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    The Open Secret .

    Episode Nine.

    Tina’s POV .

    My mind wasent stable both in the office and at home because I was actually expecting a good news.

    one day, while coming back from work, I drove straight to the chapel, packed my car at the gate and came inside the chapel.

    I began to talk with my father in heaven with tears in my eyes.

    ” O’ Lord, I know that your grace is sufficient and that was why I always seek for Your grace, you made me, put me inside my mom’s womb and had already ordained me, I know you never say that I will be a barren woman and what ever you say I will be, that is what I will actually be and that is why am kneeling in front of you, anoint my womb in order to carry my own child, father what ever my husband and I have done in the past, forgive us and give us our own child O’lord. ”

    I continued with my prayers with the tears in my eyes.

    I was there until a young guy came in, when I wanted to go, he stopped me.

    “Woman, your prayers are already answered, I saw a baby that is following you, this child is a child that will bring peace and fortune in your home, go home and bless the name of the Lord” he said while closing his eyes.

    “Amen, thank you so much sir” and before I could leave the premises, the young man have already disappeared into the thin air, I became afraid and left immediately.
    Two months on, there was nothing like a quarell between me and my husband, the kind of peace that was restored was so awesome and am really enjoying it.

    I became sick one day that I couldn’t even go to work, I was vomiting all day with a severe headache, I took a fever pills but yet I didn’t regain my health, by the time my husband came back I was lying helplessly on the bare floor, he rushed in immediately and carried me up.

    “Honey, whats happening to you? “He asked.

    “I dont know” I replied.
    “I think you have to go to the hospital please, you need a medical attention ” he added.

    “No, I will get well, just take me into the bathroom, I want to take my bath” I said and he did that immediately, he helped me in the bathroom and even prepared the dinner, that was the first time my husband is cooking anything since I got married to him.

    The next day, he woke up earlier, and also got the breakfast ready.

    “Honey, wake up, so that you can eat and bath, we need to go to the hospital this morning” he said.

    “No, Frank, am alright now, I just need to have some rest this morning, if it become worst again, I can find my way to the hospital, dont worry okay? ” I said.

    “Am worried, but if you say so, I will be calling you on phone okay? ” he said and started preparing for work.

    When my husband left the house, a thought came Into my mind.

    “Maybe I am pregnant ” I said as I looked at my self, even my breast are so full and my face was looking so bright even though I was really sick.

    “Should I go and get pregnancy strip test? ” I asked myself,

    later on, I decided to do that. After the test, two lines appeared which indicates that its positive but I decided to be very sure, I gave my husband a call and told him that I want to go the hospital, he permited me and also ask me to give him a call in anything he needed to know,.

    Royalhood hospital have become my favorite hospital and doctor Ransome is now my companion. I met him at the office after showing him the test tube and also telling him how I felt recently, he smiled and said.

    “I know that my God is too faithful to fail a faithful wife like you, the reason I took the risk to help you was how you told me that you will never cheat on your husband and I told myself that you deserve to be bless by God, now see your blessings around you” he said and laughed out loud.

    “Doctor, do you mean am truly pregnant” I asked again.

    “Mrs. Tina, do not worry, you will undergo a blood test Inorder for us to comfirm. ”
    Two hours later the result came out, guess what? I am seven weeks pregnant, it was like a dream but its a reality, can’t you see that God really answers prayer, my joy knew no bound, I rushed home and met my husband in the siting room, he saw how happy I was and he was the first person that asked me,

    . “whats happening? “.
    “Darling, just guess” I said.

    “Guess? Tina please tell me, whats this happiness all about? “.

    “Just sit down” he did and I sat on his laps, brought out the test result and gave to him, after reading it, he looked at me in a confused manner.

    “Are you joking with me or what? ” he asked.

    “Honey am not, we are actually expecting our own baby as soon as possible” I said while smilling.

    But his mood was what I can’t really explain, he was actually forcing out a smile, I know my husband and I know how he acts when he is really happy.

    “Its everything alright? ” I asked.

    “Yes darling, of course am very happy ” he said as he faked a smile but I know that all is not well, but as for me, I was so much over whelmed.

    Frank’s POV .

    “Is she actually joking? ” was the first question I asked my self. Can God really do this miracle or could it be what am thinking?

    Could it be that my wife have gone to cheat on me because she needs a baby?

    Many things kept running through my mind,I have to go And see my doctor, like seriously am not happy over all this, I will equally deal with my wife if he have gone outside to get pregnant.

    (Like seriously, men are terrible)

    TBC .

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    The Open Secret .

    Episode Ten (Final Episode.

    Frank’s POV .

    Doctor charles was a bit busy when I came into his office, I waited patiently for him and after ten minutes, he was done.

    “Dr Charles am really worried right now” I said.

    “Really? What is the problem? “he asked.

    “My wife came back with a news that she is pregnant day before yesterday, can that be possible? ” I asked.

    “Hmmmm, well, am not God, it can happen but that is only if you had undergo any treatment recently” he said.

    “No doctor, ever since that last time we tried that medications and it didnt work, I have never see any other doctor, talk more of taking a treatment. ” I replied.

    “Then, its impossible, your wife must have gone outside and get pregnant ” he said.

    “I thought as much as you did, oh my God, so my wife had the guts to cheat on me” I cried out.

    “My dear, I told you earlier to go and warn that doctor but you refused, you have seen it all now” he said.

    “I think I caused all this, I would have tell my wife everything, at least she will never had the guts to go out and bring in another man’s child, no I can never bear this, let me go and confront her” I said and when I was about to leave, the doctor stopped me.

    “Take it gradually like a matured man, if she denys it, force her to come for a DNA test” he said and I think he really made sense.

    Tina’s POV .

    Three days on, I bought some gifts and goods and went to the motherless babies home Inorder to show appreciation because I went there when I was yet to conceive, when I came back, I met my husband at home, I greeted him but instead of him to respond, he started shouting at me.

    “Woman, where are you coming back from” he said.

    “From the motherless babies home of course, I told you right” I said in a calm voice.

    “Really, the child is yet to come out and you have already start going for thanksgiving, you desparate woman” he shouted.

    “Really, since I became pregnant, you totally changed, I wonder what is really wrong with you, its there anything you are hiding or do you belong to anywhere that rejects baby” I said pretending as if I dont know what is wrong, of course I know but I want to watch him act fully.

    “You must be stupid, Tina, I have been enduring all your trash but in this one, your cup is full, who is the owner of this pregnancy? ” he asked and I laughed out so loud.

    “Wowww, oh my God, see question, you know what, mr. Frank, I have no answer to that question, DNA test will give you the answer to that question and after that, if the child really belongs to you,you will tell me the exact reason why you think that I can go outside and bring in another’s man’s child for you.” I said.

    “You think you can betray me, we are going for the DNA test in st Christopher hospital because I know that your useless doctor is behind all these.” He said and I became so annoyed.

    “Frank, you are so terrible, you see your useless life, very soon, your secret will be known, betrayal that calls another person betrayal” I said and when I was about to leave, he said again.

    “We are going for the test tomorrow morning”

    “Why not tonight? heartless man” I said and left him there.

    I called my doctor and told him everything, he told me that now its the perfect time to open every secret and that he will be right there at the hospital, I thanked him and cut the call.

    Ten hours later, our result was ready, and doctor Charles sat down looking so confused.

    “Frank, the baby belongs rightfully to you”he said.

    “But Charles, how come? ” he asked.

    “I dont know, am confused too”he said.

    “Wow wow wow, confused set of people, can you tell me why you are all confused? I asked why laughing, just then, doctor Ransome entered and they were all surprised again.

    Dr Charles offered him a seat.
    “Frank my dearest husband and secretive husband, can you please tell us why you denied your unborn child” I asked and he was looking at me as if am a ghost.

    “Doctor and a secret keeper, can you please tell us why you are also confused? ” I asked again and doctor Ransome started laughing.

    “Mrs. Tina you are really funny. Hmmm, Mr. Frank I know you can remember me very well, my fellow doctor, I am dr Ransome and also a personal doctor to mrs. Tina here.

    Frank, can you remember vividly when I came to your hospital and begged you to come for a test just like your wife suggested” he asked and I watched my husband nodded like an agama lizzard.

    “Since you refused to come, we decided to use these method, I asked her to get your semen for a test and she did that, that was how we found out that you had an infection which was preventing you from getting your wife pregnant.

    I decided to help your wife” he said and now they were looking so guilty.

    “My dearest husband, I can’t afford to loose you, and I can’t go for a divorce and I can’t actually remain a barren woman so I decided to help us through the help of Dr Ransome” I added.

    “If you can remember the morning I gave you a romance like never before, that was the day I collected your semen, am so sorry that I did all that, it was all because I want us to have a child, my recent threat with a knife was when I found out that you are having an infection that made you infertile, the juice I was giving you morning and night contains the medicine I bought #150, 000, Inorder for us to have a baby, am sorry my husband, all these was a secret that I kept but you started with a secret” he couldn’t let me finish, he burst out in tears and knelt down before me.

    “My wife please forgive me, I was the cause of all these, I never wanted to loose you, that was why I paid Dr. Charles to forge the result, please! ” he cried out.

    “I was really angry because you and the doctor turned around and said that I am the one that had infection if not for doctor Ransome, I would have believed that but thank God, the storms are over, I forgive you because I really love you and also because God have heard my prayers” I said and led him up, we hugged each other so tight.

    That was how peace and harmony returned back to my home as I gave birth to my set of twins and also two more kids and we live happily ever after.

    No more secret, we both became so open to ourselves because we already learnt that we can be of help to each other.

    The End.

    (Story written by Stella Chidera

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    Thanks for this piece of art

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    Wow, God is great

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    Thank you

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    “Nearly killing you in bed” means you ever enjoyed your sexual intercorse with your husband..!!???

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    nice ending!

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    very nice ending

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