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    RyderRyder
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    go rot in jail man

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    Ireoluwa EmmanuelIreoluwa Emmanuel
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    u did not regard her as Ur gf,,, but u got jealous bcos anoda man is s------g her!!!! now u are in a deep shit

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    Ireoluwa EmmanuelIreoluwa Emmanuel
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    I wish u will wake up and know its all a dream

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    episode 5

    She pulled out the knife and plunged it into my stomach once more. I pushed her off me, she hit her head on the table behind and collapsed.

    I got up, pulled out the knife slowly. It hurt like hell. ‘I’ve never been stabbed before’. I threw the knife away and tried to stop the bleeding. I could hear the police footsteps upon the stairs.

    I looked around, I needed a fast exit then I noticed the wind blew open the window. I walked towards it, D--n! It was a long way down. I’d bled all over the perfectly waxed floor.

    How was I gonna get down three storeys? The footsteps grew louder, My heart paced faster. I took a step backwards, was ready to jump. Suddenly I felt a force pull me back.

    I staggered and fell flat to the ground. She was holding the knife firmly. I hit her knees and rolled sideways watching her fall upon the knife.

    Blood began gushing out like a tap went on. I looked at the door, the door knob twisted.

    I drew myself up and raced towards the window, jumping out and landing on a car. The alarm system went off upon my collision.

    “Ahh,” I groaned, feeling my bones crack as I got off the car and began walking.

    I stared up the window. I could see flashlight, Surely the Cops have found her Corpse.
    I didn’t mean for things to end like that. This was one hell of a love story.
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    My name is Daniel, I used to think the world was black and white, now I realize it’s filled with shades of Gray.

    THE END
    Written by Praise Osawaru

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    RyderRyder
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    But u escaped after killing two people

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    RyderRyder
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    Worst ending

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    OlumideOlumide
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    Bad ending.

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    Ireoluwa EmmanuelIreoluwa Emmanuel
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    just like dat???? after killing two pple, u escaped and started seeing grey world

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