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    Continue please…

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    Can’t wait for the final battle…
    Come and finish the story abeg…

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    THE FORBIDDEN TEMPLE (The Demonic Secret Place)
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    Author : Dave Sun
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    CHAPTER 24 (TWENTY-FOUR)
    FINALE
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    # AT_THE_FORBIDDEN_TEMPLE *
    # 35km
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    5:47pm
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    Continuation From Last Episode.
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    . The keeper started closing the temple slowly, George with Susan walk away down to the hall, few minutes before the temple closes, a fiqure as full speed flew in as the ground close fully.
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    . Jack: Wow, here you are, bastard son
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    . Mr Steve: Don’t make me angry, i will strangle you to death!
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    . Jack: Is that a threat.
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    . Mr Steve: Where is George?
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    . Mr Steve looks behind.
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    . Jack: That trash is with the keeper, fully on control.
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    . Mr Steve: What have you done to him?
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    . Jack: I have break every bones in his body, he won’t be able to be in his feet again.
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    . Sam who was fighting behind Mr Steve wanted to rush over him, he feels like punching him in his face very hard but Mr Steve quickly drew him back.
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    . Mr Steve: Don’t fall into his trap, he doesn’t care about anything.
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    . Jack: I care about my family!
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    . Sam: Your family then why are you hurting them.
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    . Jack: Arrg….. I don’t have any families anymore!
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    . Sam: What about the ones that you’re fighting with, you only care about achieving your power.
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    . Jack: Eh you, i remember you, you were the one that link the little secret i had with Ham, i will makes sure you pay for what you’ve done.
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    . Sam: C’mon and get me(*Laughing*)
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    . Mr Steve: You only talked of powers.
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    . Jack: And that’s what i’m seeking for, but now there’s some unfinished business some of us will loves to accomplish before heading to something else, so let hit the troll.
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    . Sam charged towards him, Jack throw his fist towards his direction, he quickly slide down beneath leaving Jack to held himself.
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    . Jack: Nice moves uh.
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    . He charged again, jumping and kicking him the same time in his back, hitting the floor which he rolled, Mr Steve jump and giving him a blow in his face which Jack found his face swollen then it vanished again.
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    . Jack: Not impressed, are you done! What give you guys guts that am so simple to fight? Now faced my wrath.
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    . With a twinkle of an eyes, he speed towards his son, sending him down the wall as he hit himself which he fall down, moving to Sam whose was just confused, headbutts him and getting hold of him strangle him to dead instantly, he moves towards his son whose was now panting, throwing him punch all over his body, treating his body using his sharpen claws.
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    . Jack: I told you aren’t my match, since you stand with them and fight me; your father, then i will killed you.
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    . Mr Steve: I’ve no father!
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    . Jack look at Mr Steve struggling to freed himself from him, he laughed out.
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    . Jack: You can’t even freed yourself from me, you’re dying slowly.
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    . Mr Steve: I’ll killed you again, i know your weak point.
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    . Jack: Healing, that’s why I’ve to stop you, even killing you now after all this is not your true form.
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    . Jack roar at Mr Steve who started crawling himself as he transform to his demon-form, still weak, Jack hold him by his neck using his sharp claws insert inside him.
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    . Mr Steve: arrrgggg……..
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    . Voice: Leave him alone.
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    . A stone was throw to him which hit his skull, which makes started transforming to his demon-form, unlike Mr Steve demon-form, his father’s own was the most ugliest and scared demon creature ever exist, he start walking towards George whose was with Susan as he makes his way up to them. Susan quickly closed the gap securing George, Jack hit Susan out of his way as she screamed out, laying down not able to move, George was not afraid of his demon-form, he has seen Mr Steve’s own so he is not scared.
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    (Author- Even me I’m scare, maybe i am not George ).
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    . Jack: I can see that you’re not frightened about what you are seeing.
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    . George: (*With a deep baritone*) Why will i be afraid of you?
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    . George quickly transform, his true demon-form showing and making his orbs which was attached shone more brighter, his eyes fires furiously. Jack was surprised, he knew every orbs attached to his body, he knew the rightful owner, if he can killed him, he will quickly taken the orbs for himself as he continues walking majestically toward him, George was ready to charged towards him but he heard another voice growling at his back, he turns as he seen Kane standing.
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    . Kane: Leave him, he’s not your match!
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    . Jack turns as he was now scared whom he was seeing.
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    . Jack: How is it possible that you are not dead?
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    . Kane: I told you before that i am like you, what about this.
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    . Kane own was so different as he transform.
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    . Kane: You can go master, i can handle him.
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    . George carry Susan to a safe place, coming back he seize Sam laying down, he carry him too, Sam was still alive, he was breathing slowing, Mr Steve stood up after fully healing.
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    . Mr Steve: Get yourself out of here three of you.
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    . George: Don’t worry everything is in order, the temple has been locked,
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    . Jack: What about the keeper?
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    . George: He’s on our side now.
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    . Jack: No…………!
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    # FIGHT_CONTINUED *
    (<Back To Joe>)
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    . Rufus has successfully injury his master who was now bleeding. George heard a growl as he understand at once that something is wrong, he charged followed Rufus, seeing Joe laying down, at the point of death, tear drip down his eyes.
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    . George: Grandpa!
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    . Joe: It’s okay, i only told him to do so, show me your claws.
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    . Without knowing what his grandpa is up to, he showed him his claws with Joe assist him sluting it full into his abdomen, he feels something like balls and he uprooted it, it was so brighter than others orbes.
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    . Joe: (*Spilling out black blood*) Take it, go get out of here.
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    . George: I am going to miss you.
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    . Joe: Yes I know and i will always be with you, go now Rufus is changing again.
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    . George ran out as he shut the door sooner he heard a loud sound like a mighty thunder which he wept profusely.
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    # FIGHT_CONTINUED *
    (<Back To Jack>)
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    . Turning back he ran with full speed, the reflection which was now showing like stars, dark shadow coming out from himself approaching Jack who was shocked, the power he was hunting for was seen in George body’s. His plan failed him this time, he knew they is no need to fight them anymore but he’s not given up as he continue and also awaited for his dead. George slot his full claws into his abdomen which his cries out as he moves back, he quickly turned into smoke as two also turns, Kane own was green, Jack was black and George own was different, it was like electricity being spark, Jack face was beam down, he knew that he was going down, he knew he will die, but he can’t die like a coward, even though there is no strength in him he must proved to them that he’s powerful, he ascended, he looked around, no matter he’s fighting them, he has had enough, he was losing, he couldn’t fight them as blood spilled out of mouth, his demon creatures were dead leaving him alone by himself, he will have surrender quickly but he doesn’t want to break the history that Jack who struggles to rule the gignatic creatures gave up and died like a coward, he seen as fire being cast from himself, he felt sorry for those he has hurts and kill so far because of his own selfish suggestions, he regret his action, those standing were his families, he knew he will never seen them again, the hours has come he will leave the earth for safety, his half-brother is dead, he’s the one who’s responsible for killing him with no reason, he burst out shedding tears and laughing at the same time as he said.
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    . Jack: Farewell! After all this, i didn’t die like a coward.
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    (*AUTHOR POV’S*)
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    . The fight is over, Joe is dead same with his half-brother, Jack cast fire burning into ashes, what now, just as Joe says, the spell is broken, the gignatic creatures are free again but times will tells when they will be out of control again and massacre humans lives, who will be the chosen one, guardians and protectors to protect the humans races, well till then as for me time will tells.
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    # TWO_MONTHS_LATER *
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    . George’s parents were so proud of his son, everyone were happy, everything went out smoothly, George was back from school; till one day………
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    # MR_BARRY_RESIDENT *
    # 35km
    # SUSAN_ROOM *
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    7:07pm
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    . George and Susan is seen staring at each other, their head moves into each other, their lips almost meeting when the door suddenly opened which was Mr Steve standing, he was surprised.
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    . Mr Steve: (*Stammering*) What were you guys trying to do?
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    . George moved towards the door as he get hold of the handle, he winks at Mr Steve pushing it with force, shutting the door, he approached Susan who was just smiling.
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    . George: I’m sorry Susan but i don’t want him f-----g know what we plan to do!
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    . Losing his sight, he wasn’t able to see through as Sam said. Mr Steve shouted from within, even though he knew that the both of them loves each other but he didn’t expect them to be having s*x, they are teenager for Christ sake, well a smile was seen on his face as he shouted the last time.
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    . Mr Steve: George don’t you dare try to kiss my daughter.
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    . George Smiles as their head moves for a kiss, their lips was locked up together, the romance aspect taken control as they continuing kissing, taking a step as they fall down on the bed.
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    . Mr Steve: Susan don’t try something stupid!
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    . Susan: Shut the hell up Mr Steve.
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    . Susan fired back at his father.
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    . George: I love you Susan!
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    . Susan: I love you too George!
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    . They chuckles as they continue kissing, George hand headed to her gown as he lift it up reveling her fresh laps, pulling it up, his hands moves inside, Susan holds him.
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    . George: Are you sure you want to do it.
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    . Susan: (*Scared*) Yes, take away my pride.
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    . George grunted in ecstasy as he eased stare into her eyes. George slowly pulled up her dress. His hand fell into her lap as his fingers began wandering over her panties finding his way to the ***** lips. With his other hand George started fondling her breasts with pleasure as they groan as they continue kissing. His fingers roamed over her clothing from her hardened nipples to her moistening cleft until finally George couldn’t stand it any longer. He slid her panties off her ankles, spread her legs and he began rubbing her ****. Vowel sounds a, e, i, o and u was heard( if you understand that, i swear you won’t make heaven) which George was pounding her really hard and she was also feeling it deep down as she responds with pleasure with makes George to keep increasing his speed going faster than before and more faster. He was f-----g her so hard it felt like the bed was going to give way, her c--t tighten as both screamed in pleasure. George finally couldn’t take it any longer. He shot load after load into her hot unprotected pu*sy as he fell on top of her.
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    . Susan: George did you just c*m inside me?
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    THE END.
    Thanks for reading
    There’s is love in sharing
    How was it?
    ©Dave Sun. June 2020.
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    EPILOGUE – FROM THE WRITER DESK
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    Just as what we wanted, just as life we are living is going on, endure we cherish or lose someone that we loves, don’t be selfish in your decision. Whether it’s from our own benefit or not. Wherever you are going, we always carry one thing along, we reconciled those that hurts us and that’s what keeps us together, your worst enemy can be your best friend, don’t criticize someone, it’s not that we aren’t in the same height, size, level or position you find yourself in, because they is someone who we believed and have hoped that doesn’t judge people no matter what (The Supreme One). So don’t judge people, landlord can turns to tenant, be wise in way of living, help people who are in needs. Thanks for putting smile on my face and i promised not to failed you all.
    Till next other time and i still remains # Etz_Kendoblast
    Pen name:- Dave Sun
    I deserve a kudos.
    Love ya❣️

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    next plz

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