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    ?Tears of a
    Blind Girl?

    Episode 9

    Victor’s POV

    I watch her in tears as her eyes went dimmer, it was like she was forcing her self to stay alive…

    Oh no!!!

    I felt like halting the car to check on her but it would make the journey take more time, I need to meet a doctor..

    The fact that I don’t know anywhere around here is making it all difficult, I have to keep asking for the route to follow..

    There are many nearby hospital but I needed the best of all, I need to take her to the best j hospital so she would treated very well..

    I would never forgive myself if anything happens to her..

    Finally, I reached the hospital which I was told was the best, I parked my car and carried her in a bridal style rushing into the hospital without waiting for the nurse to bring a carrier…

    I ran up the stairs with my heart beating very fast, what if she stops breathing??

    No never!!.. It can’t happen!!

    I was acting like someone who would run mad..

    “I reached the ward and dropped her on the carrier which was rolled off to the intensive care unit…

    ” please treat her very well, don’t let any complication to occur..she is my…fiance..” I muttered the last part which forced itself out..

    What about Anna???

    I took a deep breath as I sat in distress..

    The blood coming out of her body was really pulling my heart away, it was really killing me,

    I don’t know what really happened.. I don’t need to know before saving her, she gas to be well before I ask question..

    “Presh please be well for me!” I sighed in pain..

    Anna’s POV

    “What hospital did he went to?” I asked some passerby who saw him..

    “He said he wants the route for the best hospital and I guess that’s where he headed to” the young man who I asked replied making me hit my fist on the steering in anger..

    Why would he want the beat hospital?

    Why would he even suffer all this for that nothing but cursed human!


    I wound up the glass and zoomed off..

    It is getting easier, just some cool cash and the doctors would arrange a flight that would take her away from anywhere closer, maybe India or south Korean.
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    They would just cook some lies like..she ran away from the ward secretly after telling a nurse that she doesn’t want to have anything with Victor…


    A great idea!

    I was thinking of going to the hospital but I am no longer going..I can’t drive into that drug smelling place because of that blind thing…

    I drove back home but diverted to Amanda’s house…

    Do you know her???

    Haa, she is that woman I call for help anytime it gets complicated, my brain box!

    She is the king sister and there is a lot we had in common, we both needs presh out from Victor’s life…

    I got there and she was in her sitting room enjoying her self with one of the place guard..

    He was f**king the daylight out of her..

    I got in and he quickly jolted up in fear…

    “Hey, go on..” I smiled and winked at Amanda who gestured for me to wait in the guest room which I gladly did…

    After some minute, they were done,

    “So I hope I’m safe, you just gave me an unexpected visit..” She said and I nodded..

    “I needs to see presh’s mother..” I said

    “Okay then let’s go, you got to wear this mask, you know she may recall your face” she said and I nodded taking the mask, she also took hers and we both wore it…

    Getting into the room, I saw her tied to the chair making anger swell in me, I hated the woman and her child..she is alive to this moment just by luck..

    She would even be killed if presh didn’t leave..

    She knew many secrets and that’s why my face is covered…

    Her eyes was wet and bulged out if hunger and torture…

    “You should have killed your daughter, now you are passing through all this because of her, can’t you see she is a curse to your life!” I growled and she was still, she didn’t reply just staring at my face…

    I slapped her angrily and she shrilled in pain as blood drizzled out of that spot, I just slapped her with a ring..

    She whimpered as her body shivered in pain..

    “No need of crying, you would still be killed, just save those tears for your days in hell!!” I seethed and stomped out angrily…

    I may kill her with my hand if I stay there any longer, her face is just like a reminder of the past..

    I can’t wait for her to die…


    “What about presh?” Amanda asked and I explained everything…

    “This is our chance, we would pat the doctors treating her to increase the pain, they should cause some complication that would worsen her situation..when she is unconscious after the pain, then she would be transported to a far way country..” She stated and I was forced to smile like a goat..

    I can’t love her less,always having the best plan…


    Presh’s POV

    I was happy as they finished treating me successfully, I don’t even feel any pain again, my stomach had been stitched…

    I can’t wait to hear victor’s voice besides me…

    Just then, i heard the door creep opened with footsteps coming closer…

    “We need to treat some mistakes in your stomach..” I heard one of the doctor..

    “But….” I couldn’t complete my statement before I felt a sharp pain on my stomach..

    The stitch had been pulled up roughly…

    “Turn on the sound proof of this room” I heard the doctor say…

    He pulled it up again and I screamed in deep pain, it was so much that I was losing my breath, blood was flowing out

    My whole body couldn’t move again, the pain is so much to bear, I wonder what they were doing..

    They started stitching it again, this time in a more painful way..

    I cried!..

    I begged!..

    I wailed!..

    Nothing changed, the pain even increased…


    What is my life to be called?


    What else do I pass through every single moment..

    I was finding it hard to stay strong any longer, I think its the right time to die and leave this painful world…

    My tears fell all over the pillow and I blacked out…

    To be continued


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    Wickedness at it peak, next please

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    Wait what is her offense bcos this sufring is too much mother and daughter… Even the doctors

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    This suffering is too much

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    chii this Victor too doesn’t have sense he kn people are after you but he is always leaving you alone instead of involving security men

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    ?Tears of a
    Blind Girl?

    ??(Twist of fate)??

    By. Humble Smith & Clara William

    Episode 10

    Victor’s POV

    I sat in patient waiting for the doctors to come out and tell me the present state of her condition, I was really feeling anxiety, it was like something isn’t alright,

    Why would it take the doctor so long to come out and explain the condition, it was just the cut in her belly and the wounds in some part of her body, it can be treated without taking this long..

    I sighed deeply with a heavy heart as I recalled her dim eyes when I drove her to the hospital…it was wet and was showing deep pain, pain that was too deep into the heart..

    She looked like someone who had the whole world against her, just the thought of her shrill of pain makes me have a wet eyes, it is just too much for her,

    When she wakes up, she would have to tell me who did this to her..

    Oh no!!!.. She is blind!!!

    That means she didn’t see the face, there is no other person that I could suspect other than Anna but she can’t be this cruel..yes!!..she hates presh because she is a blind and poor girl..that’s how she had always been, she hates poor people and the fact that she was even blind makes her not to want to have anything to to to her…

    She may hates her, but..I know she can’t be so cruel to stab her, she won’t be so cruel to hit her, can’t be her!!!

    I was trying to push this thought away from my mind but it keeps creeping in..

    How would it be Anna???

    I am very confused..I wasn’t with my phone so I don’t know if she called or not..

    I buried my face into my palm as I thought of everything, why would the poor soul suffer all this anywhere she goes..

    It seems like her enemies are everywhere, her mother is missing, she also wouldn’t stay in peace, always passing through pains and anguish..

    I would do everything to make her life better i don’t care if Anna wants it or not, I will just do what I want and what I think is right, she has suffered enough..

    I’ll spend all my money to restore her sight then she would live with me…nothing would make me not do this, I no longer give a d--n on Anna’s reaction..

    Anna’s POV

    “It is done!” I heard the voice of the doctor through my phone making me smile widely,

    “Next is to tell victor that she sneaked out of the hospital without anyone knowing, also tell Victor that she told a nurse to make him know that she doesn’t need him…” I laughed

    “Than secretly transport her to India or north Korea” I said and he sighed

    “What if i am thoroughly asked about her whereabout?” He questioned

    “Don’t worry about men would clean up every trace..” I said and hung the call.

    “It is going well!” I announced to Amanda who also smiled

    “What about her mother??” I asked

    “She would be killed her tomorrow!!.. I’m tired of seeing that face!” She seethed

    “Kill her if you want, I would just throw presh away from Victor, I and Victor would continue our lives together like before, I am sure presh is clouding his mind..when he couldn’t see her again, he would come back to his senses..” I chuckled…

    “Let’s celebrate our success!!!” I screamed and we both grabbed bottles of wines gulping it hungrily..

    Author’s POV

    It was just few minute to end it all, the doctors had succeeded in putting presh into a serious coma, a coma that would give the patient internal pains…

    The patient would be feeling the pain but can’t move their body, only tears falling off their eyes..

    It would seem like they are paralyzed…

    “Is the flight ready?” One of the doctor said into his phone..

    “Yes..” The reply came and the doctors arranged presh like an emergency patient..

    “I’ll take her out while you go and inform Victor the wrong information..” The doctor breathed and their faces was filled with smiles..

    They were all happy it was going fine not knowing they did a great mistake, no one had remembered that a surveillance camera had been installed not long ago..

    They were covered with the thought of money and hadn’t think of that..

    Victor’s POV

    “Prince I have something very urgent to show you!” I heard a strange voice making me raise my gaze to him..

    “What is it?” I asked

    “I am Dr Ken..I was supposed to give that patient you brought in here the final treatment but all of a sudden I was changed with another doctor…

    Anxiously, I went to the system room to check on this new doctor and I saw what left me trembling…they were sent to take presh away..” He stated and I jolted up with horror..

    “Presh had been injected with a fluid that paralyzed her whole body for some times, the fluid is equally giving her pains..I don’t know but what are we gonna do??…watch this!” He said and handed a tablet to me..

    ” I played the video there and a loud scream of exasperation forced itself out of my lips..

    The scene of presh crying out loud really shred my heart to pieces..

    I felt like dying!!!!

    I quickly picked my phone and called different kind of security and agencies, those doctors would see hell!!!!!

    In no distant time, the hospital was filled with the cops and security men…

    Author’s POV

    Through the back door, presh was successfully rolled out…

    “Do we shut the camera????’ One of the doctor asked and they all widened their eye in total dismay..

    ” no!!!!!”

    We are doomed!!!!

    How couldn’t we shut the cameras?

    “Jeez!!..we have to go and erase it!”

    “I’m sorry it’s already too late..” They heard the voice of someone..

    Looking up, they all saw group of cops and security men fully armed looking at them sternly…

    “The three of you are under arrest!!!!..” The leader of the troupe stated and before the doctors could talk further, they were bound and smacked by the men

    “You must tell us who sent you or you will die in the torture room with slow pain !” The boss seethed as they were all bundled away…

    To be continued.

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    This is good

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    Thank God the evil doctors did not succeed

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