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    AvatarThecomely
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    But where ar other the cultist z one of u

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    Lifēøf Shy GúyLifēøf Shy Gúy
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    Am sorry for the late post
    i’ll post tommorow

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    Etz KendoblastEtz Kendoblast
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    Nice One

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    Serial killer

    Happy sunday
    SERIAL KILLER
    CHAPTER 9
    Rachel’s Pov:
    The sun lit Into the
    room hitting my face
    and pulling me awake.
    I sat up slowly and
    rub the sleep off my
    eyes, I glance at the
    bed beside me and
    noticed Charles
    wasn’t there, maybe
    he’s probably
    downstairs with
    Inspector Kunle.
    As I made to get up
    to Kickstart the day, I
    saw a piece of paper
    folded neatly on the
    drawer.
    I slowly open it to
    reveal the smooth
    handwriting of
    Charles.
    MY DEAR WIFE, YOU
    AND THE KIDS ARE
    MY RESPONSIBILITY
    AND I CAN NEVER
    LET ANY HARM
    BEFALL ON YOU
    GUYS BECAUSE YOU
    MEAN ALOT TO ME.
    I HOPE YOU
    UNDERSTAND THAT I
    HAVE TO DO THIS
    FOR THE
    PROTECTION OF
    OUR FAMILY.
    I PUT YOU AND THE
    KIDS IN THIS MESS
    AND I’M TAKING YOU
    GUYS OUT OF IT
    BECAUSE I
    SERIOUSLY CAN’T
    LET THE SERIAL
    KILLER HARM YOU
    AND THE KIDS,
    THAT’S THE REASON
    I’M OFF TO FACE HIM
    AND END THIS
    MISERY, I LOVE YOU
    RACHEL AND I HOPE
    YOU UNDERSTAND
    WHY I’M DOING THIS,
    IT’S FOR OUR BEST,
    ALWAYS REMEMBER I
    LOVE YOU AND THE
    KIDS AND WILL
    ALWAYS DO.
    YOUR LOVE,
    CHARLES.
    I glance at the
    window staring
    outside at the bright
    Wednesday morning, I
    can hear horns of
    car and I can hear
    dogs barking in the
    distance.
    I look back at the
    letter before grabbing
    my jacket and rushing
    out of the house……….
    To save my husband.
    Charles Pov:
    My eyelid flicker
    slowly, I was dying
    and the pain seer in
    my stomach as if the
    bullet is eating deep,
    please death just
    come and take me
    away.
    “You should have
    listened to me and
    stop meddling in my
    business.” The serial
    killer said in a dark
    voice.
    Suddenly we heard
    the police siren
    blaring outside, the
    serial killer quickly
    fled away when he
    heard the siren.
    I can hear footsteps
    running upstairs and
    coming towards me.
    “Charles please just
    hold on don’t leave
    us please.” I heard a
    familiar voice……..
    Rachel.
    She has come to
    save me while all I do
    was put her in
    trouble.
    I could feel hands
    wrap around me and
    lift me off the floor
    and that’s all I could
    register……. .
    I slowly sat up and
    look around the white
    room and I notice I
    was in a ward in an
    hospital, what am I
    doing here????.
    WAIT A SEC!!!!!!!!!!..
    I was been shot by
    the serial killer
    yesterday, a sling
    was hung around my
    neck to my arm.
    But I can still feel the
    pain in my muscles.
    Just then the door
    burst and Kate and
    Samuel got in, “Oh
    Charlie babe, I was
    Soo worried when I
    heard that hideous
    Serial killer shot you.”
    Kate said giving me a
    worried look.
    “Don’t worry Kate I’m
    fine now.” I said with
    a genuine smile.
    “I’m sorry I have to
    leave you all alone
    there.” Samuel said.
    “Samuel stop blaming
    yourself, it’s not your
    fault and I was the
    that decided to stay
    there alone, ok let’s
    forget that what did
    you guys got from
    the test?.” I said.
    “Well from my test the
    blood you found in
    Mr Adekoya’s room
    doesn’t belong to Mr
    Adekoya.” Kate said.
    “Hmmmm, my instincts
    was right, the serial
    killer is doing his job
    himself.”
    “And also the ticket
    we found in Mr
    Adekoya’s room
    which belongs to the
    serial killer something
    was written on it’s
    back, NEXT——
    DEMOLA ADEKOYA.
    “Which means his
    next Victim is Demola
    in Chadni Chowk in
    India.” I said
    “Yes we can inform
    the police of India
    right on time to
    protect him.” Samuel
    Suggest.
    “Yes Samuel now this
    is how we will slowly
    track the serial killer,
    Samuel I want you to
    get every of the
    Adekoya’s living in
    Nigeria, send them all
    to the Police
    department for
    interrogation.”
    My phone started
    ringing and I check to
    see Inspector Kunle
    name on the Caller ID.
    I slowly received the
    call “Hello sir.”
    “There is a problem
    Charles, the body of
    Demola was found in
    a bar in Chadni
    Chowk in India his
    eyes are missing and
    he was shot on the
    head.”
    “The typical death
    that’s been going on,
    ok sir we will know
    what to do.”
    I hung up and turn to
    Kate. “We are leaving
    for India tomorrow to
    investigate the body
    and Samuel we will go
    to the Club night
    where we can get the
    serial killer, I will do
    anything to get the
    serial killer.”
    “Your wife just left
    now, she wants to go
    take care of the
    children.” Kate said.
    “I will see her soon, I
    need to protect my
    family.”
    On Saturday I will
    face the Serial
    killer………….. again and
    this time I’m not
    backing down.
    It’s do or die
    End of Chapter 9

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    The serial killer is someone u guys know

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    I think someone is aiding the serial killer

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    I don’t think dis serial killer is working alone,someone is really aiding him in his heinous activities…
    I wish u all de best Charles but pls don’t forget abt de threat to ur family!!!

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    Serial killer

    SERIAL KILLER
    CHAPTER 10
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    Charles Pov:
    “I’m not letting you go
    to India in that
    condition.” Rachel
    protested as she
    pour me a cup of
    steaming tea before
    handing it to me.
    “Rachel come on, I’m
    just going there to
    check out the body
    before the police will
    vacate it from the
    Crime Scene
    forfeiting all fornesic
    evidence we need.” I
    explained.
    “Just send Samuel or
    Kate, for Goodness
    sake Charles your
    wound hasn’t heal at
    all and the last thing
    you need now is
    moving around and
    stressing yourself,
    Samuel can handle
    the investigation till
    you are fully fit.” She
    said and I reasoned
    to what she said,
    maybe she was right
    after all, I’m not
    suppose to stress
    myself right now, the
    doctor told me the
    same thing.
    “Ok dear, let me call
    Samuel.” I said and
    she smiled happily.
    “That’s good my
    love.” She said as
    she walk up to me
    and kissed me
    tenderly.
    “Ok let me go check
    on the children, make
    sure you eat your
    meal.”
    “Sure my love.”
    Soon Rachel was
    gone and I was left
    alone in the ward, I
    pull out my phone
    and dial Samuel
    number.
    “Hello.”
    “Hello Samuel please
    come to the hospital I
    need to see you.” I
    said and hung up, I
    sip from my tea as I
    await Samuel arrival.
    Few minutes later
    Samuel stepped in
    and sat on my bed
    beside me.
    “What’s the matter
    bro?.”

    Nothing bad bro, just
    wanna let you know
    that you and Kate will
    go to India because
    I’m not 100% fit to
    move around, try to
    get every information
    you can lay your
    hands on, when you
    guys come back from
    India we will
    interrogate the
    Adekoya’s in Nigeria
    here.”
    “Okay bro we will do
    just that, when
    should we leave for
    India?.
    “Today of course,
    no wasting of time.”
    “Ok bro, I will keep
    you updated.”
    Samuel Pov:
    Chadni Chowk, I’m
    going to India for the
    first time in my life,
    can’t wait to explore
    India.
    “Are you ready?.”
    Kate ask standing at
    the entrance of my
    room, she was putting
    on her sunflower
    gown and i know for
    a fact she would
    prefer her dark black
    and white striped suit
    than this, she look
    sexy in that dress
    and i just can’t
    control myself from
    sleeping with her now.
    “Just need to take
    some few stuffs we
    might need during the
    flight.” I said as I
    stuff some soda and
    chips in the bag.
    “I can’t wait to get
    off this dress.” She
    said disgusted as she
    pull the gown.
    I chuckled and walk
    up to her, cupping her
    cheek with one of my
    hand and using the
    other to encircle her
    waist and pulling her
    closer to me..
    “You look sexy in
    that dress.” I whisper
    into her ears. She
    smile as she said
    “Thanks Sam but I
    still can’t wait to get
    out of it.”
    I grab her by the hip
    and she encircle her
    legs round my waist, I
    carry her over and
    put her on the bed.
    “Sam we are going to
    India, we will miss our
    flight.”
    “No we wouldn’t,
    there’s still time.” I
    said as i started
    taking off her gown
    until she was lying on
    the bed naked, wow
    she’s Soo hot, I
    always finds it hard
    to resist this woman.
    I pull my shirt and
    trouser as I started
    kissing her softly,
    trailing hot kisses
    down her neck.
    She moan sexually
    as she held tightly on
    my muscles back, I
    started kissing her
    sending my tongue in
    her mouth. Then I
    slowly settled
    between her legs and
    started to enter
    slowly, she moaned
    loudly as she grab
    tightly buring her
    fingers into my flesh.
    Then I entered her
    completely and
    started riding slowly
    getting drunk in the
    pure Bliss of our
    love making.
    Our flight took off
    and by tommorow we
    will be in India, I took
    a magazine and read
    to while away time
    and Kate just gaze at
    the tiny houses and
    cars below.
    Around 04:23 on
    Thursday we arrive at
    Chadni Chowk and I
    quickly dial Inspector
    Raj Kumar number.
    “Hello Inspector Raj
    Kumar, we are already
    in Chadni Chowk.”
    “Oh that’s good take
    a tuk tuk and tell him
    you are going to
    Sindjhu Police
    Station.”
    “Ok sir.” I did as Raj
    Kumar said and we
    board a tuk tuk
    typically known as
    Keke Napep in
    Nigeria. We finally got
    to Sindjhu Police
    station and Raj
    Kumar was already
    waiting for us outside
    the police station.
    “Raj Kumar, inspector
    of Chadni Chowk
    Police department,
    India, you must be
    Charles James.”
    “No Sir Raj Kumar, I’m
    Samuel Timilehin, an
    Agent of FBI Nigeria
    base and also an
    assistant of Charles
    James, actually Mr
    James was shot by
    the serial killer but
    he’s now receiving
    treatment now so I’m
    representing him.”
    “Oh no that’s too
    bad, who could be
    this Serial killer?.”
    “That’s the question
    we still haven’t gotten
    an answer to.” I
    replied.
    “Ok let me drive you
    to the bar the
    incident occurr.”
    “Hope the Crime
    scene is still how it
    is?.” I ask as we
    started walking
    towards his car.
    “Of course, none of
    my officer tamper with
    the informations on
    the crime scene.”
    “And I will also like to
    see the owner of the
    bar and the bar
    tender.” I said.
    “Ok no problem.”
    We finally got to the
    bar named Dheli bar,
    and we got into the
    quite bar and I saw
    the body on the
    floor, just as
    expected the eyes
    are missing and there
    was a hole on his
    head.
    “Kate get the tool
    box out let’s start
    Investigating the
    body.
    I slowly bent down
    and took a closer
    look at the dead
    body of Demola and
    maggot was already
    creeping out from the
    empty eye socket.
    Why is the serial killer
    removing his victims
    eyes???,he must be
    using it for
    something.
    Kate took the victims
    fingerprints and I
    took the blood
    sample for test at the
    Lab, then I saw
    something on the
    back of Demola’s
    neck, like a mark,
    “Kate come check
    this out.”
    She took a closer
    look at it before
    saying. “This is a
    mark from a Ring.”
    “Which means our
    Serial killer strangle
    Demola to death
    before shooting his
    head and removing
    his eyes.”
    “Exactly, the logo on
    the ring is clearly
    imprinted on Demola’s
    neck when he was
    strangling him, now if
    we can get the logo
    of that ring clearly we
    will be able to go to
    the shop and make
    enquiries.”. “Exactly
    now let’s cut it off.”
    Kate gave me the
    twizzer as I slowly
    cut of the part the
    logo of the ring was
    imprinted on keeping
    the skin in the tape
    carefully so it
    wouldn’t fade.”
    “Ok let’s go and meet
    Raj, he need to take
    us to the boss of
    this bar and the bar
    tender.”
    We went over to Raj
    and I had a huge
    smile on my face, we
    closer to catching
    you Serial killer… ..
    just getting closer
    End of Chapter 10.
    Author’s note: Hey
    guys, how was the
    chapter so far???.
    To be continue
    tonight

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