The birthday murder

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    He slowly pulled into the parking lot of the hotel. He was breathing breathing furiously, he began to think again, the reason why he had accepted d deal………….
    He was sitting down at his favorite spot in hotel drinking and observing the people around him, then he saw the man coming towards him,the man had offered him a good job worths millions of dollars……
    He felt a vibration and that brought him back, he picked up his phone and answered:-
    HIM: what?
    CALLER: are you there now?
    HIM: yes
    CALLER: good, proceed as planned, everything is good from this area
    HIM: what about the traffic came?
    CALLER: everything is ok
    HIM: (took a deep breath) good
    CALLER: you are good to go, call me when its done
    He ends the call and took another breath to calm his nerves. Its now time to earn his money 750 dough by making his first kill
    He brought out his laptop nd hacked into the hotel’s system, viewed the inside, located his target and then shifted the camera a bit to avoid being seen. He wore his specialized latext glove and got down from the car and entered the hotel,he approached the target, carefully avoiding the cameras until he sat face to face with him
    HIM: Hi john, am inspector mason
    JOHN: Hi inspector
    MASON: Can we please go to talk, i hv an important message for you
    JOHN: ok, sure.
    He got up and they went downstairs to a lonely area, he then pulled out his phone and showed him a picture
    MASON: Do you remember them?
    JOHN: (eyes widened on seeing the picture) yes, i do
    MASON: (changing the picture) Do you remember him?
    JOHN: Yes i do his name his judge
    MASON: (pulling his gun silently) He’s alive…….
    JOHN: What
    MASON: …….and he send his greetings
    JOHN: Wh………..kposaaa
    Mason has already fired the shot and had hit him in the chest. He then carefully spilled the drink he his holding……..
    10 minutes later
    Driving away in his call, he made the calle…..
    MASON: It done and am clear..
    CALLER: Good…stay low for now
    MASON: Ok

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    Sir MikeSir Mike
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    Hi everyone @pizzzaro @somkhid @promzy @abolaji @tenniebenson @igwe
    plz someone should help me to do the roll call properly
    this is my first story and i would b needing all of ur encouragement

    #706659 Reply

    Another crime story

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    #706669 Reply

    Sounds interesting

    #706673 Reply

    @sonshine another story is here, bring reg

    #706684 Reply

    waitinq patiently for next..

    @sonshine pls come and qo and help him with the req..

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