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    daniel wiredaniel wire
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    am getting interest in dis story

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    Oh…my. This is scary. Thanks for this, dear

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    Appreciate 🙏 bro

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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 16 (SIXTEEN)
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    #BACK_TO_GEORGE*
    #TRANSFORMATION_TRANCE*
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    . George: You means that i am your grandson, you cursed me, you make me to beco me like this, now I’m dea d, leaving the world to be with you.
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    . Joe: No George you’ve not yet leave home, you’re in trance, your transformation happening when you were struggling with the demons but now your demon body is fighting, it trying to absurd one to be freed.
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    . George: Arrg….., It really hurt, makes it to stop, you made me like this, take this away from me!
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    . Joe: No grandson, you’ve makes a great terrible mistake, am not the one who created you, your mother did it, i only forecast what i saw in my daughter womb, you survived using the blood George.
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    . George: I don’t believe that!
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    . Joe: Look at my eyes and tell me, I know you’re blaming me for all this mischievous things happening right now, but it was written for so long before you were born.
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    . George: Written?
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    . Joe: Yes, have you ever wonder why the demons busy looking for you to have your own blood.
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    . George: You too knew?
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    . Joe: Yes of course, I’ve been watching over you, your own blood, the pure blood of the chosen one is the key to opened the temple that has been lost for centuries, it’s not manifesting now grandson?
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    . George: You’re the one protecting the secret temple, what are you protecting?
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    . Joe: You knew the answer already George, Steve have been lecturing you well.
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    . George: I have to go back, take me back.
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    . Joe: Am not sure you’re ready yet, your tutorials is not yet started; C’mon George let me show you what i have in store for you
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    . George: I don’t want to follow you!
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    . Joe: Did you want to stay here forever?
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    . George: No!
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    . Joe: Then followed me, i will teach you everything you have to know about us before it’s too late for you.
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    . George get hold of his grandpa whose then disappeared immediately.
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    #THE_FOREST*
    #35km
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    5:00pm
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    . The unknown fiqure just watch them slowly, he had success in having the blood, it is time to open the temple without anybody to stopped him even the chosen one, suddenly he feels a sharp pains in his hands, he watched at his hand burnt off, well that’s the price for collecting the pure blood. He began to laugh out loud, his laughter filled the whole forest as he speed away, stopping at the entrance of the thick house with no roof, something started dropping down which revealed themselves as unknown creatures.
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    . Unknown fiqure: We have some company
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    . Looking at the sky why others creatures descending, their face was revealed immediately, looking a hint from the unknown fiqure.
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    . Unknown fiqure: What brings you from a far tellers Oba?
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    . Oba: We have come to seek for your help, forget about the past, we have been fighting each other for centuries but now we’ve a common enemy to purchase.
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    . Unknown fiqure: I know what you’re up to, i have successfully complete in collecting the pure blood and you know the price has to be taken which including in sacrificing my hand.
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    . Oba: How did you get the pure blood, i try all possible mean to get the blood.
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    . Unknown fiqure: Capturing the chosen one doesn’t guaranteed that you have successfully have him in your custody, still you’re here with me already then let joined hands together to fight this coming war.
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    . Oba: Yes, let do it, let us see how Damien will overpowered us.
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    . Unknown fiqure: But for now let headed now to the temple, this pure blood is the key of extraordinary powers.
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    #GEORGE’S_ROOM*
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    4:20pm
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    . The door open slowly which closes back, Susan walk in as she approached where Georg e has been laying, she sat down at the edge of the bed lifting his hands as she get hold of him; Looking at George, she really miss his company, she felt a very sharp pain in her heart, she wept still holding his hand
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    . Susan: I’m sorry George, please come back to me.
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    . She raised her head up as she kissed him on his lips and the unexpected happened.
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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 17 (SEVENTEEN)
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    #GEORGE’S_ROOM
    #45km
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    4:30pm
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    . Author Pov’s: (What did you except to happen).
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    . George just remain mute, his eyes were till closed, his mouth wasn’t moving at all, his breathing dies off, Susan looked at him, nothing happens, no chancing matter, she stood up and dashed off.
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    #FORBIDDEN_TEMPLE*
    #55km
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    12:00pm
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    . Arriving at the exactly entrance of the forbidden temple, the unknown fiqure quickly revealed himself as Jack, he smiled mischievous, he will now be the only socrerer whose will be controlling the gigantic creatures alone, Tellers Oba and his fighters wouldn’t notices what will be awaiting for them, once the temple is opened, conquering winning his brother and taken his place, he will killed all of them, he keep smiling, bringing the container out, opens the tub as he poured it out, the blood dropped in the ground as nothing happens.
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    . Jack: What’s happening?
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    . The whirlwind started blowing things up, breaking and rounding everything that came in it’s way, Jack ship away from the hint, in the whirlwind was a voice speaking out.
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    . Voice: You can’t have access to the temple, if you are willing enough to opened the temple, you have to come back with the blood.
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    . Jack: Is the blood not enough?
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    . Voice: The blood given to us wasn’t enough!
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    . Jack: What will we do now?
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    . Voice: The chosen one must willing to give out his blood by himself and not by stealing doing that will opened the temple successful.
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    . Jack: What? The chosen one has been snapped to death.
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    . Voice: Who killed him?
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    . Jack: I’m the one?
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    . Voice: If you’ve killed the chosen one then keep it in mind that you’ll be dead as well, you’ve just 24days to bring his blood.
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    #BACK_TO_GEORGE*
    #SECRET_CHAMBER*
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    . George get hold of his grandpa whose then disappeared immediately, appearing at the green pasture, with some light glowing on them, George looks around.
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    . George: Why are we here grandpa?
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    . Joe: This is the place where i always trained.
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    . George: What are we doing here?
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    . Joe just ignored him as he clap his hands, the ground opens as a stair pops out which they walked in as it closes back, the inside was so silent and dark, George couldn’t see anything as he stood which his grandpa has already given him some distance.
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    . Joe: George activated your demon eyes.
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    . Immediately George eyes changes and he was able to see in the dark, he remember that he can see thing in the dark but this one was different, he has to do what his grandpa told him, activating as his eyes changes, he was so surprised seeing the gigantic creatures roaming around, they weren’t scared at all but was very frightened, George quickly dodged them but one held at him as George realize that his hand is not burnt, rushing to his grandpa who was mixing something.
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    . George: Grandpa why did the demon not burnt to ashes?
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    . Joe: It’s because they are not just a normal demons, sit down let me told you a short story about them.
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    . George sit down as he listened to whatever his grandpa has to said, Joe hand him a glass of mixed ingredient.
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    . Joe: Take and drink!
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    . George: I don’t want to.
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    . Joe: You have to be strong enough before anything else goes wrongly.
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    . George quickly collected as he takes a sip of it, there was no taste of whatever he was drinking, but his energy restored as he felt more stronger, he relive..
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    . Joe: The gigantic creatures were long before the existence of our galaxy, the demons have been conquering the universe, a group of hostile, repulsive creatures, the demons survive by feeding on weaker life-forms whom they deem as inferior calling themselves the “Immortal Warriors”, they have seen countless battles, growing in strength with each victory led by their master.
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    . George: They had a master?
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    . Joe: Yes!
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    . George: Then they must be someone who leads them.
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    . Joe: The demon lord, they take great pleasure in spreading pain and destroying lives.
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    . George: The demon lord might be very dangerous.
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    . Joe: Not only that he’s also the commander of the demon race, once release all of us are doom.
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    . George: Bullshit don’t tell me you’re the demon-Lord, you lead those creatures to war, did you care about others demons, what about humans being to be possessed and you think this is fair, what the hell are you, are you for real, I don’t want to include myself in this mess because the person who’s blaming to be my grandpa is so cruel and unkind, what am i even doing here, send me back, i doesn’t want any of your f-----g tutorial anymore.
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    . George ended as he stood up dropping the glass and headed to the door, the creature whose was standing blocked his view stopping him.
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    . Creature: Where are you going?
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    . George: Pudding head let me passed.
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    . The gigantic creature looked at Joe who utter to let him go, George rushes out from the room, he didn’t know or have any ideas where he was running to, he stopped and then remembered that if truly he has to get out of here to his true self he has to complete his training, he turns back and headed back to the secret chamber.
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    #SECRET_CHAMBER*
    #THE_CONSERVATION*
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    . Joe: There is no way he can leave this place, i bring him here Rufus.
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    . Rufus: But it’s gone, whose knows where is it going?
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    . Joe: He will be safe! If only he allowed me to explain to him what i meant earlier.
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    . Rufus: He’s just a boy!
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    . Joe: He is just a teenager!
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    . Rufus: He is not grown up to be able to handle us.
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    . Joe: That’s why i have to prepared him for this coming war, he’s no longer a kid.
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    . Rufus: He’s so stubborn just like you master!
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    . Joe: Yes because he doesn’t know what is awaiting him, think Rufus, think well can’t you see that i am dying, i have been here for a centuries, if Jack successful in having the blood then also know that we’re doom and our days of disaster is approaching.
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    . Rufus: But master if some of us dare not to hearken to him.
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    . Joe: No one can escaped the spell, once spoken you’ve been control.
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    . Rufus: And when that time comes?
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    . Joe: I don’t want to be killed by my brother.
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    . Rufus: What will i do master?
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    . Joe: You’ll have to killed me.
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    . Rufus: Master please i can’t do that? I don’t want to killed you!
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    . Joe: You’ve to Rufus, i trust you!
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    . Rufus: (Weeping) And your power?
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    . Joe: It must be transferred to my grandson; Here take this(Handing him some liquor) break it when you’ve successful in killing me, it will cease your hint in killing for a main time, bring the boy to me.
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    . Rufus: Master please don’t force me?
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    . Joe: Rufus, i have spoken!
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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 18 (EIGHTEEN)
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    #BACK_TO_GEORGE*
    #SECRET_CHAMBER*
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    . George rushes out from the room, he didn’t know or have any ideas where he was running to, he stopped and then remembered that if truly he has to get out of here to his true self he has to complete his training, he turns back and headed back to the secret chamber, he stood a distance away as he relief, the door suddenly opened as he entered.
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    . Joe: You’re back?
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    . George: Where did we stopped?
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    . Joe: Come sit let me tell you what you need to know!
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    . George sat down, Joe adjust himself, he knows that his grandson will be back because there is no where he will have run to and he can’t returned without achieving the true power that is hidden in him.
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    . Joe: I’m the demon-Lord the one whose control the gigantic creatures but before then i wasn’t the one, they were out of control, feeding on humans life controlling them, when i realized what they have done, i quickly started casting and enchanting them back to the temple, the demon secret place, their home before they were lose, i control them still this day and hid the temple preventing others wicked demons having control over them.
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    . George: Sorry grandpa i mistakenly accused you for what i don’t have any idea of!
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    . Joe: I understand how you feel like, it not your fault George, sorry i left home for a long time
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    . George: There’s no need to said that, you don’t have to blamed yourself, you were doing the right thing to saved mankind.
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    . Joe: I missed my daughter your mother, you know i didn’t approve my daughter who is a demon to fall in love with a human, it’s against the law of our galaxy.
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    . George: That’s when you cursed me?
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    . Joe: I didn’t cursed you, i only forecast, demons can forecast the future.
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    . George: My mother told me that you leave home because of that?
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    . Joe: No, the time was near, it was out of control, i have to do something because i have the power to do it, humans were hurt and us being there bring more research to the humans world’s, the population was so huge
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    . George: You did the right thing grandpa!, can i asked a question?
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    . Joe: Absolutely, go ahead!
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    . George: What are orbs?
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    . Joe: Orbs are much brighter and visible to the naked eye, they are like shape sometimes round or diffuse, they vary in size from a golf ball to a basketball, some are rectangular diamond-shaped or like streaks of light.
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    . George: How can i have my own orbs?
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    . Joe: You have that already, two orbs attached to your body.
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    . George: But I’d killed anyone yet!
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    . Joe: Yes, when you were insert by a poisonous substance which you feel dizzy, they was a demon killed while you were sleeping, the demons even the commander didn’t notice it, you knew the rightful owner
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    . George: Cain the younger brother of Kane
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    . Joe: Yes, because you felt it, his orbs is now in your body
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    . George: Is that the reason why i transform to my demon form.
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    . Joe: Definitely!
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    . George: I want to transform back again, i want to know how to control it, i want to felt and know everything about my nature.
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    . Joe: You know i have another name being called?
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    . George: What kind of name?
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    . Joe: Damien Hades i am the Omega, the Blood, the King, the Willful King, the Chief Priest and the Beast himself.
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    . George: You’re all that, hmm it seemed that you’re so powerful, others are afraid of you.
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    . Joe: Yes, they were all scared of me but not anymore
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    . George: Why grandpa?
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    . Joe: Because of you, if my brother success in having your blood willing then i will be dead as well.
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    . George: How grandpa, i overheard that you are the most powerful sorcerer which no other demons on galaxy doesn’t have.
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    . Joe: Because am the true son of Hades, but we have another one in common.
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    . George: Why common, who’s he i will crush him using my fist.
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    . Joe: It is not so simple as you said George, my brother rage is more dangerous than mine, so tell me what will you do if you encountered him alone?
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    . George: I will fight, i will never surrendered
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    . Joe: You are not his match, you doesn’t understand all this i am saying George, being the chosen one doesn’t specify you to be very powerful than your species.
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    . George: I don’t understand!
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    . Joe: Because you’ve so much to learn, you’re you and i am me, nothing changes, it not about having my blood in your vein will quicken the hidden power in your body but you been forecasting and practicing it from time to time will only proven that you are worthy, they are others like you but you coming to us is a freedom to all gigantic creatures, but to others who are much worthy you are a cursed child to them.
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    . George: Cursed child how can i be cursed child or are you trying to revilement me; I’m the chosen one for Christ sake.
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    . Joe: Yes getting all this chosen one stuff on yourself making you think that you are famous, having trillion demons bowing to you, isn’t that a suicide, see George you being born to our kind brings nothing to us but disaster.
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    . George: I still don’t understand
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    . Joe: How will you ever understand when you are not even following up, you aren’t longer a kid George, looked around those demons are looking for your blood because your blood is the key to their freedom, when been released also keep it in mind that the humans race will be wipe off too.
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    . George: Oh bullshit, i got this, what will i do, i will just kill myself then.
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    . Joe: Killed yourself eh? Did you just mentioned kill? So you thought that killing yourself is the answer, who told you that f-----g trash? allowing your blood to splash everywhere entering this city going to baboom because you have willing to give up.
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    . George: Then trained me to fight, i don’t want anyone having my own blood.
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    . Joe: Having……., are you silly, my brother just snapped you by your neck and you still mentioned fight.
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    . George: What will i do then?
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    . Joe: Anything that is going to happen, no matter what the situation maybe, no matter how you see thing even if it will the last of your breath, don’t willing give anyone your blood, can you do that?
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    . George: Yes i agreed.
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    . Joe: Good now follow me i want to show you something.
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    . Entering the inner room the door suddenly shut immediately leaving George alone.
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    . George: Why are you shutting me in this dark room, this is part of training?
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    . Joe who was watching him couldn’t give him the reply, he stood mute watching him then he speaks.
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    . Joe: Whatever that happened there, be alerted, your training starts now!.
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    . A loud sound was heard which George who stood was so scared, his mind was busy, all the discussion really troubled him, the sound keep increasing and then an unknown creature jump landing in his front.
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    . Creature: Arrg……….
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    . He jumped to hit George who quickly dodged his attacked to another side while his fist hits the ground.
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    . George: Well i hoped you’d miss your target punk head!
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    . This Epic is written by Dave Sun.

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