• HI GUYS, THANK YOU FOR READING. PLEASE, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THIS STORY, THE WRITING STYLE, THE SETTINGS, THE LANGUAGE, THE PLOT AND ALL. PLEASE, JUST HELP ME CRITICIZE THE BOOK CONSTRUCTIVELY OR OTHERWISE. IS THE BOOK WORTH PUBLISHING ON HARD COPY?

  • The screeching of metals against the edges of the stone door echoed noisily. The slaves constrained in bars of specking chains were the first to pass through the gate, and the others followed behind silently. They had been walking for hours in a tunnel of stones but the entry into the gate, introduced an open environment of sand. One of the hefty…[Read more]

  • The Regent

    Jeff followed Vanessa into the lobby whose emptiness is a twin to the room he had been sleeping in. The rigidity of the wall was like that of a shell and its foundation, looking as though it had grown out from the bedrock of mother earth itself. The floor was neat and sparkling, almost as if they were punished. It was obvious, intense…[Read more]

  • LEX

    Jeff rolled uncomfortably on the bed but this time taking his face away from the walls to face the entrance. The spring on the poorly constructed bed had exceeded its elastic limit making his weight to sink inside. The bitter taste of the medicine had long turned sour and was still somewhere in his taste bud, but it had done a great job in…[Read more]

  • “Thank the gods you’re here. I have been searching the world for you.” The prince panted haggardly like a swimmer who hadn’t seen the shore line until now. Nothing about his posture was welcoming, the crease lining his young face, mirrored the worries that were obviously building inside of him. For the wealthiest and the most adorable young man…[Read more]

  • ZONE-3

    Flashes of lightning brightened the dark smoky atmosphere and the drizzling of the rain, cloaked with the sooth that suspended in the moist air. There were distant screams of pain and anguish. The whole place was desolate and the heat of the burning buildings was not affected by the lightning or the drizzling rain.

    Jeff coughed himself up…[Read more]

  • My foe my friend

    The morning swerved into the hallway with a misty air that suspended around the light of the sun, which tubes in different numbers from the brick wall. Even though humid, the air smells fresh, pure and peaceful; its frigidity would have been welcomed if it was not clothing Matt’s skin with goose bump.

    As empty as the hallway…[Read more]

  • THE SILLY PLAN

    Its two days now.

    Forty eight hours away from the last visit to the teacher’s block.

    No sign of Jeff or Ema. No news from Zone-3 as to the way about of the two. Raz, Leonard and Sandra keep telling them to calm down that everything was okay. But they seem not to understand. Plants were turning from green to yellow, the sun’s…[Read more]

  • Ada sat down on the cold morning shore of Ogba River, with her clay pot underneath her morning glowing skin. She wished she could be angry about how things had turned out, but she wasn’t; she had been angry long enough that being angry now was quite difficult. The sadness within her wasn’t even enough to pull tears from the well of the lachrymal,…[Read more]

  • The inquisitor

    “Watch where you are going junk-ass” Isaac bellowed.

    “Am sorry” Matt apologized and walked to his seat without looking back at Isaac or his bunch of friends. He carried a tray, bearing his breakfast of bread and coffee. He was sure Isaac had bumped him on purpose but the thought of Jeff and Ema, and the occasional quake of the…[Read more]

  • Anthony replied to the topic ADA PRIDE OF Alaocha in the forum Stories (series) 4 weeks ago

    Thanks. Next chapter coming up soon

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  • BELOW IS THE MAP OF ANADAN

  • TROUBLE CONTINUES

    Eleven, oh thank God, at least it shows I am moving towards the right direction. Jeff heard himself say as he watched the flame card with a haggard, yet hopeful looks. His eyes had long mastered the rhythm, boring as it may seem, he had no choice but to keep staring, as a close perusal made him discern the additional beep, the…[Read more]

  • MORE TROUBLE

    “I can’t believe we travelled all night” Jeff said, noting the delight growing in his stomach and the gladness in his eyes to blink the gold light again. Refreshing breezes were drifting over them, driving wide the horrible odor from the tunnel. The field of green spread through space, as far as the eyes could see, even the…[Read more]

  • THE TUNNEL

    “What happened” Ema groaned in the darkness. Her ribs cage aches from the fall, her left hand going numb with the teeth of pain and her vision all blur. For some passing moments she found her lungs struggling for air, no matter how turgid and dry. Her head was heavy as though she bore the burden of the world. She could taste mud…[Read more]

  • It was the dimple on those smooth cheek and the way she speak that he admired the most, those whistling words that are always soothing to a grudging heart. No, that was not it; she had acted rudely last night when he presented his humble proposal. Okay, maybe it’s a far-cry from her smile, maybe it’s the mortar of kindness lurking in her actions,…[Read more]

  • THE HOLOGRAM

    “What was that?” Matt asked worriedly, coughing himself up to his feet and trying to find his bearing. Dust rouse all around, spreading to the four corners of the earth.

    The others were also coughing, with uncertain looks etched on their faces. The whole place had quake, it was as if the earth was slammed by a mighty force.

    “Oh my…[Read more]

  • Hi guys, I still want to thank all of you for diving into this adventure with Jeff and his friends. I really appreciate you all for your time and your comments. Coolval is still new to me, am still checking my feet. I really wish I could reply each of your comments. Anyway I just wanted to say thank you.

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