. I stammered apologising , I just wanted to drop this
      He smirked as I walked towards to place the tray on the table beside him
      ” who are you ?”. He asked
       I remained quiet
      ” who the hell are you?”. He yelled
      ” I em a f fan of yours”. I stammered
      ” oh”. He said
      I turned to take my leave when he pulled me to him
      I was shocked , I looked into his eyes and he was clearly not himself
      ” you are d--n beautiful”. He said as he kissed me
      I was speechless
      He just stole my first kiss
      I struggled to break me but he held me even tightly
      ” you are my fan?”. He asked
      I nodded
      ” then be my b---h for the night”. He said rolling me over
      ” please i begged, let me go”.
      He smirked as he started kissing my body, he ripped my clothes and I was left in only my bra and panties
      ” I am a virgin” . I said crying
      He tore my bra and my panties
      ” let me go”. I said trying to push him away but he was too strong for me
      I gave a loud cry when I felt him penetrating inside me, it was as if I was cut with a knife. The pain was unbearable as he kept on going in and out of me
      I gave a loud cry and soon black out…..
      What the hell just happened?

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    Rude Mr Popular ( I fell for him) Episode 8

    A deal
                Shayne’s POV
      I woke up having a headache, I felt empty
      “D--n, I did this stuff again”. I turned over and I widened my eyes in shock at what I saw
      ” blood”
      ” how did it get here”. I asked myself thinking and the memory of what happened last night began flowing in
      I raped a girl, I tried recollecting her face but could not.
      She saw me doing drugs, she knows my secret….
      The door suddenly flung open and my manager suddenly walked in
      ” what the hell did you do”. He barked
      ” how is the girl?”. I asked
      ” oh, your remember”. He asked
      ” I did not mean too , I was not myself”. I said trying to explain
      ” Shayne , you just got yourself a wife “. He said leaving the room
      ” what!”, a wife. I thought what did he mean by that?
      I headed down  the stairs and everywhere was quiet. I saw my mother and my manager having a conversation.
      I walked towards them
      ” why is the hotel quiet?”. I asked
      ” son, we closed it for today”. She said
      ” why?”. I asked
      ” why did you do it?”. She suddenly asked crying
      I became quiet as I watched her cry
      ” where is the girl?”. I asked
      My manager pointed to a room and  when I got inside I saw her sleeping
      I stared at her
      “There is a rumour going around”. My manager suddenly said
      ” what?”. I asked raising an eyebrow
      ” The rumour about you raping a girl”. He said
      ” how did the new get out?”. I suddenly asked
      ” That is what I can’t explain”. He said, I am as confused as you are
      ” what will happen now?”. I asked
      ” we have to look for a solution”. He said
      “Who is she ?”. I asked
      ” She is server who came with Mrs Todd”. He said
      ” What?”. You mean she is a commoner?. I asked
      He nodded
      ” Where is the Mrs Todd?”. I asked
      I stared at Mrs Todd as she told me all about the girl..
      “What happened to Sofia?”.she asked
      ” she fainted due to stress”. My manager lied
      Oh, she nodded
      I will assure her mother that she is fine
      Thank you Mr Shayne for taking care of her. She said and she left
      “What next?”. I asked
      He was lost in thought
      ” she is the only one that knows your secret apart from your mother and I ,one word from her and your image will be tarnished”. He said.” You have to keep her close so she will be monitored”. He continued
      ” what do you mean?”. I asked him
      ” you also have to do something about the rumour of the rape”. My mum said as she walked in
      ” Shayne, you will have to keep her close”. She agreed with my manger
      ” you mean make her work as a maid in the Mansion?”. I also
      ” who does that?”. My manager asked chucking
      I looked at him confused
      ” Shayne, you have to take responsibility for your action”. My mum said
      ” what do you mean by that?”. I asked
      ” You will marry her”. my mum said ,and that is final
      I looked at my manager and he nodded in approval
      “What, get married to someone I don’t know . I thought
      I can’t do it , I can’t marry her . I said as I stormed out
      I stayed in my room thinking about everything.
      I checked the internet and the rumour about me raping a girl was going viral
      ” how the hell did it go viral”
      My manager wants me to marry the girl so I can Boldly defend myself against the press. They will be convinced if they see me with a girlfriend turn wife
      How will I rape a girl when I have a girlfriend who I love , perfect story
      My mum walked into the room as usual without knocking
      ” baby”. She called as she sat beside me
      I ignored her
      ” I think getting a partner will help you stop this your drug addiction. You take it because you feel lonely,if you fall in love you might get free from it
      I said nothing , I just stared at her
      “She is right , but can I ever fall in love”. I thought
      ” if you don’t like the girl , we can pay her off and then you marry my friend daughter Lexy……..
      “I will marry the commoner”. I said and she stared at me in surprise
      I can’t stand that Lexy. I thought, I will rather marry the commoner and divorce her when everything is settled ……
                    Sofia POV
      I sat down lost in thought, I was no longer a virgin and I lost it to Shayne
      Shayne raped me,Shayne do drugs. I was really shocked
      I love Shayne , I really do, but can he ever love me..
      The door opened and a man I recognised as Shayne manager walked in. He smiled towards me
      ” how are you feeling now?”. He asked
      ” I am okay now and I wondered if Shayne came to check on me
      “How is sir Shayne feeling now?”. I asked
      He looked at me in surprise probably wondering why I still cared for him despite him raping me
      ” He is doing well”. He replied, he even came to check on you
      ” really”. I asked
      He nodded
      I need to call my mum, i need to assure her that I am alright
      We have done that. He said
      I smiled
      “Sofia”. I want to make a deal with you. He said
      ” a deal?”. I asked raising an eyebrow
       He nodded
      I know what you saw in Shayne’s room
      I remained quiet
      ” I want you to stay close to Shayne”. He said
      ” close”. I muttered in confusion
      ” yes I want you to marry him, in exchange he will take care of your family”. He said
      I widened my eyes in surprise
      “Marry Shayne”
      ” yes, I want you….
      “Yes, I will marry him”. I shouted cutting him off
      He was his turn to be surprised
      I will marry him ..
      “Not because of his wealth but because I love him “. I thought
      Hmmm Sofia , what are you getting yourself into ooooo

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    Rude Mr Popular ( I fell for him) Episode 9

                Shayne POV
      ” Are you ready?”. My manager asked me
      I nodded
      “Just pretend you are in love with her, it is that simple”. he said
      I was on my way to the commoner house, I need to introduce myself to her mother
      We drove quietly to her home , I was getting bored with all of this but I had no choice.
      We soon got the house and I was irritated with what I saw
      ” is she this poor?”. I asked
      ” behave yourself Shayne”. My manager warned
      We got down from the car and a little girl ran to welcome us
      ” Shayne”. She called , I am a huge fan of yours
      I managed to smile
      “What is your name?”. I asked bending to her height
      ” Bella”. She replied beaming
      I ruffled her hair and she held my hands as she led me to the house
      We walked into the room and I was really surprised
      ” do humans live in this kind of house”. I thought, there was nothing except three beds , a table and a chair
      ” f--k”. What have I gotten myself into”. I thought
      Just then my bride to be came in, she was putting on a patched faded gown
      She looked at me and smiled shyly
      “Sir Shayne”. She called
      ” where is your mother?”. I asked
      ” she is coming”. She said. Just then a woman on wheelchair came in wheeling her chair
      ” what the f--k”. I cursed silently, I never knew she was a crippled, no one told me that
      I stood up to greet the woman and she smiled warmly
      ” Shayne”. My daughter told me about everything, you are welcome
      I gave her a fake smile
      ” my daughter loves you , pls treat her right”. She said
      I nodded
      ” I give you both my blessings”. She said
      ” when will the wedding take place?”. She asked
      ” Next week, it will be a small wedding”. I replied. Only families are welcomed
      She nodded
      ” what can I offer you?”. She asked
      ” we are okay”. My manager replied
      ” we will get going ma”. I said as I stood up
      ” ok dear”. She said
      We bowed as we left the house with Bella tagging along
      “Can I get a hug?”. She asked
      I smiled as I hugged her
      ” take me away from this place”.she said , I really don’t like here
      ” sure I will, I don’t like it either”. I said
      I smiled at her
      ” such a smart kid”. I thought
      We drove home silently. I was lost in thought. How did I get myself in this ?i thought
      ” Shayne”. My manager called
      ” what should we do about Sofia,s family?”. He asked
      ” sign one of my mansion in her mother’s name”. I said
      ” a mansion?”. He asked in surprise
      I nodded
      She is my bride after all……
                 Sofia POV
         I was still surprised that Shayne will be mine, who would have believe that he will agree to marry me..
       I watched as he hugged Bella and I felt happy
      ” I hope he loves me”. I thought
      His manager told me he is marrying me because he wants to keep me close, but I don’t mind . I just want to be close to him..
      It was little bit difficult convincing my mum, i had to tell her the whole truth
      She was very mad and wanted me out of the deal but I explained to her how much I wanted that
      ” I don’t want you sacrificing your happiness because of us”.she said
      ” I am not sacrificing my happiness”. I told her . This is my happiness
      She soon gave in and I know it took a lot of courage to be friendly with Shayne when he came
      I confided in Tina and she wished she was the one who was raped. How funny
      I was still lost in thought when some men with suit walked into the compound
      “Hi, we are here to see Mrs Regan”.
      ” she is my mother”. I said
      ” oh, you must be Sofia, Shayne’s bride?”. They asked
      I nodded
      They gave me an envelope
      ” give this to your mother”. They said and left
      ” mom”. I called , there is a letter for you
       I went over to her and gave her the letter
      She took the letter and Open in
      “Sofia”. She called with tears in her eyes
      ” mother , what is it?”. I asked
      ” Sofia”. She called again with her hands shaking
      Shayne Just gift is a Mansion
      ” what!”. I exclaimed in surprise
      Is this what being the bride of Mr Popular brings……..
      We got to the new house and I gasp in awe
      ” is this truly ours”. Bella asked
      I nodded
      Mother was staring speechlessly
      I can’t believe it , I can’t she said with tears in her eyes
      ” Shayne, I am loving you more”. I muttered to myself
                Shayne POV
      News about my marriage went viral as my mum and manager made sure it circulated .
      I thought about the commoner, how will I cope living with her?
      How I wish I was not in drug, how I was I never raped her…………
            Shayne actually have a nice side…

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    Rude Mr Popular( I fell for him) Episode 10

                Sofia POV
      ” will you take Shayne Adams as your lawfully wedded husband”
      “Yes , I do”. I replied
      ” will you take Sofia Regans as your lawfully wedded wife”
      He remained quiet and the priest had to repeat it again
      He stared at me and scoffed
      ” yes I do”. He said
      I signed with relief
      Now I pronounce you husband and wife, you may kiss the bride
      He leaned towards me and whispered
      ” don’t expect too much” as he pecked my fore- head
      The newest couples Mr and Mrs Shayne Adams
      His mum walked towards me and hug me
      ” Congratulations dear
      It was a small wedding with only family members and friends
      I walked towards my mum and hugged her
      Shayne walked toward me and pulled me to him
      ” let us go wifey”. He said
      We met lot of reporters outside..
      ” when did you guys meet”. One of the reporters asked
      ” we met at my concert”. He said smiling
      That was kind of true but only that I never existed to him then
      ” I heard your wife is very poor”. He paused a little before he answered
      “I love her not because of her financial status but because of who she is”.
      I stared at him
      ” there was a rumour of your raping a girl”. Another reporter asked , how true is that
      “I know no lady except my wife “. He lied brilliantly
      If you may excuse us, we need to get home, he said as we walked to the car holding hands
       He distanced himself from me when we got Into the car.
      ” is this the same guy that held me warmly few minutes ago”. I thought
      We remained quiet throughout the drive
      His parent were already waiting for us when we came
      They got home first
      The house was so big and beautiful. It was like the mansion he gave my mother
      ” welcome to our family”. His mum said hugging me
      ” welcome dear”, I am Clara Shayne’s sister. A lady greeted
      ” I pray you cut down his wings”. A second lady told me
      I smiled
      Shayne got a wonderful family
      His father smiled as I bowed my head to greet him…
      His mother took me inside a room
      “This will be your room”. She said
      I walked in and Shayne drawing was everywhere
      ” what is she doing here?”. Shayne asked coming from the bathroom
      ” what do you mean by that?”. His mum asked , she is your wife
      He scoffed
      ” I can’t stay in the same room with her”. He said and walked out of the room
      His mum walked towards me
      “Be patient with him, he will come around”. She said as she hugged me
      I sobbed in her arms silently
      I walked to the dinning table for dinner and the whole family were already seated
      I glanced at Shayne, he did not even spare me a glance
      “Why did you come down late?” Shayne dad asked
      “I was arranging my clothes”. I said
      ” That is for the maid to do”. He said
      I just nodded, I was not used to having maids, I was always the maid
      ” can we eat now and stop this talk”. Tray said
      The whole family became quiet , it was as if he was been feared
      I sat on Shayne’s bed , i was all alone in the room. I decided to call Tina.
      This was the first time of me having a phone and I was really excited
      “Tina”. I called as soon as she picked the call..
      “Sofia”. She screamed in excitement
      ” how is Shayne?, Hope he is not too hard on you?. She asked rushing
      ” crazy girl”. I muttered
      “Sofia, i am so happy for you”. She said
      ” will you still come to our school?”. She asked
      “I don’t know about that”. I answered truthfully
      I really don’t know what plans they have made down for me
      I ended the call and dialled my mum number
      ” Mum”. I called
      ” Sofia”. How are you doing?. She asked
      I am okay mum. I said , I just want to know if you are alright
      ” of course, I am more than alright”. She said
      Bella has been registered in Eagles elementary school
      ” really, i asked with my eyes popped out”.
      It is the most expensive school in the country..
      ” oh, Mother I am so happy I said
      ” Good night mum “. I said as the call ended
      I laid on the bed, when Shayne came in
      ” you will spend the night here today”. He said and tomorrow you will move to another room
      I nodded
       He laid down on the bed and I was expecting his touch
      ” isn’t that what husband and wife do”. I thought
      He turned and faced the wall without saying anything
      I stayed there lost in my thought till I fell asleep
                    Shayne POV
      “I can’t wait to end this so called marriage”. I thought
      I will make sure she and her family are comfortable so that she won’t feel bad when I decide to end things with her..
      I turned to look at her and she was already sleeping. I stared at her and I must admit she is really beautiful.
      My manager suggested me going to one of my mansion but I am scared being alone with her only, I might hurt her
      I will stay here in the family house with her
      I feel bad raping her, I really regret it but I don’t love her…..
           Hmmmmh I feel sorry for Sofia
      She is in love with someone that does not love her

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    You will surely love her

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    The love will come soon

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