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    :bSERIAL KILLER
    CHAPTER 1
    Charles Pov:
    I watch as the water
    crash on the shores
    sending a refreshing
    wind straight at the
    people on the beach.
    I stuff my hand Into
    my pocket, close my
    eyes letting
    refreshment dominate
    my body.
    Hmmmmmm this pure
    Bliss.
    My refreshment was
    caught short when my
    phone started ringing,
    I checked the caller
    ID to see it was Kate
    calling.
    ” Hello Kate
    whasupp.”
    “I’m cool dear,
    inspector will like to
    talk to you.”
    She said before
    handing the phone to
    Inspector Kunle.
    “Hello Charles, sorry
    your holiday will be
    cut short, a crime was
    committed in Nigeria
    here at a resident
    known as the
    Adekoya’s residence,
    their garden was shot
    on the head and the
    eyes was popped
    out, you are hired to
    investigate the case,
    your ticket is ready
    and you must take
    the next flight to
    Nigeria.” He
    concluded.
    “Ok sir.” I hung up.
    I went into my hotel
    grab my passport and
    some of my
    belongings, board a
    taxi and head to the
    airport.
    Ok readers lemme
    introduce myself.
    My name is Charles
    James and a
    Detective at FBI
    agency based in
    Nigeria.
    Being a Detective
    requires a lot of job,
    you have to find a
    clue and unravel the
    truth but it’s
    interesting and
    adventurous.
    I’m a married man with
    two kids(a boy and a
    lovely girl).
    I was given a leave
    at work to spend
    holiday in Miami in the
    States but here I’m
    heading back to
    Nigeria when I have
    barely used one
    week.
    I finally got to our HQ
    in Abuja to get
    straight to work.
    I step into Inspector’s
    office. “Good to see
    you again Charles, we
    found a body around
    11:32 this morning in
    Adekoya’s residence
    in Agro Phillip
    Avenue.
    The Adekoya’s are
    very wealthy family
    and they are much in
    their family but most
    of them is in abroad,
    the person that was
    killed was their
    gadener, make sure
    you investigate the
    body
    Samuel and Kate will
    assist you to the
    Crime scene.”
    “Ok boss I will go
    straight to work.”
    I took Kate and
    Samuel to Agro Phillip
    street as we enter
    into Adekoya’s
    residence.
    Now readers, join me
    as we unravel the
    truth and catch the
    Culprit.
    As soon as we got in
    the police were
    already there and the
    body was surrounded
    with the Do Not
    Cross tape
    preventing anybody
    from getting nearer.
    A woman was
    weeping sorrowfully
    and I presume she’s
    the garden’s wife.
    I walked up to the
    Constable.”Good day
    sir, I’m Detective
    Charles James from
    the FBI HQ and I’m
    hired to investigate
    the body.”
    “Ok sir go ahead.”
    Kate Samuel and I
    step into the Crime
    scene and was
    staring at horrific
    body of the gardener.
    His two eyes were
    missing and blood
    gushed out from his
    head.
    This is a crime of
    passion, and I think
    he struggle with the
    killer before being
    killed because leaves
    was sturk around his
    body.
    Kate pulled out her
    HD camera and took
    some pictures of the
    body.
    Samuel pulled out the
    tool box as we got
    to work.
    Firstly we took the
    blood sample with the
    swab
    Then we use the
    tape to collect his
    fingerprints.
    I scan the
    environment for any
    information that can
    help. Then I notice a
    white powdish
    substance brushed
    on his arm.
    “Give me the tape.” I
    use the tape to take
    the powder on the
    gardener’s arm.
    Samuel pulled out the
    gardener’s phone
    from his pocket
    before putting it in a
    polythene bag.
    “Guys come and
    check this out.”
    Samuel and I went
    over to see and I
    stare at shock.
    On the floor was
    written with blood
    I’M BACK
    End of Chapter 1.
    Author’s note: I hope
    you guys are
    enjoying the story
    CHAPTER 2 coming
    up

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    Landed Finally

    Mr Serial Killer Is Back

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    SERIAL KILLER
    CHAPTER 2
    Charles PoCharles
    Pov:
    I’M BACK
    “What does that
    mean?.” Kate ask
    curiously behind me.
    I said nothing to this,
    I
    was just staring at
    the
    blood on the floor.
    I’M BACK???.
    “Somebody is
    planning
    revenge.” I said
    quitely.
    “On the gardener?.”
    Samuel ask
    cleSamuel ask clearly
    suprised.
    “I think he’s trying to
    deliver this message
    to
    someone in the
    family,
    that he’s back,
    somebody might
    knosomebody might
    know
    something in this
    house, Samuel I need
    to interrogate
    everybody living
    here.”
    “Sure thing bro, you
    can talk to Mr
    Adekoya, he’s inside.”
    “Ok thanks bro.”
    The ambulance
    arriThe ambulance
    arrived
    and carry the body
    to
    the morgue for the
    Autopsy.
    “You and Kate can
    go
    to the Morgue, I want
    to
    talk to Mr Adekoya.”
    “Ok don’t take long
    because the Autopsy
    will soon began.”
    When Kate and
    SamueWhen Kate and
    Samuel
    was gone, I saw Mr
    Adekoya standing at
    the front porch of
    his
    big house a grim
    loobig house a grim
    look
    on his face.
    He’s a rich and
    influential man in the
    society and this
    could
    weaken him.
    “Good afternoon Sir.”
    I
    greeted putting my
    badge into my
    pocket.
    “Good afternoon
    Detective, please
    have
    you find anything?.”
    “Well yes actually
    “Well yes actually we
    found some few
    clufound some few
    clues
    that can help us, but
    that can help us, but I
    will like to ask you
    some few questions
    if
    you don’t mind.”
    “Of course Detective,
    let’s go inside.”
    I stepped into the
    breathtaking house
    of
    The Adekoya’s, this
    people are d--n rich.
    He led me to his
    Study,
    we sat down and he
    offer me a drink.
    “Soo Mr Adekoya
    let’s
    begin with the
    interrogation.
    Interrogation begins
    CHARLES: What can
    you tell me about
    your
    Gardener?
    MR ADEKOYA: I don’t
    know much about my
    workers but Simon is
    a
    good man and I have
    never had
    complnever had
    complain
    about him when he
    was
    working here.
    CHARLES: Do you
    Know who might want
    to do this to him?
    MR ADEKOYA: I
    seriously have no
    idea.
    CHARLES: Who found
    the body?
    MR ADEKOYA:It was
    around 11:29 this
    morning when my
    gateman suddenly ran
    inside telling us that
    our Gardener is
    found
    dead, I was shocked
    and when I got there,
    two of his eyes were
    missing, we called the
    Police right away.
    CHARLES:Ok sir I will
    send for you later,
    thanks for your time.
    MR ADEKOYA:
    Anytime
    Detective.
    Interrogation ends
    “You will have to
    leave
    this house as soon
    as
    possible, you are not
    safe here.”
    “Yes I already send
    my
    wife and children to
    our
    house in Lagos.”
    “Ok I still have some
    few questions to ask
    you but not noyou
    but not now.”
    “Ok Detective I’m
    ready
    to help anyhow I
    can.”
    I bid him goodbye as I
    drove off to the
    Morgue.
    Our killer hasOur
    killer hasn’t
    achieve his aim yet,
    there is still lot of
    blood he wants to
    shed.
    I pulled in the Morgue
    and went in to start
    with the Autopsy.
    “Whasupp dude, the
    Autopsy is about to
    begin.”
    Samuel said as soon
    as I got in.
    “Sure where’s Felix.” I
    said
    “Here I’m .” Felix is
    the
    doctor that always
    perform the Autopsy
    of
    every victim we
    bought
    here, he’s an expert
    in
    that aspect.
    “Let’s begin with the
    Autopsy shall we?.”
    Felix said.
    “Yeah.”
    The Autopsy begins
    The body of the
    Gardener was already
    placed on the
    hospital
    bed and his clothes
    were ripped off living
    him with only his
    shohim with only his
    short.”
    “During my premetarily
    test I found out the
    victim died 09:32 pm
    yesterday.” Felix said
    and Kate quickly jot
    it
    down.
    “That means the
    Victim
    was killed yesterdwas
    killed yesterday
    night, carry on.”
    Felix pulled out the
    X-
    ray and scan the
    head.
    “Can you see the
    bullet?, The bullet
    penetrate into the
    skull
    and with the looks of
    it, it was at close
    range, our victim got
    in
    a fight with the killer
    before being
    killbefore being
    killed.”
    “Does that means our
    killer did not pull the
    trigger intentionally?.”
    I
    reasoned.
    “Since it’s at close
    range then I presume
    the killer didn’t pull
    the
    trigger intentionally
    and
    I also think it was a
    silent revolver since
    none of the family
    heard a gunshot.”
    “But I think the Killer
    killed the Gardener
    intentionally, because
    there’s no way he’s
    going to pluck out
    the
    two eyes when he
    doesn’t have an
    intention of killing
    him,
    but I don’t think he’s
    after the Gardener,
    he’s
    just using just using
    the
    gardener’s death to
    send message to
    someone in the
    house.”
    “Why do you say
    that?.” Felix ask.
    “At the crime scene
    we
    found the word on
    the
    floor written with
    blofloor written with
    blood,
    I’m back, what do you
    think?.”
    I sat on a chair pull
    out
    a cigarette and
    started
    smoking.
    “Hmm, you are right
    Charles, let me get
    the
    bullet out for you so
    you can test it at the
    Lab.”
    He took the twizzer
    and get the bullet out
    for us. Kate took it
    and
    put it in a polythene
    bag.
    “You guys should go
    look for more clues
    and you will find an
    answer to all this.”
    Felix said.
    “Thanks Felix, guys
    let’s go to the Lab.
    End of Autopsy.
    We got to the Lab
    and
    Kate began with the
    test.
    “The white powdish
    substance we found
    on
    our victim body is
    cocaine.”
    “Cocaine?!!.”
    “Yeah maybe our
    victim
    was a drug addict.”
    “Or maybe our kill”Or
    maybe our killer
    was a drug addict
    that’s under maybe.”
    “The bullet is from a
    Silent Revolver, Felix
    was right after all.”
    “Ok dear that’s cool,
    now Samuel let’s
    head
    to the Police HQ
    maybe
    we………..”
    I was Interrupted
    when
    my phone started
    ringing in my pocket.
    I checked to see it
    was
    Inspector calling.
    “Hello inspector.”
    ” Hello Charles we
    have a problem, a
    body
    was found in Ikorodu
    Lagos you need to
    check it out.”
    ” But sir I’m
    investigating another
    body.”
    “You have to check
    it
    out because the
    case
    is similar to the one

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    bring it on

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