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    Ah, your wife ke?? Do something, Charles..

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    Lifēøf Shy GúyLifēøf Shy Gúy
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    SERIAL Killer
    CHAPTER 5
    Charles Pov:
    I stared at what was
    written on the tiles
    wall in shock.
    My heart started
    thumping faster, I rub
    my face to see if it
    was just my
    imagination but the
    words were still
    boldly written there.
    I staggered back and
    nearly slip. “Charles
    what’s the matter?.”
    Samuel ask worriedly.
    I did not say
    anything, I just point
    at what was written
    on the tiles wall of
    Sophia bathroom.
    “Oh My God!!!!!!!!, This
    is bad!!, Really bad,
    Charles what do we
    do now?.”
    It’s time to get into
    action, I promised
    Rachel yesterday that
    I wouldn’t let any
    harm befall on her or
    the kids and I’m going
    to fufill that Promise,
    I will not let the serial
    killer harm my
    family……..I will not.
    I quickly pull out my
    phone and dial
    Rachel’s number.
    “Come on Rachel,
    pick up pick up.”
    At the fourth ring she
    received the call.
    “Hello, hello Rachel
    hello are you
    listening to me?.”
    “Yes yes Charles why
    do you sound Soo
    panic?.
    “Rachel the killer is
    coming after you and
    the kids.”
    “What?!!!.” She gasp in
    shock.
    “Listen Rachel, don’t
    panic, I will not let the
    serial killer harm you
    just follow my
    instructions, okay?.”
    “Okay.” Her voice
    was feeble, she was
    scared, d--n it I put
    my family in this mess.
    “Rachel lock every
    doors and windows
    and also lock the
    attic, just make sure
    everywhere is locked,
    you and the kids
    should hide in our
    room, stay locked up
    in the room just
    remain there till the
    Police and FBI squad
    arrive, Rachel don’t
    open the door till you
    hear the Police siren,
    every footstep you
    hear, every sound
    you hear, don’t pay
    attention to it, I’m
    coming to Nigeria.”
    “Okay Charles I got
    your message but
    call the Police
    department and FBI
    squad not to take
    long our lives is at
    risk.” She said her
    voice coaxed,
    hearing my wife
    sound like this
    upsurge the anger in
    me, I will kill the serial
    killer if he harm my
    family……….I swear I will.
    “Don’t worry Rachel I
    got everything under
    control just do as I
    told you.”
    “Okay.” She said and
    hung up.
    I turn to Samuel. “I
    need to see Brooks.”
    I raced downstairs
    Samuel following
    behind me.
    “Brooks, Brooks we
    have a problem.” I
    said trying to catch
    my breath.
    “Calm down James,
    calm.” Brooks said.
    “I can’t, the lives of
    my family is in
    danger.”
    “What do you mean?.”
    “Something was
    written in Sophia’s
    bathroom saying
    NEXT—— Rachel
    Charles, which is my
    wife, that’s the clue
    the serial killer has
    been leaving to hint
    us on his next
    Victim.”
    “So what are we
    gonna do now?.”
    Brooks ask worriedly.
    “I’m taking the next
    flight to Nigeria.” I
    said
    “But you wouldn’t be
    able to get to Nigeria
    today Charles.”
    My face paled but I
    replied. “That’s why
    I’m going to call
    Inspector Kunle now
    to send Police and
    FBI squad to my
    house to protect my
    family.”
    “Ok be fast with that,
    we will also send our
    SWAT unit officers
    with you to Nigeria,
    this is our chance of
    catching this Serial
    killer.”
    “Thanks alot
    Brooks.”
    I quickly dial
    Inspector Kunle
    number, my mind
    repeateding just one
    prayer… “God protect
    my family.”
    Rachel’s Pov:
    Scared was an
    understatement to
    describe how I’m
    feeling now. The
    serial killer is coming
    for us, my instincts
    were right after all.
    Okay Rachel don’t
    panic just calm down.
    I started locking
    every doors and
    windows just as
    Charles has
    instructed me to do.
    I was just about to
    close the main door
    when I heard
    somebody call my
    name, my heart
    somersaulted twice
    and I look out at the
    person calling me.
    Relief wash over me
    when I saw it was our
    neighbor, Mummy
    Favour, coming
    towards me.
    “Please Mummy
    Favour, I can’t answer
    you for now, my life
    is in danger and I
    would advice you to
    leave immediately if
    you still love your
    life.” I told her.
    “Have naw, iya
    Hannah calm down
    na, wetin make you
    dey…………….” She didn’t
    finish her sentence
    as someone stab her
    neck from behind with
    a sharp knife. I
    screamed and fall on
    the floor as I watch
    Mummy Favour
    kicked furiously on
    the floor, blood
    gushing out of her
    neck, mouth and
    nose.
    I looked at who was
    standing at the
    entrance and I
    muttered. “The Serial
    killer.”
    He was wearing a
    mask so I couldn’t
    detect his face. He
    wore a black jacket,
    black denim jeans,
    black gloves and
    black boots.
    He looked at me
    before looking at
    Mummy Favour on
    the floor, then he did
    something that
    scared me to death,
    he grab Mummy
    Favour hair then he
    stab the knife into
    her two eyes using
    the knife to remove
    the eyes as he cut
    the vein connecting
    the eyes to the brain.
    I have watched
    enough, I screamed
    and quickly jump to
    my feet as I ran to
    the room locking the
    door before climbing
    on the bed with the
    children who were
    now scared.
    “Mum what
    happened?.” Joe
    asked worriedly.
    I pulled both of them
    closer to me, they are
    too young to
    experience this.
    “Don’t worry children,
    nothing will happen to
    you…… absolutely
    nothing.”
    Then I saw the Bible
    on the drawer, I
    quickly took it and
    started reading
    verses, the serial
    killer was banging on
    the door.
    I was sweating
    profusely as I recite
    the verses.
    PSALM 56:3-4
    WHAT TIME AM I
    AFRAID, I WILL
    TRUST IN THEE IN
    GOD I WILL PRAISE
    HIS WORDS, IN GOD I I
    HAVE PUT MY
    TRUST, I WILL NOT
    FEAR WHAT FLESH
    CAN DO UNTO ME.
    He was banging
    furiously on the door
    and any moment from
    now the door will
    break down.
    PSALM 60:11-12.
    GIVE US HELP FROM
    TROUBLE; FOR VAIN
    IS THE HELP OF
    MAN. THROUGH GOD
    WE SHALL DO
    VALIANTLY; FOE HE
    IT IS THAT SHALL
    TREAD DOWN OUR
    ENEMIES.
    The door was getting
    weak and my children
    we’re now crying.
    PSALM 141:1-2.
    LORD, I CRY UNTO
    THEE, MAKE HASTE
    UNTO ME; GIVE EAR
    UNTO MY VOICE
    WHEN I CRY UNTO
    THEE. LET MY
    PRAYER BE SET
    FORTH BEFORE
    THEE AS INCENSE,
    AND THE LIFTING UP
    OF MY HANDS AS
    THE EVENING
    SACRIFICE.
    The door was slowly
    coming down but I
    continue reciting the
    verses, my children
    we’re crying loudly.
    PSALM 102:1-2. HEAR
    MY PRAYER, O LORD,
    AND LET MY CRY
    COME UNTO THEE.
    HIDE NOT MY FACE
    FROM ME WHEN I’M IN
    TROUBLE; INCLINE
    THINE EAR UNTO ME;
    IN THE DAY WHEN I
    CALL ANSWER ME
    SPEEDILY.
    The door finally
    broke down and the
    serial killer was
    standing at the
    entrance, two sharp
    glittery knives in his
    hands.
    He said in a dark
    voice. “There is no
    where to escape now
    Rachel.”
    That instant I know
    it’s over for me and
    the kids, I pull my
    children closer to me
    as I muttered.
    “I’m sorry Charles.”
    End of chapter 5.
    Author’s note:
    Whasupp guys sorry I
    put u guys on a
    cliffhanger.
    I know what will be
    running through the
    readers mind.
    What will happen to
    Rachel?
    Will Charles be able
    to save her?
    Will the serial killer
    harm Rachel and the
    kids?
    Don’t worry guys you
    will all find out in the
    next chapter.

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    Guy, you’re doing great…. Kudos.

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    Hmm… Getting intense!

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    senator danielsenator daniel
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    Lets see how it goes

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    Getting intense … next pls

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    SERIAL KILLER
    CHAPTER 6
    Rachel’s Pov:
    “I’m sorry Charles.”
    The children cling
    tightly to me as the
    Serial killer started
    walking towards us.
    My heart was
    thumping fast, and I
    was afraid it’s gonna
    burst out of my
    chest.
    I close my eyes so
    this hideous man
    should do whatever
    he wants to do
    because I have loose
    all hope.
    As soon as he made
    to grab me, we heard
    the blaring of sirens
    outside the house.
    Yes yes the Police
    are here, he walked
    over to the window
    pull the curtain up
    slightly.
    “F--k!.” He cursed
    under his breath, hes
    distracted, I better
    use this advantage.
    I quickly grab the
    flower vase on the
    shelf, I crept slowly
    behind him before
    shattering it on his
    head.
    He let out a painful
    grunt. I quickly grab
    my children and ran
    downstairs as fast as
    my legs could carry
    me.
    As soon as I got out
    of the house, I bump
    into Inspector Kunle.
    “Rachel calm down
    just calm down, are
    you ok?.” “I’m……..I’m
    fine, hes still up
    there.” I said anxiety
    taking over me.
    He turn to the FBI
    squad. “Surround the
    house, block every
    exit.
    Then he turn to me.
    “Go sit in one of the
    police cars with the
    children you will be
    safe there, I don’t
    want you to see this.”
    I quickly got into one
    of the Police car with
    my children and wait
    for this nightmare to
    end.
    It wasn’t long we
    started hearing the
    sound of gunshots,
    God please let them
    know this hideous
    and heartless serial
    killer, please Lord let
    them kill him.
    The gunshots cease
    a little, then I saw
    someone jump out
    from the back of our
    house and was
    running towards our
    car……………. the serial
    killer. No no no no
    no, there is no police
    or FBI around to
    save us, the serial
    killer was shot on the
    arm and was bleeding.
    I quickly lock the
    doors of the car
    before he got to us,
    he got to the car and
    started banging on it,
    my children were now
    crying but I wasn’t
    scared because he
    can’t harm me, I have
    a very BIG GOD.
    He saw it was
    useless banging on it,
    so he took out a
    Marker pen from his
    jacket and scribble
    something on the
    windscreen of the
    car.
    The PD and FBI
    started running out
    of the house towards
    him and he fled away
    quickly.
    “Get him!!!!!!!!!.”
    Inspector Kunle
    yelled out and the
    FBI squad started
    shooting at him, but I
    doubt if any bullets
    will hit him, he’s just
    too fast. I unlock the
    door to meet
    inspector Kunle.
    “Are you okay?,
    Hope he did not hurt
    you?.”
    “I’m fine Inspector but
    he wrote something
    on the windscreen of
    the car.
    I looked at it and my
    heart skip a beat, he
    wrote boldly, I’M
    COMING BACK FOR
    YOU.
    “You are not safe
    here.” Inspector Kunle
    said from behind me.
    “I will take you and
    your children to my
    house till Charles
    arrive tomorrow.”
    I turn to him and said
    with a smile. “Thanks
    alot Inspector.”
    Charles Pov:
    I slowly walk towards
    my house with slow
    pace but I noticed
    there was lot of
    activities going on in
    my compound.
    I step into my
    compound and there
    was ambulance and
    also lot of Police
    cars, what’s
    happening?, Where’s
    Rachel, where’s Joe,
    where’s Hannah.
    Where is my
    family???????!!!!!.
    Then I saw inspector
    Kunle come towards
    me a sad look on his.
    “I’m sorry Charles, we
    lost them.” He said
    and did not even wait
    for me to reply he
    just walked off.
    What does he mean
    by that, wait what
    happened to my wife
    and kids.
    That’s when I saw
    three corpse lying on
    the floor covered
    with white clothes.
    I quickly started to
    open the clothes and
    I saw my wife and
    children…………..they are
    dead………………I killed
    them.
    Suddenly the eyes of
    my wife and kids
    snap open and they
    were staring at me,
    the next thing I know
    they started saying
    You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us.
    I close my eyes and
    shouted. “I’m did not
    kill you please stop.”
    You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us You
    killed us You killed
    us You killed us.
    Noooooooooooooo
    ooooo ooooooooh
    ooooooooh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I woke up with a start,
    it was a nightmare,
    thank God it was just
    a dream.
    “What is it bro?”.
    Samuel ask, we are in
    the plane flying back
    to Nigeria but I’m
    really dying to meet
    my wife and kids, to
    know if they are ok.
    “How many hours left
    before we get to
    Nigeria?.” I ask
    anxiously
    “With the look of it
    we still have Fours
    left.”
    We have been flying
    on the plane since
    yesterday. I close my
    eyes as I whisper
    “I’m coming Rachel, I’m
    coming Hannah, I’m
    coming Joe…………
    …………….I’m coming………
    ………..SERIAL KILLER
    End of Chapter 6

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