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    Hay KayHay Kay
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    *Feels so good to be back home* I thought to myself as I walk through the fleet of people waiting for their relatives or prospective customers, it’s practically a chaos as the taxi drivers are all calling for passengers. I smiled to myself as I reminisced about how I have also worked here as a driver years ago before I got the opportunity to leave the country.
    “HayKay?” a heavily built man in a blue shirt asked looking directly at me
    “Depends on who is asking” I replied going my way
    “here” he replied waving a white handkerchief at my face
    “Good where is my ride” I replied as he led me to one of the taxi on the queue
    “here” he replied again opening the car door for me, the taxi is slightly different from others as its obviously just painted .
    “so, you’re not the talking type” I noted as I settled in the car ready for the journey with the seemingly boring driver.
    “less talk more actions” he simply replied concentrating on his driving as the journey continued in total silence.
    “did you notice that green Siena? It’s been following from the airport” I said after forty minutes of silent journey
    “I saw that but it isn’t easy shaking them off” he replied as he concentrated on his driving. Just then a shot rang out and one of the rear tyres burst with a loud bang bringing us to an abrupt stop.
    “Oh my God” I screamed as more shots followed shattering our rear wind shield. He tossed a pistol to me from the Gluck compartment as he stepped out of the car with an assault rifle he removed from under the sit.
    “Dessert eagle! how much I miss this kind of fun” I smiled to myself before stepping out of the car just then I got hit, right on my forehead, it was an headshot; I fell down, Dead!
    “Mr. Please fasten your sit belt we are making for our decent now” it was the pretty air hostess tapping me gently as I wake up from the horrible nightmare or daymare in this case.
    “Thanks” I said glad it was all a dream and she replied with a soft smile on her lips.
    … … …
    I stood devastated as my brother that is supposed to pick me up just told me he got held up in traffic, I returned my phone back to my pocket proceeding to pick a taxi.
    Just then I saw him, well built body, blue shirt, same hairstyle and standing beside an obviously newly painted taxi. “Bros, which way?” he asked looking directly at me and I went pale;
    “uhmm, Sorry thanks, Am waiting for ehm my brother” I stammered as I hurried away.
    “Am not dieing today” I mumbled under my breath.

    ©HayKay Writes 2020

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    BuloukemeBuloukeme
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    Hmm,if u enter dat same taxi dat u saw in ur dream ehn!u for hear ram

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    Hilarious

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    Hahaha fear fear

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    sheegokeyssheegokeys
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    @harkeem1, I do like ur writeup… Have you written any long story?
    Please Share with me if yes

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