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    jummybabe
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    What is going on

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    Jonzy4u
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    Brotherly explain what next oh i hate getting tensed up

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    dencygirl
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    The story is confusing,, which kinda brother wouldn’t recognize his sister,, maybe he hz amnesia

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    Maths
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    are u sure he av’nt lost his memory.
    Becos am confuse

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    Lonewolf05
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    Whats the confusion all about?, is she not his sister??
    Thanks for the iv @ryder, so sorry i came late.

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    Viciyoung
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    THE ABOMINABLE ACT
    Episode 3
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    Continues..
    Mrs Williams was still in her thought when she heard her name, she knew then that Nathaniel was heading to her room and just as she thought her door swing open revealing Nathaniel.
    NATHANIEL
    Mum, who is she, and why is she calling herself my sister, what is happening here.
    MRS WILLIAMS
    Nath, can you calm down, you are raising your voice.
    NATHANIEL
    Mum, please don’t do this right now, what is happening
    MRS WILLIAMS
    Nath, it is a long story and….
    MR WILLIAMS
    Nath.
    Mrs Williams was interrupted by mr Williams, she immediately did the sign of the cross, thanking God for the intervention of her husband.
    NATHANIEL
    Dad
    Mr Williams who has been standing at the door step into the room shutting the down behind him
    MR WILLIAMS
    Take a sit boy
    Nathaniel immediately did as he was told, mr and mrs Williams also took their sit, the room was a missive bedroom divided into two part the bed area and a little space use as a sitting room.
    MR WILLIAMS
    Where is Natasha
    MRS WILLIAMS
    In her room
    MR WILLIAMS
    Good it will be better if she doesn’t listen to our conversation
    NATHANIEL
    Dad, mum, what is happening, I know I heard you both right that day, your words was clear.
    MR WILLIAMS
    Yes, you are correct but it was a lie, your sister never died
    Nathaniel wouldn’t believe want he was hearing, it has been twelve years, he was only eleven years old when his parents told him that his sister was dead, they did her burial even if he refused to go because he couldn’t leave with the fate that his only twin sister was dead.
    NATHANIEL
    No, you guys are kidding right, my sister burial was done
    MRS WILLIAMS
    No, we are not, it’s the truth, and that wasn’t Natasha burial, it was a friend’s daughter burial.
    NATHANIEL
    Why, why mum.
    He has been trying to control the anger and the betrayal he was feeling, but he just couldn’t take it anymore more, he stands up tossing round the room
    NATHANIEL
    I was only eleven, what were you people thinking.
    MR WILLIAMS
    we were thinking of both of you, it was a hard moment for all of us, I had a business rival who wanted to get to me through both of you, separating both of you was the best we could do.
    Nathaniel could not hold himself from crying he allow the tear fall.
    NATHANIEL
    I still don’t get you, how does it connect to the fate that you separate us.
    MRS WILLIAMS
    We were scared that if both of you stays in same place it could be risky, so we decided to separate you two.
    NATHANIEL
    Then why the lie about her death
    MR WILLIAMS
    If we haven’t told you she was dead will you have stopped wanting to be where she was, don’t you something ran away to look for her, or have you forgotten that you almost harm yourself because you want us to oblige to your request, so telling you she was dead made you stop asking for her.
    Everything they said was true, he still remember those events, with this he calm down a little.
    NATHANIEL
    And you never thought about how it will affect me.
    MRS WILLIAMS
    We did and that was why we brought you back to stay with us so we could be there for you.
    NATHANIEL
    And all this years you never bothered to tell me the truth.
    MRS WILLIAMS
    We wanted to but just didn’t know how, please forgive us
    Mrs Williams got on her feet
    MRS WILLIAMS
    Nath, we are really sorry
    NATHANIEL
    Mum
    They both embrace, Mrs Williams was at peace, Nathaniel cried on her shoulder like a baby and Mrs Williams let him pour his heart out, after few minutes she wipe the tear from Nath eyes.
    MRS WILLIAMS
    You can go meet her now
    Nathaniel nodded and left them.
    MRS WILLIAMS
    At last, it has ended
    MR WILLIAMS
    I told you there was nothing to worry about, come
    Mrs Williams went to were he was sited she did same, mr Williams open his arm for her to come in. Nathaniel got to Natasha door, he stands there not knowing if he was ready to face her, he has earlier behaved rudely to her. He sermon courage and open the door, Natasha was on the bed, she has stopped crying few minutes ago, she raised her head to see Nathaniel standing staring at her, she could see tear in his her and this got her to her feet.
    NATHANIEL
    You have grow up
    Nathaniel managed to say, Natasha was relieve to hear that from him, she run to embrace him and Nathaniel welcome her with an open arms.
    NATHANIEL
    Am so sorry, so sorry
    NATASHA
    I missed you so much
    NATHANIEL
    you won’t understand how much I wish to hold you like this in my arms
    He kissed her hair, they both allowed the tear to flow, they both disengage from the embrace
    NATHANIEL
    You look so beautiful
    This cause Natasha to smile, Nathaniel touch her cheek, he couldn’t believe he was actually holding his lost sister.
    NATHANIEL
    Dad is back too
    NATASHA
    really,
    NATHANIEL
    I will take you to him
    Nathaniel took her by the hands leading her to their parents room, Natasha was very happy to see his father though his father always comes to visit her back in UK but still, she still missed him. They all later had dinner, it was like a family reunion to them, the twin was all over each other and couldn’t want to leave their sight, after dinner they had a family discussion about so many things and later relocated to their rooms, Nathaniel and Natasha was seen in Natasha room, they were both on the bed, Natasha placed her head on Nathaniel chest while Nathaniel play with her hair.
    NATASHA
    Mum said you choose my room decorating
    NATHANIEL
    You like it
    NATASHA
    Yea, I do and thanks.
    NATHANIEL
    I never thought I will see you again
    NATASHA
    Me too, I thought you have forgotten about me
    NATHANIEL
    Why will you think so
    NATASHA
    You never called for almost eleven years, you stopped calling me after a year, I thought you were angry with me.
    NATHANIEL
    I will never be angry with you
    NATASHA
    Then why did you stop calling
    Nathaniel wanted to tell her the truth but he stopped himself, he wouldn’t want to ruin the night.
    NATHANIEL
    Don’t worry I will​ tell you all about it later, let just enjoy the moment for now, just know that I never stop thinking about you.
    NATASHA
    Okey
    NATHANIEL
    I love you so much
    NATASHA
    I love you too.
    This brought smile to Nathaniel face, He truly love his sister and could die for her, this is how big his love for his sister is.
    Comment fast to get the next episode quickly..
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    Itz #Viciyoung

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    Itzprince
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    Why didn’t Nathaniel recognize his sister?

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    kingsabinto
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    CONTINUE ASAP

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