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    SERIAL KILLER
    CHAPTER 3
    Charles Pov:
    Two people were
    murdered within
    48 hours, this case is
    getting
    creepy.
    “What’s wrong
    Charles?.” Samuel
    ask as he noticed
    the look on my
    face.
    I sighed. “The
    inspector just
    called, they found a
    body in
    Ikorodu similar to the
    case we are
    investigating now, the
    woman
    was found dead on
    the road and
    her eyes were
    plucked out, she
    was shot on the
    head.”
    “Oh My God!!!.”
    Samuel gasp in
    shock.
    “This case is getting
    out of
    hand.” Kate said.
    “Guys we are going
    to Lagos to
    check this body.” I
    said.
    “Are we going to
    abandon this
    case we are on?.”
    Samuel ask.
    “Since it’s similar to
    the case we
    are working on we
    should check it
    out, maybe we can
    get some
    clues that might help
    us and I
    also need to know if
    the person
    killed is related to the
    Adekoya’s.”
    “Ok when do we
    leave?.” Samuel
    ask
    “Right now.”
    We finally got to
    where Inspector
    directed us in Ikorodu
    and the
    body was still lying
    on the floor,
    two of her eyes were
    missing and
    the blood has
    already dry to the
    side of her head.
    There was lot of
    crowds trying to
    catch a glimpse of
    the dead body.
    Kate took some few
    pictures of
    the body, I collect her
    blood
    sample for test in the
    lab.
    Samuel pulled out a
    handkerchief
    from her purse,
    something was
    written in blood on
    the
    handkerchief.
    “See if you can read
    what’s
    written on this
    handkerchief.”
    Samuel hand it over
    to me.
    I looked at it closely
    and slowly
    read our the word,
    Rest In
    Perfect Peace Rita
    Adekoya.
    The Adekoya’s are
    haunted, if
    this woman is related
    to the
    Adekoya which
    means the Killer is
    after the Adekoya’s.
    “Our Serial killer is
    after the
    Adekoya’s, so now
    we should
    have the mindset that
    we are
    going to have to
    protect the
    Adekoya’s.”
    Samuel nodded in
    understanding.
    “But most of them are
    outside of
    the country.”
    “I think those ones
    are safe,
    listen I need to
    interrogate Mr
    Adekoya as soon as
    we are
    through with the
    Autopsy.”
    “Ok sure thing bro.”
    The ambulance
    arrived and
    hoisted the body into
    it, I
    check.my wristwatch
    which says
    06:34, it was already
    getting late,
    the killer is around
    here, moving
    freely, searching for
    his next
    Victim, but until we
    have a proof
    we will be able to nail
    him to a
    spot.
    I finally got to the
    Autopsy and
    we started
    immediately.
    Autopsy begins
    “My premetarily test
    state that
    our victim died
    between
    12:23-12:47.”
    “Felix how possible is
    it that our
    Serial killer is one?.” I
    ask
    thoughtfully.
    “The gardener died
    was killed
    yesterday at 09:23
    by the killer,
    the same killer killed
    Rita
    Adekoya around
    12:23, the killer
    is sure doing a fast
    job.”
    “Hmmm, I think I know
    who he’s
    going for next.”
    I said.
    “Who do you think?.”
    Felix ask
    curiously.
    ” Somebody who
    works in the
    Adekoya’s residence,
    he’s
    following a pattern in
    those he’s
    killing…….and I want to
    follow
    that pattern.”
    “Charles, it’s under
    maybe if he’s
    going to go for a
    worker this
    time, he’s a
    psychopath and a
    lunatic, he deprive
    pleasure from
    killing.”
    I turn to Samuel. “Is
    Mr Adekoya
    already in the Police
    HQ?.”
    “He arrived there as
    soon as I
    told him and he was
    crying
    because the woman
    that was
    killed was his sister.”
    “Ok please help me
    get the list of
    the Adekoya’s, both
    the one
    living abroad.”
    I turn to Felix.
    “Thanks alot bro I
    will take my leave
    now.
    Autopsy ends
    I got to the Police HQ
    to
    interrogate Mr
    Adekoya, he was
    already in the IR
    (Interrogation
    room).
    ” Good day
    Mr.Adekoya, I know
    this is pretty hard for
    you but
    please just get ahold
    of yourself,
    I’m assuring u dat we
    will find this
    hideous killer.”
    He wiped away the
    tears from his
    eyes.
    “Are you ready?.” I
    asked.
    “Yes.”
    INTERROGATION
    BEGINS
    CHARLES: Where
    were you around
    12:32 pm when the
    victim died?.
    MR ADEKOYA: I was
    at home
    trying to get some
    few things
    because I will join my
    family in
    Lagos.
    CHARLES:Do you
    realize that your
    family is being
    haunted by this
    Serial killer.
    MR ADEKOYA: Yeah
    CHARLES:Can you
    tell me the
    reason for this?
    He’s probably after
    something or
    he’s planning revenge
    on what
    one of your relatives
    did to him.
    MR ADEKOYA:I
    seriously don’t
    know detective, I……I’m
    stressed
    out
    CHARLES:ok you
    have been
    through a lot today,
    you can go
    but please if you
    remember
    anything that can be
    useful in
    this case,.let me know
    MR ADEKOYA: Sure
    detective
    INTERROGATION
    ENDS
    Mr Adekoya is hiding
    something
    and I must find out, I
    know how
    to get my answer but
    it’s quite
    difficult.
    I pull out my phone
    and dial
    Kate’s number.
    “What do you find
    during the
    test?.”
    “Nothing much, but
    there is a
    word on the
    handkerchief you did
    not read, it was
    imprinted there:
    Next- Sophia.
    “Are you sure?.”
    ” 100% sure.”
    “Then we have to
    find this
    Sophia, I will call you
    later.”
    I hung up and dial Mr
    Adekoya’s
    number.
    “Hello sir please
    where does
    Sophia Adekoya
    lives?.”
    “She lives in
    Manchester in
    England.”
    D--n it, it’s gonna
    take long to
    get to England, I need
    to call the
    forces in England to
    protect her.
    “Ok thank you.”
    Just as I hung up my
    phone
    started ringing, it was
    Inspector
    calling, my heart
    started racing
    faster as I received
    the call.
    “Sorry to tell you this
    Charles but
    there was a call from
    England,
    Sophia was found
    dead in her
    bathroom, her eyes
    plucked out
    and……..”
    “She was shot in the
    head.” I
    completed.
    That instant I realise
    the Serial
    Killer is one step
    ahead of
    us…….one step ahead.
    End of Chapter 3
    Author’s note:
    Whasupp guys, I
    hope you guys are
    enjoying the
    story
    Don’t forget to like
    and comment

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    Mach MahnMach Mahn
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    Nice one….

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    Mach MahnMach Mahn
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    You’re really doing well but u need to improve ur writing skills… Keep it up.

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    RoyalGoldRoyalGold
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    Ok… Seated

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    senator danielsenator daniel
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    Bring it on

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    Prosper YeboahProsper Yeboah
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    I’m really really enjoying de story sha….
    I think u r ryt detective, Mr Adekoya is hiding something!!!

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    Lifēøf Shy GúyLifēøf Shy Gúy
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    Good Evening
    SERIAL KILLER
    CHAPTER 4
    DISCLAIMER— Every
    name mentioned as
    the Adekoya
    relatives in this
    Chapter is just the
    author’s imagination,
    any resemblance to
    anybody weather
    living or dead is
    highly fictitious.
    Thank you.
    Charles Pov:
    I sigh in exasperation.
    Simon dead, Rita dead
    and now Sophia is
    gone.
    This is the most
    trilling case I have
    ever investigated
    since I join the FBI.
    Most of the case I
    have investigated
    started badly but
    ends on a smooth
    runs, but with the
    look of things this
    case will be very
    trivial and difficult.
    My phone started and
    I saw its was Samuel
    calling.
    “Hello Charles get a
    biro and piece of
    paper I’m about to
    call out the
    Adekoya’s, both the
    ones living in
    abroad.”
    I quickly pull out a
    biro and piece of
    paper ready to jot
    down.( U can join me
    readers).
    “Ok Sam I’m ready.”
    Rita —– found
    dead on the road in
    Ikorodu Lagos.
    Sophia
    Adekoya—–found
    dead in her bathroom,
    Manchester, England.
    Demola
    Adekoya——-
    Lives in Chadni
    Chowk India, owns a
    business.
    Amanda
    Adekoya—–Lives
    in Lille France, still
    schooling.
    Mrs Adekoya——El
    derly wife of Mr
    Adekoya, lives in
    Ikotun Lagos
    Richard
    Adekoya——-
    lives in San Diego
    United States of
    America, still
    schooling.
    Mary Adekoya—–
    Lives in Miami United
    States of America,
    still schooling
    Solomon
    Adekoya——-L
    ives in Southampton
    England, still
    schooling.
    William
    Adekoya——-Y
    ounger brother of Mr
    Adekoya lives in
    Sabon gari Kano
    state.
    Cynthia
    Adekoya——
    Second wife of Mr
    Adekoya lives in
    Akoko West Ondo
    State.
    Busayo
    Adekoya——- Last
    wife of Mr Adekoya
    lives in Mowe Ogun
    state.
    Sunday
    Adekoya———
    Lives in Munich
    Germany, still
    schooling.
    “That’s all bro.” He
    said.
    The Adekoya’s are
    much, and most of
    them live abroad, we
    need alert everyone
    of them.
    “Wow thanks alot bro,
    this will help alot.”
    “Oh I forgot to
    include Mr Adekoya.”
    “Never mind bro he’s
    my key of getting the
    serial killer.”
    “You think he knows
    something?.”
    “Let’s say its a
    maybe but we have
    to investigate deeper
    into this case.”
    “Ok bro it’s already
    late go home and
    take a rest.” I
    checked my watch
    which says 09:02.
    Geez I was Soo
    engrossed in this
    case I did not realize
    it was already late.
    I have house in
    Badagry where my
    wife and children
    lives, they are going
    to be happy to see
    me.
    “Ok bro thanks alot,
    tomorrow we are
    leaving for England,
    Sophia Adekoya was
    found dead in her
    bathroom.”
    “Ok bro goodnight, till
    tomorrow then.”
    I hung up and got up,
    grab my car keys,
    switch off the light in
    my office and slip
    out of the building.
    I walk to where my
    car was parked,
    hooting of owls and
    cries of bats filled
    the eerie street
    sending chill down my
    spine, a black cat ran
    down a dark alley.
    But I did not notice
    all this as my head
    was processing two
    questions.
    WHO IS THIS SERIAL
    KILLER
    and
    WHAT DOES HE
    WANTS FROM THE
    ADEKOYA’S.
    I got in my car as I
    turn the key in the
    ignition, the car
    roared back to life
    as I drive through the
    silent street.
    “Daddy!!!!!!!!.” My two
    kids jump at me as I
    step in the compound
    completely
    exhausted.
    “Wow, I have missed
    my little princess and
    Prince.”
    Joe is Seven years
    and really really
    stubborn.
    Hannah is three years
    old, shy and timid.
    I carry the both of
    them In arms into the
    house as they
    giggled happily.
    “Where’s your mum.” I
    ask as soon as we
    enter the sitting room.
    “She’s in the kitchen
    preparing dinner.” Joe
    answered quickly.
    “Ok you two go
    continue what you
    are doing let me see
    your mom, I’m going
    to read you two a
    bedtime story.”
    They jump happily, I
    went to the kitchen
    to see my wife,
    Rachel James, stirring
    a pot of stew on a
    cooker, beads of
    sweat form on her
    temple.
    I slowly slip behind
    her, encircle my hand
    around her waist
    before planting a kiss
    on her neck.
    She jerk back in a
    shock as she turn
    around to see me
    grinning at her.
    “My God Charles, why
    did you do that, you
    scared me.”
    I chuckled. “Just
    missed you dear.” I
    said and pull her
    close to me before
    kissing her
    passionately, slidding
    my tongue into her
    mouth and wrapping
    my hand around her
    tiny waist.
    She pushed me back.
    “Charles don’t let the
    stew I’m cooking to
    get burnt.”
    He laughed. “I missed
    you my love.”
    “I missed you more
    dear.”
    “Ok I should leave
    you now, so you can
    prepare dinner in
    time.” I was already
    walking out of the
    kitchen when she
    called me.
    “When we are through
    eating, we need to
    talk.”
    She said a worried
    look on her face, our
    discussion isn’t
    gonna be good.
    We finished eating
    and I tucked the
    children to bed
    reading them a
    bedtime story till they
    both drift to sleep.
    Now Rachel and I was
    lying on the couch in
    the sitting room, her
    head was resting on
    my chest as I wrap
    my hand around her.
    It has been quite a
    while since I held her
    like this and I missed
    every moment.
    “You said you want
    to discuss something
    with me, what’s that?.”
    She raised her head
    from my chest to
    look at me and there
    was a sad look on
    her face.
    “Charles you have to
    drop this case.”
    I took me a while to
    register what she
    meant. “You mean the
    Adekoya’s case.”
    “Yes, Charles the
    serial killer you are
    on the hunt for is
    very dangerous and
    killing is isn’t new to
    him/her, if you keep
    on going deep into
    this matter he will
    want to harm you.”
    D--n it, why didn’t I
    see this coming, my
    wife and I has never
    have this kinda
    discussion before,
    why now??.
    “Rachel listen, just as
    the serial killer is
    trained, so am I and I
    know the risk in this,
    so I will also protect
    myself.”
    “What about us?.”
    She ask and I froze.
    “What do you mean?.”
    I ask.
    “If you can save
    yourself from the
    Serial killer what
    about us?.”
    “You think he’s going
    to come for you…..for
    the kids?.”
    She didn’t reply to
    this, she just avert
    her gaze so I
    wouldn’t see the
    tears that are now
    threatening to fall.
    I turn her face back
    to me and said in a
    soft voice. “Rachel, I
    will never let anything
    or anybody not even
    the Serial killer harm
    you or the kids,
    that’s a promise my
    love.”
    She hugged me and
    we remain like that till
    sleep took over.
    “Your passport is
    ready, we are leaving
    as soon as possible.”
    Samuel said as soon
    as we step in the
    Police HQ.
    “Samuel I need to talk
    to the Chief Security
    inspector in England
    please.”
    “Ok bro.” He dialed
    the number and hand
    the phone over to
    me.
    At the third ring he
    received the call.
    “Hello this is Daniel
    Brooks from the
    England Security
    Force, who am I
    speaking with?.”
    “Hello this is Charles
    James, FBI Detective
    Agent in Nigeria base,
    please a crime was
    committed in
    Manchester
    yesterday.”
    “Yes exactly, we are
    standing in front of
    the apartment now,
    we got a call that
    similar bodies were
    found in this state.”
    “Yes and I’m the
    Detective in charge
    of the case, please
    send a message to
    the airports in
    England, nobody
    come in and nobody
    go out from England,
    there is a probability
    that the killer is still
    in England.” I
    explained.
    “Hmm, you are right Mr
    James when are you
    going to arrive in
    England to
    investigate the body.”
    “Since it’s a Six
    hours flight I will get
    to England by 06:12,
    that’s if the weather
    is friendly.”
    “Ok Mr James we are
    expecting you.”
    “Thanks Mr Brooks.”
    I turn to Samuel and
    said. “Let’s head to
    England.”
    We finally got to
    Manchester in
    England around 07:11
    and we got to
    Sophia’s apartment.
    I met Mr Brooks and
    other England
    officers there.
    “Nice meeting you Mr
    Brooks.” I shook the
    white man.
    “And you too Mr
    James, you should go
    up there and
    investigate the body.”
    “Ok thanks Mr
    Brooks.”
    Samuel and I got in
    Sophia apartment and
    as soon as we got in
    I noticed something,
    the room was
    scattered.
    “I think Sophia got in
    a fight with our killer.”
    I said. “Let’s go see
    the body.”
    We got in Sophia’s
    bathroom and saw
    her corpse lying on
    the floor.
    The towel she was
    tying around her
    waist loose lightly
    exposing her breast.
    “Well let’s……….” I was
    saying when I
    stopped.
    My face turn white
    with fear as I read
    what was written on
    the white tiles wall, it
    was written in red
    paints
    NEXT—— RACHEL
    CHARLES……….my wife.

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    RIDE ON

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