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    Prolouge
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    I stared blankly at the white board.I was hearing voices,voices i could not dechiper,voices that were trying to pass a message to me….Was it the voices i couldn’t dechiper or the message?,i really couldn’t tell
    “phoebe williams,are you still with us?,I asked the class a question and you are not contributing today”.,I heard the Guidance counsellor say,but my mind was no where near my body,i was reminiscing on him,the darkness in my life,how could he touch me,i remembered those times i told him no,i begged him,i cried but he still went on with it.I lost my pride my virginity because of him,i would kill him with my bare hands,i would make sure he pays for every moment he touched me,that is my promise,that is phoebe’s promise. All of a sudden it felt like i could feel every single moment in a flash,i could feel his presence as he entered my room,i kept telling him “dont come close dont come close he wouldnt listen,he kept coming towards my bed ready to grab the already naked me

    “phoebe are you there,phoebe what is the….” mr Jey the guidance councellor tried to asked while coming closer to me to check up on me
    But i never saw him,instead his face was replaced by my tormentor,the one who appeared in my dreams all night
    then suddenly as Mr Jey Got closer to me i whispered enough to be heard “don’t come close” “you said??”he asked again
    “dont come close!!, dont come close,dont come close!!! From a whisper to a scream i kept shouting” Mr jey with some other councellor as some other student tried to calm me down but it was futile “please dont let him hurt me again,dont let him do it again please please” i kept screaming
    Mr Jey stood there confused,he wondered who i was talking to..who i was telling not to hurt me again,was i hallucinating or visualising all this for real??…..D--n he couldnt tell
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    To be continued

    Author’s Note:This Is my first story in here..and believe me it’s very addictive once you start you wouldnt want it to end..read on and enjoy…
    Feedbacks and critics are greatly appreciated thanks


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    WATCH OUT!! FOR SEASON2[/b]

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    Seated

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    First to comment

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    I was here

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    ride on

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    this will be a nice towi

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    Ok

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    Pls mention your friends

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