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    ~Brytee~Brytee
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    Perfect timing, let ride on

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    senator danielsenator daniel
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    seated

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    senator danielsenator daniel
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    bring it on

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    senator danielsenator daniel
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    @myraruby come ooooo

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    Nice start

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    THE BLUE RIVER
    (Destiny Calls)
    Episode 2
    :
    :Written by #Bright_Daniel
    :
    A tap on the back reminded Benlo that he
    was actually waiting for somebody at the
    supermarket. He turned with a smiling face
    to see Jasper behind him.
    “Why were you staring at the bus, and why
    are you smiling?”
    “Lora just entered the bus” Benlo began to
    stroll again followed by his friend whose
    face looked worried wondering who Lora
    was.
    “Who is Lora, bro?”
    “Lora is a girl who told me her name is Lora”
    Benlo replied smiling at his own words.
    Jasper smiled along. “You have a way of
    making friends, and girls fall for you easily”
    “Yes, actually, she fell before me with her
    items”
    “She did?”
    “Yes”
    “But that isn’t the type of falling I’m talking
    about”
    “That’s your own cup of tea”
    “You know what i mean, silly boy!” Jasper
    gave him a friendly punch and both laughed
    together.
    :
    Benlo was a cool and gentle guy with an
    amazing talent of art. He can draw the exact
    image of anything he sees or thinks. His
    parents weren’t rich neither were they poor.
    He arrived home that evening, went into his
    room and banged the door behind him.
    There was a large image of a blue river on
    the wall which he drew and painted by
    himself. He placed his two hands on the
    waist staring at it. “Why do i have this
    feelings that this river exist?” he thought
    moving closer to it. As he stared at it, tears
    dropped down from his eyes but he wiped
    it off instantly and turned to see his door
    opened by his father, Mr Livinus. He wore a
    medicated eyeglasses, a singlet and a pair of
    trouser. He also stared at the image on the
    wall. “Benlo?”
    “Yes, father”
    “Can you tell me why you choose to have
    this particular image hanging at every angle
    of your room?”
    “I don’t know, father” Benlo sat on the edge
    of the bed taking a glance at the image
    again. He couldn’t bear how he felt, so he
    stood up to the image again and turned to
    his father with all seriousness. “Father, i
    have feeling that this river is someone”
    “Where?” the father passed him to wall
    touching the image and feeling the texture
    of the material.
    “I don’t know but..”
    “No but” the father interrupted. “Anything
    you don’t know doesn’t exist” he walked
    towards the door but turned again. “Your
    mother just served dinner. See you at the
    dining table” he walked out.
    ***
    The day had become dark when Lora
    arrived home. She met her grandfather
    sitting in front of the house, greeted him
    and entered into the local house. There was
    an electricity that generated light energy
    which illuminated the interior and exterior
    part of the building.
    Sarah jumped up for joy when she saw her
    elder sister. She collected a bag from her
    inside their room coz they shared only one
    room while the grandfather had his own
    room.
    “How was business today, Lora?” Sarah
    asked bringing out provisions from the bag
    while her sister began to undress. She was
    two years older than Sarah.
    “Fine” she replied without looking back then
    began to unbutton her bra.
    As Sarah went through the bag, she saw the
    paper Benlo gave Lora. She stared at it
    silently coz that was the exact image of the
    blue river she always thought about. When
    the quietness lingered, Lora turned to see
    her with the paper. “What are you doing
    with that!” she forcefully collected it from
    her.
    Sarah became speechless staring at her
    sister surprisingly. She had not disclosed to
    her about her new develop thinking attitude
    of a blue river and she wasn’t ready to do
    so. Therefore she asked, “Lora. Where did
    you get that?”
    “Someone gave it to me”
    “Who?”
    “Come, ” Lora glared at her. “Since when did
    u become an inspector interrogating me like
    a suspect?”
    “I’m sorry” Sarah waved it off. “Just that it’s
    nice. Do you mind hanging it on the wall?”
    she requested but her sister remaind mute
    dressing in a domestic wear. She placed the
    paper back into her bag then began to walk
    towards the door. “Let’s go make dinner”
    she finally said totally giving a deaf ear to
    Sarah’s request.
    “Okay” Sarah followed her without minding
    too.
    ***
    THE NEXT DAY AT RAIN BRAIN
    Rain Brain was a discovery company that
    deals on research. The workers there were
    all computer wizards each having a
    computer before him or her. The manager,
    Mr Rain was a tall huge man with a dark
    complexion. He’s heartless and gets what he
    wants either by cruel or crook. He doesn’t
    believe in impossibility thus making
    everything possible. Suddenly, one of his
    female workers, Ena, called his attention.
    “Sir, I’ve found something”
    Mr Rain went to her desk. He looked at the
    screen of her computer to see the image of
    a blue river. “What a heck is that?”
    “A blue river”
    “Go on”
    “It’s some kind of mysterious river located in
    the forest of Ezai sixty degree North”
    “Find more about it. If there is something
    useful there, I’ll send my men there” Mr Rain
    began to walk out but Ena’s voice
    interrupted him.
    “Sir, the forest might be dangerous”
    “It gonna be adventurous and no adventure
    is easy and simple, so get back to work!” he
    commanded..

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    mercyrubymercyruby
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    .wow, seems to be a nice story… move on

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    mercyrubymercyruby
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    @senatordaniel thanks for the iv

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