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    Thriller night in my father house
    A story written by ademolar

    Episode 1

    My name is jimi Johnson,am 28 years old, am the only boy amidst the family of 5, which includes two girls(my elder sis,and my junior sis) and my parents.. at the age of 20 my parent sent me abroad to study law and life has been so good to me and my sisters, things were going smoothly as my parent provides all I need, I never for once get hungry of any kind of stuff because am born with diamond spoon in my mouth…

    After my education in usa, i officially based there cus my parent never give me the chance to return back to my fatherland..not until two years ago, when the sad news came like a thief in the night, I lost my parent in cold blood . Offcus I never expect it,but I have no choice than to return to the country..

    After the funeral, the lawyer and some family members announced my father’s will , though there is nothing much to share, the most amusing part of it all is. As rich as my father was, he built just one house and a pure water factory which later went bankrupt 3days after his died . we should have questioned him for building only one house, but we were too young and charmed by their wealth since we have access to easy life all is nothing but well..the lawyer announced..

    Lawyer : I greet you all … accept my condolences for the death of Mr and Mrs johnson, I pray the family will not see thing of such in jesus name.. 
     
    We all echoed a faint amen.
    Lawyer : my name is barrister jude, am Mr Johnson’s lawyer .. (he paused for a while and he continues) as we all know, Mr and Mrs Johnson’s death came just like a flash when we least expected it, and he did not give any will before he died.. so I will name his properties before I hand it over for the family to decide.. Mr johnson has only one building which is this one we are in and a pure water factory located at no 5 akamson street ikeja lagos state.. at this junction I leave it for the family to decide.. over to you sir

    He stoop up and left.. the head of family (olori-ebi) who was on sit didn’t took much time before he responded, saying he has nothing much to say about it, that we the children should share it amongst ourselves.. then he stood up and went out of the building..
    This left the three of us in total confusion, as we don’t understand what was going on. “How could daddy and mummy be so rootless to have built just one house with all their wealth? “i asked without demanding a response. 
    My big sister, aunty tinu replied

    Aunty tinu : jimi and kemi, please my advice is that we should just sell out the two building and forget about them, my mind is not free with those buildings.. I don’t trust daddy’s wealth, I see more hidden fact about their wealth..since we all have our own money, I guess we should not be bothered about that
    Me : sorry sis , I don’t agree with that and I don’t believe in rituals .. we are not going to sell this building, as far as I am concerned, if both of you don’t want to support me, you are  free to go..
    Kemi : brother jimi, please take it easy Aunty tinu is saying the truth. Pls let’s just sell out this building, I believe she wants the best for us..
    Me : shut up! What do you know? I don tell you say make you no de talk if elders de talk..

    Aunty tinu : jimi, calm down and listen to our advice..
    Me : sorry I don’t believe in your advice..
    I stood up and walked out of the sitting room , not knowing am going to face the worst nightmare of my life.. 

    To be continued

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    following…..


    LINK TO AVAILABLE EPISODES

    scroll down for episode 2

    Episode 3

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    Episode 6-7

    Episode 8-9 Final

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    Hmmm..Bring It On :s

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    bring it on bro

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    Seated!

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    Thriller night in my father’s house
    A story written by ademolar


    Episode 2

    The next morning I moved in and I settle my languages,I was enjoying the cool atmosphere, it’s cool to be back home tho, home sweet home. I said to myself.. I walked around the building and observed everything.  My phone rings, I checked and I saw aunty tinu calling . What’s she calling me for? I soliloquies..

    Me : hello! 
    Aunty tinu :jimi! Where are you?
    Me : am at home
    Aunty tinu ; jimi which home
    Me : my parents home nah, any problem with that?
    Aunty tinu : jimi shebi av warned about moving in, you no de hear word? En! Jimi why are you so stubborn!?
    Me : aunty me, calm down nothing will happen to me.. chillax
    Aunty tinu : jimi I warned you o.. I kuku talk my own, cus that law whey you go study don scatter your head 
    Me : aunty chill.. am fine bye.

    I hang off the call and walked inside..its close to midnight when I was sleeping, I heard something walking in my room, but I thought it was just an imagination. I stood up and look around but I saw nothing, I went back to relax on the bed, then I saw something strange and evil-like looking from the dark. I stood up and tune on the light,but still under the brightness of the light I saw something that almost stop my heart from beating , I tried to scream but terror already takes the sound before I make it. I fell on the floor and ran out of my room to the sitting room..

    I start to freeze as I felt some kinda  horror and cold eyes looking right between my eyes, immediately I fell down and and scream out loud. The fright was so much that I can’t even stand up and run, I have to crawl like a paralysed person.. I reached for my phone trying to dail my aunt’s number, but there was no network on it. I ran to the door,but It was hardly locked.

    I ran back to my room, but all this time I am yet to see the crystal clear picture of what was really going on.. then I saw 3 old women, they tied red cloth on their head and black from their waist to toe, their face was paint with white stuff best known to them. They were actually approaching me but I don’t have the guts to stay and take a good look at them before I dashed out of my room to the kitchen, I locked the door so hard that even an elephant can’t brake it loose..

    I was crying so hard with liquid stuff dripping from my nose.. what have I gotten myself into… yee I don die o.. I should have listen to my sisters words o.. who will help me now?.. as this was going on, I saw two black creature approaching from the eastern side of the kitchen, without no much time wasting, before I could spell JO am already in the bathroom.. 
    I locked the door so hard but this time it was ten times harder.. am so terrified cus no one is gonna save me from the beast that is about to strike , now I know it’s thriller and not just a thriller, but thriller night..

    As I was watching from inside the bathroom, something hold me from behind ,I fought really hard to set myself free of it but it’s more or less a fighting for ones life inside the belly of a killer python … somebody help me!!! I screamed for the 80th time, but this time all my rant seems so abyss and useless…the big question is why are they chasing me,and what was my offence.?.

    To be continued

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    Leme sit back and watch in 3D :whistle: @ademolar

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