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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 19 (NINETEEN)
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    #MR_STEVE_RESIDENT*
    #45km
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    2:05pm
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    . Mr Steve wandering around as he held beside the counter, in his left hand was Kane and his right hand side was Zac sitting down and staring at him, Susan has gone to school to avoid been shedding tears, even in the school she wasn’t focus, she really blamed herself, Mr Steve phone suddenly ring which he stare at the screen which was displayed Mr Barry, he ignores the first time, he pick it up the second ringing.
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    . Mr Steve: Hello Mr Barry
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    . Mr Barry: Hello Mr Steve; i hope everything is well, how is my son?
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    . Mr Steve: He’s fine, he went to school!
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    . Mr Barry: Okay, just tell him that we are coming back soon
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    . Mr Steve: When sir?
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    . Mr Barry: Is anything wrong?
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    . Mr Steve: No….i will inform him
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    . Mr Barry: Alright, take care
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    . Mr Barry hang up as Mr Steve was scared, they are coming back and their son hasn’t wake up from the deep slumber, he was thinking what he will do.
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    . Kane: Don’t worry yourself, he will wake up
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    . Just then they heard a loud sound coming from the room as they rushes inside, here stood the body of George standing erect, his eyes was still closed, he wasn’t breathing as before.
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    . Voice: What’s happening to him?
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    . A voice shot out as Susan walks in with Kate and Jane by her side.
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    . Zac: That’s how we saw it!
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    . Jane: The transformation trance is taken place, maybe we shouldn’t have laid him here.
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    . Kane: What are you talking about?
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    . Jane: Let put him in the casket, that is what all of us used.
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    . They were silence among themselves, some were murmuring.
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    . Mr Steve: This is not the right time to murmuring, we’ve to act fast especially now his parents called that they are coming back soon, we’ve to find the solution.
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    . Rowe: Am afraid Mr Steve, they is only one way to find out.
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    . Susan: How, which one way?
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    . Rowe: I know my idea is crazy but i don’t have any choice.
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    . Mr Steve: What’s it?
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    . Rowe: Let meet your father, he’s the oldest of all, he will be the only one that can awaken him fast.
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    . Mr Steve: No way, i’m not involving him here, no that’s so crappy.
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    . Ham: He is the only one that can do it.
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    . Mr Steve: I know but he did threaten George, all of us knew what those demons are looking for, we can’t lure him here, no think another way.
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    . CG: What of his grandpa?
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    . Kane: No one has seen him for centuries.
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    . Another loud sound was heard as a little light glow in George body’s, his body started transforming to his demon-form then his eyes suddenly opened immediately, his body glow brighter and more brighter as those who stood stepped backward, then the light began to reduce slowly and his eyes closes again, his body transform back to his human body as he descending laying down steadfast.
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    . Susan: George George, you can’t do this to me
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    . Mr Steve watch the whole incident as tears drop off, he clean it, he remember what happened to his mother, the same thing that’s happening to George.
    Kane moves closer to him, putting his hand in his neck, the wound was still there but his breathing has stopped instantly
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    . Kane: Oh George is gone! He’s dead!
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    . Susan couldn’t hold herself as she wept on his body, others stood as they wept profusely, they begin to exit leaving Susan alone in the room.
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    . Susan: I know you’re still there George, please don’t leave me, fight back and take what’s yours, please come back to me, I’m waiting for you!
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    . The orbs glow brighter, Susan didn’t notice it because she covered her face weeping, then the light ceased.
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    #THE_FOREST*
    #35km
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    2:45pm
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    . Jack being to think about the discussion he just had with the unknown voice in the whirlwind, he kept wondering whose has the voice, whose has the guts to question him without any fear, perhaps the unknown voice is just using the whirlwind to hide its true form.
    He remembered very well what the unknown voice told him about the chosen one
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    . Voice: If you’ve killed the chosen one then keep it in mind that you’ll be dead as well, you’ve just 24days to bring his blood.
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    . Just 24days to bring his blood, Jack being to think, how will i even find him, he has been snapped to death by me, i haven’t heard anything about him even he’s alive, i have kill the chosen one, how will i get the blood before the actual day, oh I’m regretting for reacting stupid.
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    . Jack: But am i being stupid for killing the chosen one?.
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    #BACK_TO_GEORGE*
    #SECRET_CHAMBER*
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    . The demon hold George’s body up as he thrown him away.
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    . Demon: You’re still not strong to fight me, how will you kill us then?
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    . The demon swash, Joe has already told him to stop but the demon refused to hearken, Joe wanted to open the door, the demon blocked it preventing him.
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    . Joe: Stop what you are doing now Greg, you don’t know who you are dealing with?
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    . Greg: I know, you won’t have allow me to fight him, are you training him to win us, no one can win us even you!
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    . Joe: How dare you challenged me?
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    . Greg: And i will do that again and again, i know your weak point old man, you’re dying, you want to train your grandson so that he can have an idea of dealing with us, you have fail Damien.
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    . Joe used his spell breaking the barrier door, stepping inside as he ran to George as he carry him to exit.
    Greg kicked him as he smashed hitting themselves on hard surface and fell down with a great thud.
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    . Greg: How dare you interrupt? He is mine, my own slave.
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    . Joe: What have you done Greg, have you realize what you’ve done?
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    . Greg: Yes, i know, if you want to save him, then you’ve to get through me first.
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    . Joe: What? Are you trying to killed me, I will make sure Rufus punish you.
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    . Greg: Rufus, i locked him up, we are tired to be locked up here, we need freedom to do whatever we want.
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    . Joe: Freedom to feed on humans? I can’t let that happen when i am alive.
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    . The giginatic creatures gathered together to watch the fight between two of them.
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    . Greg: Stop talking and let fight!
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    . Greg ran with full force to hit Joe who was standing as he quickly dodged him and rolling to the other side of the chamber.
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    . Greg: Fight old man!
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    . Joe: I don’t want to killed you, better stay off.
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    . Greg: Are you afraid to die? I need your powers, hahaha.
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    . He makes his way to Joe, raising his leg to kick him, Joe quickly dodged him, he get hold him in his stomach, inserting his full claws in Joe body, Joe quickly pulled him down a he limp, he pushed himself back as he began to enchanted some spell to hold him down which proves unsuccessful.
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    . Greg: Oh i forget to tell you, am not under your spell anymore, i told your brother where to find us.
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    . Joe: What have you done Greg, you’ve betrayed the galaxy.
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    . He kicked Joe off guard, carrying him as he thrown him hitting his back on the wall as he groan in pain trying to be in his feet.
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    . Greg: I can’t believe you’re powerless, your half brother is a powerful sorcerer than you.
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    . Greg started tearing his body to pieces, he struggles to hold him, the more he struggles the more Greg is damaging him with his claws, Joe eyes quickly closed as Greg wanted to release himself from his grip but realize that Joe couldn’t let go of him, he pushes him but same thing happened, Joe quickly open his eyes, his eyes changes
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    . His eyes was furious like that of red dragon.
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    . His black ram like horns coming out of the side of his head slowly
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    . His body was covering in black markings.
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    . Having a spider inspired motif(S)
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    . As he looked slowly to Greg who was now frightened, he punch him in his face but his face didn’t move a hint or like he was feeling any pain, he get hold of Greg pinning his full claws which were like that of an armadillo inside his body, Greg gave out a loud cries as he kneel down, he removed his claws as once as he uprooted his head of his neck, putting his long claws deep down in his heart pulling the heart with the throat, he removed his orbs which he holds it in his hands, the giginatic creatures that was watching them quickly bow their head.
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    . Joe: If any of you goes against my will, the same fate of Greg will be render to you all.
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    . Joe moves closer to George who was laying down as he s--t in another orbs attached to the one that was in before, his body started transforming to his demon-form then his eyes suddenly opened immediately, his body glow brighter and more brighter then the light began to reduce slowly and his eyes closes back again, his body transform back to his human body as he descending laying down steadfast; Then the orbs glow brighter again then the light ceased.
    Joe carry his grandson as he exit through the door.
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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 20 TWENTY)
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    #BACK_TO_GEORGE*
    #SECRET_CHAMBER*
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    . Joe carry his grandson and he exit through the door making all his way to his room, he keeps George who was just closing his eyes, he stare at him wondering if he is sleeping or death.

    Rufus walks in as he stand close to his master.
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    . Rufus: I heard what happened, Greg was outmash
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    . Joe: Yes he locked you up knowing that you’ll have prevent him.
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    . Rufus: I don’t know how he did and i also doesn’t know how he confront your bother
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    . Joe: There is a link, i feels being betrayed by whom am guarding and not knowing that they are also plotting against me.
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    . Rufus: We have to be more careful, if we get lose to the world, that will be the end of it.
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    . Joe: Hmm, i will send you on a mission Rufus.
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    . Rufus: My Lord, going to earth really means trouble to me.
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    . Joe: I know you can control your urge for blood.
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    . Rufus: Fine my Lord, what will i do?
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    . Joe: I want you to find something about my brother
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    . The d-day for George’s parents to come back, they had miss their son very much even though he failed to call them, they were so much worried, Alice knew that something is wrong somewhere, George will have call them or dropped a message for her, no matter what she has to find out.
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    . Jack searched as he keeps searching but couldn’t find George, he has checked his house several times, he then remembered the place he snapped him to death, he remembers seeing his son and others demons creatures standing with him.
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    . Jack: Oh, i will haven’t stress myself, he’s hiding in my son’s house but how will i enter inside to check him.
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    . Another idea came to him as he remembers approaching his son, he smiled and lowering himself turning to smoke as he flew away.
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    #MR_STEVE_RESIDENT*
    #45km
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    3:15pm
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    . Susan couldn’t leave the room, she has sleep off, Ham walks in as he keeps looking at both of them, he wondered what is happening, why will George wake up, Jack was his master sent to spy teller Oba and now he’s here to also spy George, he has to wait for his master to deliver what he has to do.

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    Sam was a demon like Ham, he always doubt and have this feeling that Ham is not whom he said he’s, being an original demon, he was blessed with a gift which he can read emotions, can influence humans dreams, can receive projected images, he hide his powers to prevent others knowing it, the day George was snapped to death, he saw the fiqure but wasn’t sure who’s behind the wheel.

    After Ham tiptoes closing the door, Sam makes his way down to the room, he examine everything, he couldn’t raise any alarm, be was following him without Ham knowing, Ham makes his way down the corridor, the place he always connect his master, he watches him from a far distance hiding and preventing Ham seeing him, Ham began his thing and Jack speak to him, Sam listen to every conservation that Jack speak to him, then suddenly they stop talking as he heard.
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    . Jack: We’re not alone! someone is coming.
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    . Sam was frightened that they had spot him, he wanted to run away but he had a second thought not to, he remain where he was hiding and holding his breathe, then he heard a footsteps approaching him, he turns to look as he saw CG walking with Zac, both demons didn’t see him.
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    . Zac: Are you sure you heard some voice?
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    . CG: C’mon that way!
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    . Both rushes out as Sam still remains still, soon Ham run passed him as he headed to the main building, Sam followed him suit, entering his room which he shared with Rowe, he turns immediately to see Rowe who was just looking at him.
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    . Rowe: What’s it? Is something is wrong elsewhere?
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    . Sam: Yes we’ve a spy amongst our midst and he’s working for Jack.
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    . Rowe: How did you know cos it seems like a surprise to me, how did you find out we’ve a spy?
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    . Sam: Are you one of them?
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    . Rowe: No, am not and i can’t be, i do good because that is what i love.
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    . Sam: I believe you, but then what will we do?
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    . Rowe: I don’t know!
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    . Sam: We have to inform Mr Steve first.
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    . Rowe: Informing him and allowing the spy to flew away?
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    . Sam: Don’t worry Rowe, come with me.
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    . As both exit through the door, CG and Zac who just returned were show on their face that they didn’t succed in stressing out who was behind the wheel.
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    — with Dave Sun.

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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 21 (TWENTY-ONE)
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    #MR_STEVE_RESIDENT*
    #45km
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    3:38pm
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    . Something ascended on the ground as a cloak was covered which smoke was coming out from its face, the unknown man stood up a minute and soon enough the veil uncover which revealed the face of a man was no other person than Jack, he smiled mischievous, this is the exactly place where his son loves training, he began to walks, soon enough Mr Steve approached him.
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    . Mr Steve: What did you want?
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    . Jack: I miss my son very much that’s why i came to seek you.
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    . Mr Steve: Seek me or looking for something?
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    . Jack: I’m your father Steve, don’t underestimate me, i cared so much about my family especially my son welfare.
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    . Mr Steve: Did you make mentioned of your family, whom you snapped to death, you know what you are so cruel, just get lost or i lose my temper.
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    . Jack: Are you trying to threaten me, keep in your f-----g mind and also know what am capable of doing.
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    . Mr Steve: Do your worst father but just stay out of my way because if you take your freaking foot and step on my way i swear that i will destroyed you again.
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    . Jack smiled as he looked around.
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    . Jack: Well I’m impressed, i can see that you’re not alone, you’ve company that is why you have the guts to opens that your smelling mouth and talk to your father.
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    . He looked, the demons has already surrounded but his eyes pace meeting with Ham, Ham whose was standing a hint away from him nod, without Mr Steve and others noticing it, Ham turned to go when his eyes met with Sam own who was now very furious but try to hide his angered.
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    . Ham: Jack is here, i can’t believed he’s so rude, he did that to his own family.
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    . Sam: Yes, it’s so soft to said that but deep inside your heart you seems he will have taken control over everything
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    . Ham whose stood not able to say anything as he walk away, the saying keep repeating in his head.
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    #MR_STEVE’S_ROOM*
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    3:50pm
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    . Walking down to his room few minutes a soft knock on the door, opening he was surprised seeing Sam standing, he was still very angry with his father.
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    . Mr Steve: Arrg(*in his mind*) I will have strangled him to death. He muttered to himself
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    . Sam: But it was not possible as you speak.
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    . Mr Steve: (*Surprising*) How did you know what i said, did you read minds?
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    . Sam: Yes, i did, just a gift passed to me, i want to tell you something.
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    . Mr Steve: If it’s about what’s happening, don’t bother yourself am used to it.
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    . Sam: No, it about we, can you read minds too?
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    . Mr Steve: What the hell are you! What did you take me for?
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    . Sam: Please just calm down, I’m just asking because i just realised that we’re not the only one standing in this room.
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    . Mr Steve: What did you meant?
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    . Sam: Secured everywhere now.
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    . Mr Steve: Are you ordering me?
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    . Sam: No Mr Steve just do before it’s too late.
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    . Mr Steve stood astonished staring at Sam, then he began to chant as the spell flow through.
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    . Sam: Good, did you read minds?
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    . Mr Steve: Yes, but i lost it because of the form am now occupied
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    . Sam: Okay, someone was sent on a mission to spy us, are you aware of it?
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    . Mr Steve: What, a spy in my domain, how is that possible, i secured and prevent that from happening.
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    . Sam: Because the person is not easy to stress out and he’s not whom he said he’s.
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    . Sam could see Mr Steve angered, he was furious as he started transforming to his true demon-form, he cried out louder which makes others demons rushes to his room, they try to enter but something was blocking them, they both stare at Sam feeling pity for him, after the transformation was successful, he turns looking at Sam who was now shocked and frightened.
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    . Mr Steve: (*With deep baritone voice*) Where is he?
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    . Sam couldn’t utter any word, try to speak out but found that nothing was coming out, he then feel sorry for Ham whose was now frozen, apart from Mr Steve being in human body, his demon-form is so horrible, ugly and scariest demon of all demons that he had came across.
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    . Mr Steve: (*With deep baritone voice*) Where is he?
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    . This time the voice was so heavily than before bringing him back from his thoughts.
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    . Sam: He’s at your back.
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    . Ham was not expecting that to happen as he quickly pinned Mr Steve on his neck to weakened him but instead he got the most surprised, he was filled with fear of apprehension, the wound quickly healed up immediately, he was shocked and afraid too, he recalled when his master was as a point of death, he told him that he needed some time to heal up by himself, he has passed it to his son, the question that bother him most was how he will escaped now, he was now terrified, Mr Steve has already secured the place, he looked at Sam who was smiling at him, he will have attacked him but he’s not his match, Mr Steve turn at once facing him with an anger all written in his face.
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    . Mr Steve: Ham you have failed your master.
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    . He get hold of him and smashing him hard on the floor, taking his full claws as he removed his head off his body as blood spilled out, he then removed the spell.
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    . Mr Steve: Thank you Sam for telling me on time, i didn’t expect that to happen sooner, Susan who just barged in couldn’t understand what is happening.
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    . Susan: What just happened here?
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    . Then suddenly an unexpected happened, Susan eyes turns as she tried to fought her way back, struggling but it seems like the power had already overwhelmed, her eyes changes as she stood up.
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    . Susan: Well-done son, you have success in killing my servant but forget that i am always one step ahead of you, you think you are in the right place as the right time, you think that you are doing things right or trying to stop me from achieving what i craft for so many years, killing him is just the beginning of everything, the battlefield has been drawn, you’ve made a huge mistake son, i will revenge my servant dead, remember we still have some unfinished business between us and am waiting for the day you will strike first when you absolutely did it, congratulations but you forget that you still have some family member that is lose from your grip, bring me George blood and his parents lived.
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    . Mr Steve was shocked, he knew that his father has taken over his daughter self using her to speaks.
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    . Mr Steve: What have you done, George wouldn’t forgive you if you laid your freaking hands on his parents
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    . Susan: Still then, we will meet again
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    . Ham’s body disappeared immediately as Susan became calmed, then she opened her eyes slowly and said.
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    . Susan: (*Breathing heavily*) Can someone tell me what the hell is going on?
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    #JACK*
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    4:00pm
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    . Everything that is going on, he knew that George was still breathing, it just some weeks he will wake up, he has to fulfilled what the unknown voice in the whirlwind said, he set up a plan which he fully knows that he will loose his servant, taking control of his granddaughter body was nothing because she’s his blood, he used her to speak directly to his son, everything he planned works, he felt sorry for losing Greg but he smiled that even though he lose him, he was using him to test if his half-brother is still powerful.
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    . Jack: I am the one that will attacked him alone.
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    . He smiled mischievously as he moved and headed to Mr Barry’s house, no matter what may happen, he has to capture his parents holding them as hostage, still they had to wake George from his deep slumber, he will willing give me his blood because of the love he has for his parents, what i need now is his blood, only the blood and nothing else, if he proved stubborn then his parents will be gone too, he remembers he still has 14days to lived.
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    #BACK_TO_GEORGE*
    #SECRET_CHAMBER*
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    . George quickly open his eyes as he stare at the surrounding, he then remembered that he is still in secret chamber, he hasn’t returned to his true form, he recalled what happens that he bust out, Greg will have kill him if his grandpa didn’t intervene, he feels a sharp pain in his ribs, he touches it feeling that the wound has not fully healed, he then heard some voices coming towards his direction, the door quickly opens as he closed his eyes pretending to sleep.
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    . The door opens which Joe walk in, he looked at George, walking up as he mixed some ingredient which look like a rotten leaf, he walked towards George as he applied it in the wound, few minutes Rufus walks in.
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    . Joe: So fast Rufus, what did you find out?
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    . Rufus: There is a problem master!
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    . Joe: What problem?
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    . Rufus: George’s parents is held hostage by Jack demanding for the blood, we’ve to waked him from dead.
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    . Joe: But we can’t wake him up, this is 14days for him to lived.
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    . Rufus: If he knows that the days is running out without the blood, he will killed his parents and also die as the spot too.
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    . Joe: I know that will be his plan, things are now getting complicated.
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    . Rufus: What will we do master! What about George?
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    . Joe: We can’t wake him up, not now especially his wound hasn’t fully recovery
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    . Rufus: George will be unhappy when he realised that his parents are dead.
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    . Joe: Then it is time to visit Mr Steve!
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    #MR_BARRY_RESIDENT*
    #35km
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    4:10pm
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    . Jack: Longest time no see Alice! (*Smiling*)
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    . Alice: (*Stammering*) Jack!

    — with Dave Sun.

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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 22 (TWENTY-TWO)
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    #BACK_TO_GEORGE*
    #SECRET_CHAMBER*
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    . George eyes widened wide, he carefully stand up from where he was laying down, he couldn’t believe his ears, he was now furious, why will he do that after snapping me to death, was that not enough for him, he must returned back to his true human body, he must stopped him no matter what.
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    . Rufus: I can see you are awaken?
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    . George looked at Rufus and then the door open which Joe walks in.
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    . Joe: It time to go home!.
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    . Standing by as he started enchanting some spell which start blowing him up, as both makes their way out of the chamber and down to the field, where the light stood shinning so bright and more brighter.
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    . Joe: See you soon George.
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    . George disappear from them.
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    . Rufus: Will he kept his promises?
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    . Joe: I don’t know, we have to reside a little patience as he can recover fully.
    C’mon let prepared, we doesn’t have enough time again.
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    #MR_STEVE_RESIDENT*
    #45km
    #GEORGE’S_ROOM*
    ****
    5:22pm
    ***
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    . George sneeze as he opened his eyes, here stood Mr Steve, Susan, Joe, Rufus and his own demons
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    . George: Why are all of you here at once?
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    . Without answering Susan embrace him so tight, lifting her face up.
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    . George: Susan don’t tell me you have been crying?
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    . Susan: I feel so empty without you, I’m sorry for putting you in this mess.
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    . George: It not your fault Susan, thank you all for being with me, am grateful.
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    . He then faced them, he remembers everything that happened.
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    . Mr Steve: Sorry to inform you son, Jack has hold your parents as hostage to get your blood.
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    . George: I know! What will we do?
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    . Kate: We needs a plans!
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    . George looked at himself and back to them is wasn’t their fault after all, they waited for him to be on his feet again, they really sacrifice for him, now Jack has hold his parents, he was speechless, it’s now his fight, he knew that they is nothing he will do, he feel sorry for his parents for putting them in this mess, without waiting to hear them, he zoomed away running to an unknown dimension.
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    . Mr Steve: How the hell did he did that?
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    . As all of them followed him but they lost their track.
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    . Sam: He’s now faster than before!
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    . Jane: Yes, did you have any ideas where he went to?
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    . Joe: His parents house!
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    . Mr Steve: Let put a plans, we need a good plan to stop him from giving out the blood.
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    . Joe: They is no need for that, he has no choice even though i warned about it, now let all of us headed to the temple and prepare ourselves, Steve you stopped your father the other time, then it’s the time you’ve to stopped him again.
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    . Rowe: If we stop him, he will wait for another centuries which is not fair.
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    . CG: We doesn’t have to wait, we kill him this time.
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    . Mr Steve: I will killed him myself, he’s my father and i know his weak point too.
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    . Rufus whose was standing speak up.
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    . Rufus: Good, what about us?
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    . Both turns to him as they examine him, they now understand who’s he, they didn’t notice his presence all this while, one of the giginatic creatures, they were scared, Rufus studying them understood what they are thinking.
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    . Rufus: (*Smiling*) Don’t worry i wouldn’t eat you, i meant no harmed.
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    . Joe: Yes, he can be trusted, but if Jack success, then he will be out of my control.
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    . Mr Steve: Let go, we doesn’t have enough time.
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    . A light pop out as all of them enter expect Susan.
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    . Mr Steve: Come on Susan.
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    . Susan: I can’t, i have to find him!
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    . With that Susan transform as she flew away, Joe faced Mr Steve.
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    . Joe: I can see she already makes her own choice.
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    . Mr Steve: She is afraid of losing him the second time.
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    . The light closed, few minutes late, Kane speed in, he was away, the house was empty, he placed his palm in the floor closing his eyes, everything was displayed to him, he stood up smiling.
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    . Kane: He’s awake.
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    . He flew away to the unknown dimension.
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    #MR_BARRY_RESIDENT*
    #35km
    #THE_FIGHT*
    ****
    5:30pm
    ***
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    . George: Leave my parents alone punk head
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    . Jack: Well well well here you are, how was your trip to the wonderland? I was waiting for you, how was it, you have what i needs give it to me and I’ll let them go.
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    . Kane makes his way down to Jack whose wasn’t expecting anybody as he hit him off guard sending him away, Jack stood up immediately.
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    . Jack: How dare you interrupt?
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    . Kane: He is my master.
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    . Jack: Back off now!
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    . Kane: And if i didn’t?
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    . Jack: You’ll face the consequences.
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    . Kane: Let see to that then.
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    . He speed as he get hold of Kane neck, dragging him upward, Kane dropped down escaping from his hands.
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    . Jack: (*Surprised*) How did you do that?
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    . Kane: (*Smiling*) I was like you before i give out my power for someone i love
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    . Jack: I can see.
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    . He rushed to hit Kane, who quickly dodged and pushed him forward kicking his abdomen which he flew landing him with a great thud.
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    . Kane: You bragged of your power which you’re not a fighter.
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    #FIGHT_CONTINUED*
    (<Back To George>)
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    . He went to untied his parents but a great force pushed him away, many demons creatures descended down as they begin to fight him, tearing and uprooting their head off their body, those demon creatures weren’t his match, he stood thinking on how he will be able to rescue his parents, they more he tried rescuing, the more the demon creatures attacked, he watches as he calculate on what to do.
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    #FIGHT_CONTINUED*
    (<Back To Jack And Kane>)
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    . Jack: (*Bleeding*) I don’t have any problem with you.
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    . Kane: I can’t leave either, you’ve seen your very match
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    . Kane threw his fist so fast(👊) towards Jack who wasn’t expecting that which send him a distance away from him as he smashed his back in the window, breaking the glass.
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    . Jack: It seems like you’re a real fighter, i believed you but what about it?
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    . Jack transform to smoke, which he rushed towards Kane, penetrating him which makes Kane sniff and fall down closing his eyes as he flew towards George parents, a force pushed George off guard.
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    . Jack: Your servant wasn’t even powerful than i expected
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    . George: But he still hold you up
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    . Jack: Did you think that i was really foolish of leaving your parents behind?
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    . George: You’ve problem with me, leave them out of this, you’re my uncle for Christ sake.
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    . Jack: I’m not your uncle, okay, get that into your d--n head, being a chosen one is just a trash, give me your blood or else
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    . Alice: Don’t do it son!
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    . Mr Barry: Don’t give this bulked head anything.
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    . Jack: Hmm, humans, i remember tasting your blood, it was so sweet, perhaps shut the hell off or i will drained them all.
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    . George: Okay fine, i will do it, i’m sorry grandpa, i can’t keep your promised.
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    . He cut himself as blood spilled out, Jack quickly rushes to him with a container as he collect more of the blood, he smiled at him and said.
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    . Jack: You’ve a soft heart, i know you will do it, thank you for making a great deal, it’s good to do business with you!
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    . He chant at the demon creatures disappear with him, George rushes to his parents whose was now limping.
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    . Alice: What have you done George, what have you done?
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    . George: I am so sorry mom, dad, i know I’ve failed everyone but i can’t let them have you, if i lose you as well then consider me dead.
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    . Their parents wept profusely.
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    . George: I have to go, i will make him paid for his wrong doing.
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    . Alice: You’re no match of him son.
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    . George: I will try my best, enough is enough!
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    . Mr Barry: (*Crying*) We love you son.
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    . George dashed off with a great speed, he was surprised seeing a great change in itself, he really changed, he study himself for a moment, as he headed towards the forbidden temple., Few minutes Susan flew in as she stopped and breathe, everything was broken. She looked and then saw George’s parents
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    . Alice: He’s not here, he followed Jack to the forbidden temple.
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    . Susan: Take care of yourself!
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    . She flew away with a great speed.
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    #AT_THE_FORBIDDEN_TEMPLE*
    #35km
    ****
    5:40pm
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    . Jack stood with his demons including teller Oba, bringing out the container opening the tub as he poured it out, the blood dropped in the ground as nothing happens.
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    . Jack: What’s happening?
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    . The whirlwind started blowing again, Jack ship away from the hint, in the whirlwind roses as he speaks out.
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    . Voice: You forced him, so the temple won’t open, don’t forced him, let him willing give you the blood!
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    . Jack: What?
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    . This Epic is written by Dave Sun
    The whirlwind is just playing him SCAM – 😂😂😂
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    Nice write up brn

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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 23 (TWENTY-THREE)
    SEMI-FINALE
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    # AT_THE_FORBIDDEN_TEMPLE *
    # 35km
    ****
    5:47pm
    ***
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    Voice: I’m just playing, sniff a little bit
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    . The ground crumbling, vibrating making a loud sound like an earthquake, all the demon gave out jubilating as the front door opens by himself which was a long hall, the inside was so deep and dark, Jack smiled, turning and facing his demons as he instructed them.
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    . Jack: Are you ready fellows?
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    . Demons: Yeah!
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    . Jack: Kill anyone you found there but leave my brother to me
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    . He face the whirlwind who was just standing
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    . Jack: Who are you?
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    . Voice: I am the keeper of this temple
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    . Jack: Keeper, how comes you are like this, i thought you were dead
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    . Keeper: Yes, and no, Joe fought with me and make me like this, i was the one who was controlling them
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    . Jack: Now am going in there to fight him, this is a chance for you to help me defeated him so are you in?
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    . Keeper: Of course, for my revenge
    C’mon.
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    . All the demons pulled themselves as the zoomed in, running, Joe and others was ready for action, the demons pulled themselves towards them, a great fight which both races were strong, they fight with all their might, Jack makes his way to his brother but Rufus blocked him, Joe run back into the chamber.
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    . Jack: Stop running like a coward brother, i will still come for you
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    . Rufus hit him as he flew away.
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    . Jack: Wow one of whom i will control soon, you are so special, i can see that you’re really powerful than Greg
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    . Rufus: you make him betrayed us
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    . Jack: What can i do, i don’t even know how to fight what i need now is much powers
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    . Rufus kicked him in his abdomen but Jack was quick as he get hold him by his leg swiftly and get hold him by his neck dragging him, Rufus headbutt him which Jack release him off as he staggered back and fall, he quickly somersaulting kicking him in his chest really hard which Jack coughed out blood from his mouth.
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    . Jack: I’m impressed, enough of beating me.
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    . Rufus: Do your worst Jack! I’m was waiting for this moment.
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    . Jack: You asked of it now It’s time to beat your master for me.
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    . Jack started enchanting slowing, the air blown sending a great breeze upon those giginatic creatures whose were fighting against him, he keep chanting, his eyes changes, his voice was that of a thousand words which was now echoing, the giginatic creatures started screaming, holding their heads, widening in pain as saliva pops out from their mouth, their claws gnashing as the spell taken place over their body.
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    . Jack: Now I’m done, Rufus go and killed my brother for me.
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    . Rufus bow in obedience as he zoomed away.
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    . Jack: Go and killed Joe.
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    . He shouted turning as once to faced the other giginatic creatures who were now matches to his side as they bowed down to him.
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    . Jack: Killed them all.
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    . The giginatic creatures speed towards Mr Steve with others demons fighting and reaping out their heads off their body, Teller Oba who has then notices that the giginatic creatures is out of control, rushes towards Jack to ended his life but got surprised when Jack s--t his long claws full into his abdomen which he start shivering and drop to his knees.
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    . Jack: I know you’ll want to kill me, die old friend, you were still my enemy.
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    . Teller Oba fall down as his eyes closed, the giginatic creatures tear off his body as they divided amongst themselves, speeding to Tellers Oba demons as they begin to killed them, then unexpected happened, George speed towards them smashing them, uprooting some of the giginatic creatures head off their body which their lifeless body is seen on the floor.
    Jack was furious as he flew towards George as both of the jam together sending a great wave which pushes the others demons with a great thud.
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    . Jack: The chosen one, are you coming back to end me, you’re losing George.
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    . Enchanting again which he get control of George body, who was trying to break himself free from his spell, his demon-form started to manifest, he struggles to break free, giving out a great cries, Susan who flew landed herself using her sharp claw to slice her grandpa eyes and making him lose control of himself, he let go of George who breathe heavily as he stood up.
    Susan kicked her grandpa away hijacked him up as she try to flew but was got break when Jack fully started chanting some spell again knocking his granddaughter down, he used his leg to smashed her but a wave pushed him back away from her, he looked up and see that George has fully recovered from the spell, he tight both his palm as fireball embed within, throwing it forward, he speed toward them not minding the wave between them, kicking two of them, he formed a long whip as he started beating both of them which they both cries out, it was painful for one to bears the pain of a sorcerer, George fainted immediately.
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    . Susan: Please grandpa stopped this.
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    . Jack: You’re weak Susan, i will have trained you, i can’t believe your foolish father hide you from me but now here you are pleasing me to stop what.
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    . Susan: I command you to stop this, retreat now.
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    . Jack: How dare you, sorry dear i don’t take order from a mere demon, you’ll have warned him not to messed up with me but still you are with him then i have no family as well.
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    . Susan: What’s the need of you doing all this?
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    . Jack: Did you want to know! To be powerful, having control and needs, i have been waiting for this trash to be born to continue my mission, what i craft for so many centuries.
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    . Susan: You’ll regret all this grandpa.
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    . Jack: Now i have someone that preach to me, this is your last chance, back off now or you’ll be killed with this trash.
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    . Susan: He’s not a trash, he’s more powerful than you, are you scared of him or what he will become?
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    . Jack: (*Ignoring*) I can see the spirit of love rendering to mannerless dogs, he’s mine, just step aside let me deal with him.
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    . Susan: Then you’ve to go through me first.
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    # FIGHT_CONTINUED *
    (<Back To Joe>)
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    . As predicted, Rufus was the only one that knows the place he will find his master, he was out of control, he couldn’t have an access to his true self anymore, they more he try to be freed from the spell, the more the spell tightened up, he felt stronger than before and ready to devoured anything that try to blocked his way, opening to the hall where he always have some fight with his master, he could scent his aura from a far distance, breathing heavily, his claws sharpened, his teeth were clattering,his huge body which were covered with clothes was torn half, he makes his way down to where his master was standing. Joe who knew that this is the only place where he has to die, he remembers giving him something to keep it, the more gnashing he made makes Joe to faced him.
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    . Joe: Coming for me?
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    . Rufus: Arrg………, Sha……sha ……uh…
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    . Rufus roar as he charged towards Joe who wasn’t moving or shaken by what was coming in his front, raising his hands to slap him, he held it blocking him, he struggled as he used his elbow to finish him, Joe saw that coming swiftly back jumping holding his hands as he bend which Rufus gave out a loud roar, Joe jump again hitting him in his balls which sent shivering down in his vein that he stopped get loose from his grip roam in pains, dropped down and stop breathing. Joe thought Rufus was dead went ahead to opened the door just then he heard a growl roaring.
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    # FIGHT_CONTINUED *
    (<Back To George>)
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    . Jack wave his hands as Susan was out of control, the whirlwind welcome her to himself, she couldn’t control herself, Jack who stood and watch smiled and said.
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    . Jack: I won’t have stress myself if I’d remember you were still loathing for whom to dealt with! Both of them are all yours.
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    . Making his way to George who was still consiouse, he lift him up throwing him towards the whirlwind whose the keeper received George warmly, he was glad seeing them suffering, Susan wasn’t helping at all, she couldn’t control herself out, her eyes fit on George body who was just swinging up and down, left and right, the keeper was just using him to play.
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    . Susan: George wake up.
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    . Susan shouted even though she is trapped as she been circled.
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    . Keeper: Shouting his name wouldn’t help as all.
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    . Susan: You can speak, you’re the keeper?
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    . Keeper: Yes, look how i am now, look at what I’m becoming.
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    . Susan: You deserved that, i will killed you again.
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    . Keeper: (*Laughing*) How! When i am killing you already, you can’t killed me, i am unstoppable.
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    . Voice: Not when you’ve messed with me.
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    . The keeper was now afraid, the voice, that voice, he knew the owner of the voice, it was now the beast himself, George has already open his eyes, his power was not even working on him anymore.
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    . Keeper: (*Surprised*) How is it possible for you to be under my spell without any infected and who are you?
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    . George: Who i am doesn’t matter right, now dropped her down.
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    . The keeper quickly obeyed as he remain calm.
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    . Keeper: Please don’t killed me the second time, i will served you forever, forgive my manners.
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    . George: Good, now you only obeyed me, closed it up, no one leaves this temple until i said so.
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    . The keeper started closing the temple slowly, George with Susan walk away down to the hall, few minutes before the temple closes, a fiqure as full speed flew in as the ground close fully.
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    Last Episode coming

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    Cant wait for the finale

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